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Request Visual Novel: Chronicle of Beast [need demo testers!]

Zweit

Arting Starvist
Hey RPNation friends! For quite a while now, I've been in the works on making my own original Visual Novel series. I'm proud to say that I'm finally ready to release a demo and I'm looking for good, story-minded people to read through and give me detailed feedback! Without further ado~




Chronicle of Beast is a Fantasy Adventure and mostly kinetic visual novel featuring a vibrant world with unique characters. At present the script is 17,937 words and is only just getting started on the introductory arc to the grand adventure still to come. The VN will feature custom artwork for character, backgrounds, and event images, as well as the option to develop stronger relationships between the MC, the ever expanding world, and her companions.


Pilgrimage was meant to teach respect, humility, and an assortment of other virtues that the priests in the compound drilled into her head all her life. But the only thing Jindeel felt like she was gaining was distress. At the conditions of the city proper, at the sickness and crime that drove a dagger through the poor streets of old town, and at the temple that loomed brilliant and willingly ignorant above it all.

Fed up with the rampant injustice plaguing her home, Jindeel accepts a fortuitous if not questionable opportunity to take matters into her own hands. With the help of her mate, a smooth talking con-man, and a wild dog of a felon - they track down the bandit stronghold, only to find a much more serious threat buried centuries away in the jungle undergrowth.










RPN is being a litte weird about the download link, apologies.
https(remove this)://drive.google.com/file/d/1hrlr4xUJlrHACcaRHxioye5z9q7o4--Z/view?usp=sharing
 
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Zweit

Arting Starvist
Hey friends! I see a few people have come to take a look at the thread. Welcome! Even if you don't play through the story, I'd still like to hear your thoughts on what you can see here in the thread alone!

How does the art take you? Do any of the characters in particular strike your interest?
 

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One Thousand Club
Unfortunately, I'm having trouble downloading your demo from RPN. I'm not really sure what the problem is, there just isn't a download button. Could you try attaching the zip as a file attachment (not inside a spoiler but attached to the post) or maybe making a google drive link?
 

Zweit

Arting Starvist
Unfortunately, I'm having trouble downloading your demo from RPN. I'm not really sure what the problem is, there just isn't a download button. Could you try attaching the zip as a file attachment (not inside a spoiler but attached to the post) or maybe making a google drive link?
Thanks for pointing that out! I don't understand why, but posting just the link creates that little widget on here that I can't download from either. Strange.

https(remove this)://drive.google.com/file/d/1hrlr4xUJlrHACcaRHxioye5z9q7o4--Z/view?usp=sharing

There's the gdrive link. I had to funk with it a bit to get it to display without the widget. So if you just copy-paste and remove the bit I inserted between the https and the colon it should work and give you the option to download the file in the top right options. Let me know if it doesn't though! I appreciate your patience.
 

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