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you'll have to excuse me, i'm not really familar with the star wars universe, so there is a bit of stuff i can't really comment on here. i'll try to give you some suggestions on stuff that don't have to do with star wars, but if for some reason something i ask is covered by the canon, you're...

heya! pardon me if you aren't finished just yet - i figured that you are, and just haven't added his history yet. if i'm wrong, feel free to throw me in the ocean. and know these are just suggestions and inquiries - i'm only giving them to you based on what i know, so feel free to argue with me...

really? huh! before you told me, i had just assumed you were an english speaker who had forgotten to read through what'd you'd written. you do pretty well with more complex sentence structure, and you do well to not make it too stiff, so i'd say you're doing pretty well on a technical level...

no problem! and don't worry about it! i honestly never would have guessed you were not natively english, honestly, as the mistakes i pointed out were ones i could imagine anyone making. (￣▽￣)ノ

it's no problem! and i think so, too! the changes you made covered everything i mentioned exceptionally well! i do have small further suggestions on things your sheet might benefit from, but honestly, your sheet is good to go in my book! i'll split hairs one last time, and then i'll leave ya...

no problem! i'm really glad to hear that! ー( ´ ▽ ` )ﾉ i didn't really think to mention in my post, but i think i should also mention some of what i do really like about her is her. one of the things i liked especially is her being such a strong leader - a lot of her character's leadership...

it's a relatively short sheet, with nothing immediately obviously wrong. it seems like faint praise, but i do truly mean kudos. most of everything else i have to say is nitpicking and a suggestions on potential improvements, but you're free to ignore or challenge me on them, as it's been awhile...