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  1. Millfall

    Please Give Me Feedback!!

    They don't need to read it. They should just absorb it on a spiritual level.
  2. Millfall

    Please Give Me Feedback!!

    It's beautiful. What font it is?
  3. Millfall

    Please Give Me Feedback!!

    Well, given how her name is literally Epstein.....
  4. Millfall

    Please Give Me Feedback!!

    First, formatting the block of text into something readable would go a long way in making sure people actually read it. Second, you focus a lot—and I mean a lot!—on her physical appearance. While skimming over her personality. Also, using words like "edgy" isn't good in character descriptions...
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