I don't think I'd change much of anything and I am also fine with you playing the demon brother. I am curious to explore the lore about this plot though, two brothers, one god and the other turned into a demonic wolf that separates each other from the bonds of kinship by morality's rule of light...
See, I've tried doing such a thing to the story, I just never found the glue to piece it all together. I was hoping that writing it with someone else would have the same tackiness that it did when my brother was telling the story and I would and tidbits here and there. But by all means, if you...
Y'all will have to bear with me with this, I've been searching for a way to explain this idea and I've decided the best course of actions is to just simply, write it out. So here goes nothing!
Some time ago when I was just a boy, my elder brother would tell me his own versions of a story that...