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Twilight looked at all the ponies in the room and then to FlutterShy. "Just use your animal communication skills to make them stop. Or use the stare." FlutterShy looked at Twilight angrily, but at the same time, very shyly. "Remember the last time I did the stare when you told me?" "Oh...right."...

Twilight paused for a moment before nodding in understanding at Sweet Heart's words. She looked at Blue Star then back to Sweet Heart. "If the princess has ordered for a helper then we must respect her decision. I believe that Sweet Heart may have a place amount you all." With those final words...

((Ok, so here is what I have for this. I'm going to assume that they came back to the castle, and in terms of SinderLine? She's sneaking around in the castle with her moths. Just to clear that. XD)) Twilight Sparkle was in the middle of speaking with the old Mane 6 when she heard the front...

((Ah. I will read over it and decide on an appropriate response.))

((Clue me in, what happened up to this point.))

((I apologize for not responding like I should, but finals are here and all my time has gone to studying,))

((Yes, another problem. Hopefully it fixes itself. Otherwise I'm going to need to do some serious modifications to the device))

Twilight was shocked at the sudden change and, out of reaction, spread her wings,

yes, i am aware, that is why i said to pardon the last post.

((Please excuse the last post. i am trying to do this from a different media and it isnt working...))

Twilight watched as Blue Star left the room, looking rather distraught. She didn't stop him and listened to the Alicorn and young Unicorn talk before stepping "This little meeting has been dismissed, so

Sinder watched as Obraxxis left the castle in an instant. She didn't seem bothered by it and went back to her corner where she rested in peace away from Twilight and Night. She didn't sleep of course, just curled herself into a little ball (similar to a cat) and began to think to herself on the...

Twilight looked over at the pony that had just entered the room. She approached her, motioning that every other pony can relax and move as they please. "A letter from Princess Celestia? Thank you, Sweet Heart, was it? We are happy to have you join everyone! We all welcome you with open hooves!"...

Twilight looked at the Alicorn before her and shook her head. "No, I am not mocking you by any means, but I am asking you all to do this because the elements will show your unity through some sign." Sinder looked away from the Alicorn and glanced at Blue Star, then at the once-were mane 6...

Ok, so I felt like I just read a novel. Lol. XD But the character is good. I like the idea of "The pony of Light" and how it is similar to the "pony of shadows". I think it will definitely be a cool character! I agree with everyone on the weaknesses, but as you say it is a 'work in progress' I...

I appreciate everyone adding their own creative criticism! But, I would like to ask everyone to pause on posting anything for now so I may have time to read the character for myself and give feedback!

Twilight looked at every pony in the room and began to speak. "It seems that all the elements have found their way to the new wielders. I need all of you to stand together." Twilight motioned for everyone to stand in a line next to each other. She didn't know exactly what this would do, but she...

To be honest, I almost forgot about that school. And now?

No problem, and I'm sorry if it seems like I don't like your character at all. I honestly think it is a nice idea for her to be a helper and having such a smart helper will definitely prove to be useful, especially if the characters might not know how to handle a situation. It's just Celestia as...

The only thing I would change is make her a prodigey of a DIFFERENT PRINCESS. I see so many people wanting to be the students of Celestia and it bothers me. Making her a student of a different Princess would help to make her more original! After that, no, there is nothing that you need to do...