Story Thoughts, fresh eyes, and criticism needed!

oldsoil

❄️your twisted mind is like snow on the road❄️
Hallo! I've been putting together the ideas for a story over the past couple days and I need some fresh eyes! It's a five-page google doc with between 1200-1300 words and it's filled with information about a dystopian alternate universe in a bulleted list format, and anyone is welcome to read and at least tell me if it is interesting!

The basic idea is a medical company overthrew the government almost 5 decades ago and is currently dealing with their own rebellion issues. The story will be from the POVs of two members of the rebellion group known as The Order of the Unseen. One member is in a leadership position and the other only joined recently.

TW: There will be LGBT details and the entire story IS based on mental illnesses being handled and treated badly.

Click here to open the doc!
 

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