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Could you expand just a wee bit more? Basically, if you have to rank his proficiency; amateur, beginner, moderate, advanced.


If this was a thing, most fantastical races would have mostly been wiped out. Think of the small pox epidemic when Europeans first came to the Americas. However, as it's not written in canon lore than the fantastical races have been wiped out or reduced in number by disease, what you've written is fairly extreme. You can say they've died from an illness and just leave it at that if you want, but if 'diseases of the modern world' were such a huge threat, SMITED wouldn't really exist since it'd be placing races to high exposure to diseases that could kill them.


So, if he is currently 90 and he left home at 37, that is 53 years ago. He wouldn't have wandered around opening during this time because SMITED only revealed the existence of magical races 5 years ago. Even after the revelation most fantastical races don't go roaming around mundane-dense places because it's still recent that they were revealed to the world.


Why did he leave home? I thought your expansion might have gone over this because there was never a reason given really and it makes little since to the world lore for a fantastical being to leave their home territory without good reason. There is safety in staying with their own, so why would he leave?

Also, there are still quite a few errors here and there. My own typing is probably a mess as I am trying to reply quickly since I don't have much time, due to having to entertain house guests.
Okay I have hopefully polished off the rest of the items that needed fixed or explained more. I apologies for the errors that may still be there I do use my iPhone to rp so it may be sketchy but I do read back my posts and edit before I post.
 
But he soon found the world to be cruel to his kind. Calling him "different" and "unwelcome". Being thrown from places or told to leave because they deamed him to be dangerous. A monster compared to the average mundane. Soon after he walked the path of a lone elf.

You still missed the point brought up multiple times. He would not have exposed himself to mundanes or even be allowed to, not until SMITED revealed the fantastical races. :\ He can wander the world alone if you want him to, but he wouldn't walk around mundane areas without trying to hide his presence, such as covering his ears which are really the only thing as an elf that would make him be viewed as 'odd.' So having mudanes call him things wouldn't happen because he wouldn't and shouldn't be revealing himself until he is about 85 years of age.
 
You still missed the point brought up multiple times. He would not have exposed himself to mundanes or even be allowed to, not until SMITED revealed the fantastical races. :\ He can wander the world alone if you want him to, but he wouldn't walk around mundane areas without trying to hide his presence, such as covering his ears which are really the only thing as an elf that would make him be viewed as 'odd.' So having mudanes call him things wouldn't happen because he wouldn't and shouldn't be revealing himself until he is about 85 years of age.
Alright ill edit it so he has no interaction with them. Until he discovers smited
 
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