Hey Nerdy,
I think you misunderstood my post. It's not satire at all! This is my genuine original oc. I did not include typos because I thought that that would be a poor example of my writing? I don't make typos. Also, my target audience is not middle schoolers. If you check out my partner...
Millfall,
As per your suggestion, I broke the large paragraph into several smaller paragraphs.
I also changed the font into something more cute so its fun to read and made the text bigger so it's easier to read. I tried to replace "edgy" with better, more descriptive words. I know I spent a...
Hootle, friend
Thank you for your honest review.
Epsteinia Bloodnight is half-human, to answer your question. She’s the daughter of the angel Lucifer and the princess of hell. Which explains the forked tongue, pointed tail, and insatiable bloodlust.
I think you are absolutely right. Epsteinia...
Mediae, my friend,
I respectfully disagree that there are any contradictions in my character at all. She can be married without having fallen in love. Matthew McConaughey may be her soulmate but since he’s like fifty and she’s only twelve I think it’d be kind of inappropriate if they were...
Please give me feedback!!
I’m always looking to improve my characters and you can help by giving me some pointers! Let me know if you think there’s something I should change or tell me if you like my character! (This is my first time posting one of my characters, I’m new to this, please be...
Dragonborn1,
I don't think it's too edgy at all! Developing the personality of your character can be challenging-- but it can also be great fun! You may find that once the ideas get flowing the different aspects of your character's personality just find a way of fitting themselves together. But...