I do not mind a hmm, but the responses I got have been relatively lukewarm and without meaningful correction or approval. I don't quite know where I sit.
Due to the nature of his power, it's not as if they know they are under its sway mainly, and the thoughts will occur to them naturally. It's not like they are forced to follow his command but rather what he says seems sensible to them and, in fact, like the only logical conclusion. But losing...
By taking the homeless population i mean he will employ them at his shops and make the most open use of his power to rehabilitate them into model Citizens. Having their lives taken over and improved from an outward view will affect them mentally as he gives them the most commands they can't...
My design will be him taking the homeless population and being quite docile and even friendly until challenged then he will use indirect methods such as Sabatoge and third-party assassination by his minions who aren't directly tied to him to deal with foes
Hero or villain or neutral: Villain
name: Dolce Brew
Code name: Mr. Bean
Age: 21
Gender: Male
Appearance:
Powers/abilities: Caffein addiction
Those who drink three cups of his coffee become his thralls. Entirely subject for his commands even onto death. These commands can be passed down...
Don't matter to me, maybe if they ever talk that can cause tension because he pretty much only goes by his family name
Though the fact he puts it on the signs of every Cafe he owns and his small chain of stores is rapidly expanding and gaining popularity might bother someone who doesn't like...
I check post length. 15 hundred words is nothing to scoff at mine is merely a little over 2/3s of your response to mine alone! Much less what you wrote out above