Fantasy Soul forge Academy. (my first academy Rp)

[RoyalPhoenix32]

Agent23
I'm interested in this but wouldn't it be better to have a CS where everyone can post them there instead of in the interest check?

 

[Agent23]

If you can't tell, I'm interested in this. Want to get a check if the features of my character are allowed.

Well there are a few things that dont make sense. First off your 8 but your familiar didnt manifest until six (impossible btw) and you have yourself listed as a 5th year. I know i said age is just a number but this would mean you graduated from first year at three (also impossible as your brain isnt developed enough to deal with the training.
So im sorry, but i can only allow him to be 1-2nd year

 

[Agent23]

Agent23
I'm interested in this but wouldn't it be better to have a CS where everyone can post them there instead of in the interest check?

Yes it is, i honestly didnt think the CS's would blow up so much. But alas no worries. When the time comes ill have a moderator switch this thread into the Cs portion and ill clean it up

 

[Balfnaught1]

Sorry I'd like to make an edit to my familiar's power. Could you check and tell me if it's ok?

 

[Agent23]

For sure. any edits will be allowed until the threads are put up in about 3 days time.

 

[Balfnaught1]

Also I might be changing the appearance of the Combat Form

 

[BlueJay1403]

Well there are a few things that dont make sense. First off your 8 but your familiar didnt manifest until six (impossible btw) and you have yourself listed as a 5th year. I know i said age is just a number but this would mean you graduated from first year at three (also impossible as your brain isnt developed enough to deal with the training.
So im sorry, but i can only allow him to be 1-2nd year

Fixed it.

 

[Agent23]

Fixed it.

Thank you. Sorry if I came off as harsh. I actually like that your character brings varied age to the story

 

[Balfnaught1]

Hey...may I...
shimmy on in?

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We’re still open i think; but all 7th year slots are taken

 

[Agent23]

Thanks Balfnaught1 I must've missed that one.

Shimmy away Panzer

 

[Balfnaught1]

Thanks Balfnaught1 I must've missed that one.

Shimmy away Panzer

I think I messed with the code when I replied cuz his original post is gone it’s just my reply

 

[Cosmos]

Looks interesting!!

 

[Smaaycheese]

just wondering do we still post the cs here?

 

[Balfnaught1]

just wondering do we still post the cs here?

Yeah. He said that he would make this the CS thread when the rp launches

 

[Smaaycheese]

cool! just wondering because i drew out my character and all but i wanted to make sure i could post here :0 working on my cs right now

 

[Balfnaught1]

So I just realized something. I don't know what the plot is. Is it just a school setting or is there an overarching plot?
Agent23

 

[Smaaycheese]

Faceclaim:

Name: Vashti Dalir
Age: 19
Gender: Female
Grade/Class: 7th year
Personality: She has an attitude , not the kind where she thinks she's better than everyone but more so of a rude get out of my face personality. in truth she never had a parental figure in her life and this is the best way she knows how to express herself. she is unbelievably smart , but a pessimist and pretty introverted , but only some like the headmaster know she is a truly sweet woman and very understand.

History: She lived a life full of uncertainty , where would she get her next meal would be, where she'd sleep. She was a runaway due to the physical abuse of her parents , she would of rather have starved for a week than live on more night being beaten. This was the time she became more attuned with spiders , seeing how beautiful and quick to strike they where. how patient they could be. They didn't rely on anyone. Not too long after she found a nyx stone and upon being in contact with it she changed (in what her mind ) for the better , both physically and mentally. Then she was contacted by soul forge academy becoming one of the strongest students in her class year.

Goals: To tame her predatory instinct , to prove herself more than just (in her eyes) a spider meant to be feared

Familiar base form-

bigger than her hand , she is usually mistaken as a bracelet since she wraps around Vashti's wrist.
Familiar name- Bellatrix
Familiar Race- Black widow spider
Familiar Power- Death's dance , the damage she gets she can transfer to her familiar , negating most harmful damage , this in turn has her spider turn the damage into powerful poisonous blows
Familiar Combat mode-

bellatrix is about the size of a bus
Familiar Merged form-

Weapon Base form-

Weapon name- Arachne Fangs
Weapon power- Multi slash : one slice with her weapon can create multiple cuts
Weapon Advanced form-

Advanced weapon power- Razor Wind :The ability to use the air/wind to slice objects powered
Final weapon stage-

Final weapon stage power- Petrifying gaze : each time she hits an enemy they get petrified and can't move

 

[Balfnaught1]

Did you draw the faceclaim?
Smaaycheese

 

[Smaaycheese]

Did you draw the faceclaim?
Smaaycheese

Yep!

 

[Balfnaught1]

Yep!

Wow, it looks amazing! I just stole a character design from a manga I like

 

[CombatReadyPenny]

Wow, it looks amazing! I just stole a character design from a manga I like

Basically the same xD

 

[Balfnaught1]

Basically the same xD

Not much else you can do when you can't draw

 

[Smaaycheese]

Wow, it looks amazing! I just stole a character design from a manga I like

I always draw a face claim for my oc :0 haha it helps me and the people im rping with a chance to see the person im trying to convey :3

 

[Balfnaught1]

I always draw a face claim for my oc :0 haha it helps me and the people im rping with a chance to see the person im trying to convey :3

Yeah I can see that, it's a better system than randomly looking through google images

 

[Ninth]

*stares off*
I just accidentally clicked the side button on my mouse, and lost all of my progress..

Then again, I was doing it the silly way. I submitted a message with a base idea for a familiar, then hit edit to work on the complete sheet from there..
Time to start from just the familiar again..