Souldymono
Ta-To-Ba! Tatoba! Ta-To-Ba!
Wanted to know if still accepting. Quite interested in this.
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So, um, im not sure if you were aware but your character is basically a Mary Sue. <:3
And she's overpowered.
And it looks like she has no room for development.
And you spelled "seal" wrong.
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I'm not a gm but I felt I had to say something. It was annoying me, I'm sorry. ;-;
Thank you for putting me on blast. I know I spelled "seal" wrong because I was multitasking and by mistake I spelled it wrong.
Also I'm not so sure how she is overpowered if she only uses 40% of her powers. And it's not like she's going to develop or show any emotions anytime soon.
But thanks for that, I'll fix those errors.
Since I'm curious, do you see any flaws in my character?I feel bad for saying something now. Dx
But thanks! *noms cookie*
Bottom of the CSq r o w Looks mostly good to me. Now, I know she hasn't achieved the ability to use her soul form yet, but maybe you should elaborate on some of the abilities of this soul form for future reference. Is it completely intangible, is it invisible to most people, can it possess others for a limited time, etc? Just food for thought.
Hey! I fixed the things that you pointed out, could you take another look and tell me if it's okay? Kloudy