Recent content by eldorado

Oh sweet lol I was getting worried too! Glad this is still gonna happen!

@Taska Vilna No worries if my questions are irrelevant to the plot, please disregard if you deem any of these unnecessary! What's the theological view on the end of man in this? a la westminster confession ("to glorify God and enjoy Him forever), or is there none known (the purpose of Highest...

Heh. I suppose. If his every strength is weakness, then his weaknesses and his strengths are his least and his greatest.

We got some duality going on here :0

That's some high tier anime material right there.

uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuh i dont know why i did this but here you go lol Questions- 1) What is justice to you? Justice is outside of my own perspective, observable by everyone. We all have a subjective perspective of justice through our conscience, which is our gut feeling that...

How interesting!! But where's the theology section?

Oh so are you looking for criticism/pointers? What parts? What are you having difficulty with?

I like medieval society :) this is nice.

Thank you for your labors, Taska, but we dare not accept flattery. It is a trap for the heart. :) Nice, I'm really looking forward to your character. Yeah and hopefully the manipulative character would serve as the device that ended our conflict and brought us together as brothers and...

Nice, another new guy :) but how could you choose evil over good? A most unwise choice, darkhearted one. @Rusty of Shackleford Hey, I've been thinking through Solomon a bit. There are a couple key devices I'd like to have in his life. 1. For his motivation to seek wisdom and mistrust his own...

Yeah it is :)

Ohhh gotcha. Sounds like a strong call to action -- a revenge story? Would you be down to compose something like a description of the main plot, all the stuff you're pretty solid on, and the areas you want input in? I probably couldn't help a lot but since you're passionate about your plot...

Just gonna drop these for good openings to a good tale: https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poems/43926/the-canterbury-tales-general-prologue https://www.poetryintranslation.com/PITBR/English/GawainAndTheGreenKnight.php#anchor_Toc178583488...

Oh i could just use paint to smudge out a spare zero :p