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This sounds exciting! I've never actually entered any kind of competition, so I'd love to give this a shot :3

Thanks both!! I'm definitely cutting so much, I typed way too much unnecessary stuff to fill the word count for my assignment, neglecting the actual writing in the meantime. Now that all my assignments are done and over with, I get to actually write without worrying about word count and all that :)

Thanks for the amazing help! ^^ I'm gonna edit the story soon and possibly repost :)

Thanks!! I just edited a small bit of the ending in the new version, the ending bugs me a bit personally.

Very unstable draft of a sort of short story I tried to work on considering memory and sanity. This has already been written in two different ways, but I like neither, and I was wondering if someone could help me out and pinpoint the issues that might cause my unease about both pieces. :) I'm...

Amazing, thanks for taking the time, both of you! ^^ Going to work on my next project soon, a collab with an illustration artist, for my course. Hopefully that will go well, be interesting too, and I can create the portfolio I want to have.

Thank you so much for taking a look at my piece! Although it's submitted for my course, it's never too late to give feedback, so I'm very curious to hear your suggestions. ^^ I'm really happy you enjoyed my little short story, most of all, it means a lot to me. I'd love to work on it some more...

I'm sorry I haven't replied! I hadn't seen your reply before I just noticed you featured my story in the Monthly news, and for that: thank you so much! It means a lot to me and my occasionally lacking self confidence. :) But, back to the previous comment, of course I wouldn't mind! I'd love...

Thank you so much for replying! I followed your posts around this forum a bit and was very interested in your thoughts because they seem like the constructive criticism I need. :) Because of the limited word count I had to work with, as well as a rather short amount of time, I'm well aware...

Oh thanks! It's probably a leftover typo, I usually change sentences which can mess up the grammar and logic. I think it used to say 'like a cobweb' but I decided against it. I know, I wish I could've made it longer, but unfortunately I'm already at my max wordcount. I'm not much of a short...

I'm currently writing a short story on death, set in a dystopian type world. I need to hand it in tomorrow and I need to redraft it, so I was hoping to maybe get some help here! :) If you find any mistakes, inconsistencies and other problems I'd love to know, but mostly, I hope you'll...