@SkyGinge Thanks for the feedback!! This was quite helpful, and I'll try and keep from overwriting in the future. I was honestly completely unsure of what I would be going for when it came to plot/content; this was entirely unscripted. I just wrote down whatever came to me as I looked around my...
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<strong>Make a wish.</strong> Write something that begins with a character throwing a coin into a fountain. <em>This doesn't involve wishing, really; in fact it is just a plotless excuse to work on describing scenery. Feedback appreciated for if I got the scenery... well?</em> </p>
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I get too interested in my characters' inner world. I am the most introverted kid I've met in my life, so I've gotten used to it, but it means that the best conflict I can make is internal. This generally doesn't work well in roleplays unless everyone's a mindreader.
As an extension of this, I...
Name: Trilling Call
So called for the oddly rolled sounds of his chirps, which always come out sounding half-purred.
Age: 16 months (fully grown at 24 months)
Still considered a youngster more than anything else, partially because he's still in the midst of his adolescent growth spurt and is...
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The cave was small, almost untouched. It was not big like the flock's home, and it was mossy and near a stream and smelled nothing like humans but it was still wrong. It sounded wrong. The stream-sound should be talked over by rowdy games of chase-me catch-me! or drowned out...
Yes, innocent idealist child. She seems so sweet! (oh god the alliteration) And child logic is amazing, everybody knows that and has experienced it before.
So, I guess I'll begin the RP now! Trilling Call is really lonely here. Bring on the 10 year old child!
Yeah, that makes sense. Pretty introverted dad, very chatty child, kind of a disconnect. It's just like with me and my dad!
Good kid, please protect the grey fluffbutt harpy from your prejudiced villager pals. Seriously though, the harpy did go on a (first) raid on the village and tried to...
Mm, neat. So if you're the father doesn't that mean you will be talking to yourself some of the time? The kid has certainly got a gob, she won't stop around her dad I'm sure.
What would happen if the other villagefolk find the harpy independently... There would be screaming.
Alright, then undescribed characters could just go on as one-shots, unless it's revealed sometime that the voice was actually that of a more important person. DId I get that right?
Very nice idea! You mean I could play things like crowds and the priest and other kids?
And Harpy health be a very normal question for the kid to ask after she wondered if clouds had horses to help them move around in the sky like their village. Priest will have their hands full with this one.