[Party 10]Nindrol Blakwyrm

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Theseiroth

Nindrol Blakwyrm/Lecuis Musiker/Dagger
Nindrol Blakwyrm


As often as I can I shall post. I'm always lurking just not always free to do

Wyrm, as he's know to his friends, was a terrible thief. Growing up he joined the thieves guild out of necessity more than skill. most of the work that he did was smash and grabs or being a part of groups that threatened to local shop owners into paying protection money. One day it went a little too far and the person they were threatening ended up dead. realizing the mistakes that he had made he prayed for help from anyone in anyone and got an answer from a celestial being and became a warlock. He's not entirely sure how it worked but he was released from jail the next day and since then has been doing whatever his patron has asked of him to pay back this debt that he feels he owes which brought him to meeting with the group that he is currently with.

although he misses his old life and his family he is not returned home and kept his threatening to a minimum and hasn't seen anyone. He knows his sister was training to be a doctor and that his older brother was working in the mines. His father and mother were also working for at the mines, his mother in accounting his father as a lead.

Even though he enjoys what he does now and the ability to use magic he hopes to someday retire and pay back the family of the shop owner that he was involved in killing by working for them or helping them to expand their business, even though he doesn't really know how to do that.
 
Character Sheet:

Please fill in the bubbles for your spells (put 1 in the little O on the spell sheet) so they show as being prepared since for warlocks they're always prepared.

Character Backstory:

Firstly, a small nitpick -- as much as you're going to likely be writing out for CoS, it's always good to reread your posts to catch grammar and spelling errors.

Secondly, I feel like this backstory is somewhat bullet points without the symbols. How did Wyrm get caught? Was he the expendable one for the thieves guild? What is the celestial being? The celestial warlock blurb lists a few suggested options: Your patron is a powerful being of the Upper Planes. You have bound yourself to an ancient empyrean, solar, ki-rin, unicorn, or other entity that resides in the planes of everlasting bliss. Your pact with that being allows you to experience the barest touch of the holy light that illuminates the multiverse.

When he made his pact was he given any sort of instructions, or did he merely offer a blank check and has no idea what's expected of him? What sort of things has the patron asked of him -- is it very vocal or is it more just nudges to do certain things?

You mention his family, did he run away from them when he was younger? Did they know he was arrested? Do they know he's free now? If he wants to help the family of the dead shopowner, why doesn't he just work for them now? Does the patron keep them focused on other things?



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Wyrm, as he's know to his friends, was a terrible thief. Growing up he joined the thieves guild out of nnecessity, as his father was injured on the job at the time. Most of the work that he did was smash and grabs or being a part of groups that threatened to local shop owners into paying protection money. One day it went a little too far and the person they were threatening ended up dead, The guild turned him in to the guards to protect a high ranking member who had 'fired the arrow' so to speak. Realizing the mistakes that he had made he prayed for help from anyone and got an answer from a unicorn(he doesn't like to talk about that particular part) and became a warlock. He's not entirely sure how it worked but he was released from jail the next day with one instruction; find and destroy undead, and since then has been doing whatever his patron has asked of him to pay back this debt that he feels he owes which brought him to the group that he is currently with.

although he misses his old life and his family he is not returned home and kept his threatening to a minimum and hasn't seen anyone. He knows his sister was training to be a doctor and that his older brother was working in the mines. His father and mother were also working for at the mines, his mother in accounting, his father as a lead.

Even though he enjoys what he does now and the ability to use magic, he even got a Mielikki tattoo because it's a unicorn, he wishes to aid the family of the shop keep he took part in killing. For now he is trying to amass a large amount of gold to send them, in hopes it will keep them open and safe.
 
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