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Wait... now we're stumbling upon something contrary in the sheets XD Jarret, who's 30, saw his parents being killed by Hypers when he was 14
Rima, who's 17, was out for a drive when the Hypers took over...
This is a little confusing ...
#ShouldHaveEstablishedAClearTimeline
It has, however, been stated that the war ended quite a while ago. And I doubt a 10 year old or younger would have been coding and driving a car. So... I'm gonna have to ask for some tiny changes in Rima's background. Hypers had already (largely) taken over when she was still young. You can keep the coding and the factory and everything in your story, just the Hypers had already taken over so she, her friends, and family would have had to lay low.
I'm gonna create a somewhat clearer timeline when my brain is properly functioning again. (which means sometime tomorrow, probably)
You're not the only one to have mis-read a little bit there XD My brain is only half functioning after a day at internship, and being distracted a lot with thoughts on LARP this weekend XD
Let's say it's been 16 years so it fits with Reaper's background. And also with my own background Since Vito escaped Hypers when he was younger.
I'm okay with our character being younger, so seventeen or a little older, just know she was a little kid when the Hypers had taken over. A character really growing up in a Hyper-controlled world is interesting also. Whereas the older people want to restore the world they knew, the kids just want the world to be rid of Hypers because they're the ones who enslave humans. Maybe Rima's parents were with the resistance? Just an idea, it's up to you, really
This is why I always say I'm not good at math. c: Thanks for pointing it out, I'll fix it.Just one thing: the Hyper war is sixteen years ago. If Sloannne is 27, she was 11 when the war began. Not 14
Other than that: nice!