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    Other Got a story idea that I'm dying to write but just need some help developing it

    Hey! As the title says, I recently thought up a really good story idea but I'm still recovering from writer's block so I'm hoping by posting this thread I can get some small ideas that can get me going with developing it! The basic plot is that there's a girl named Melody and she's the sister...
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    Other Got a writing question about astory I'm writing

    Hey there! I've recently started trying to write a mafia related story, Hi him having a small issue with it. The story plot is basically a very important person has been murdered and the authorities suspect that it's one of the seven local gangs that did it, so they get two agents to go...
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    Other Looking for some help in developing my story idea!

    Hi there! I have a story idea that I really wanna make into a proper story but I'm having really bad writer's block atm so I'm looking for some help! Basically I have a character who's a teenage detective. He loves with his 6 brothers and his girlfriend who try to help him with cases. And I...
  4. CookieCrim

    Story Looking for feedback on this story chapter

    Hey! I've recently started writing a new story and it's my very first time writing stories with fight scenes in it, so I just wanted to post the first chapter on here and see if it's okay! I don't get offended often so if you see something that I could improve on in this chapter, please let me...
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    Other Looking for a bit of help getting started on a story

    Hi! As the title says, I have a story idea and need a bit of help getting some ideas and starting it off! Here's my idea: It takes place in a world where vampires are controlling the human race and using them as their livestock. The humans are trying to fight back against them though. A vampire...
  6. CookieCrim

    Other Could really use some ideas for a story I wanna write

    it's fine! Thanks so much for your ideas, they've really got me thinking!!
  7. CookieCrim

    Other Could really use some ideas for a story I wanna write

    Oh wow, I love that idea!! And sure, I'll tell you a little about each I have one character who's a real spoiled, bratty person. She's the type of person that would steal a style or music style from someone else and then demand that they change their style because she has it now. She's eating...
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    Other Could really use some ideas for a story I wanna write

    Hey there! I've had this story idea for a while now and really wanna write it but can't come up with any ideas for it, so I'm posting this thread to see if anyone could help me out with getting started. The story is about various different characters who are all popular idols. They all go to...
  9. CookieCrim

    Other Lookingfor help with writing a story I started

    Thank you so much for your tips and advice! Iok take on board everything you've said and make this started much better! You're advice has really helped me out, so thanks so much (:
  10. CookieCrim

    Other Lookingfor help with writing a story I started

    thank you so much for your adivice! This is my very first time writing a mafia story so that's why there were some errors I didn't notice. I was trying to make them sound formal, but I'll take your advice and make the dialogue more natural. Thank you again, your advice has really helped me...
  11. CookieCrim

    Other Lookingfor help with writing a story I started

    I'm currently writing a mafia story that I've been developing for months now. I managed to write a started for it but don't know how to proceed. I was hoping that someone could read what I've written and maybe give me a few ideas. here's what I've written so far The door flies open. Ayato's...
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