ZeiruliousMakavar
The Archon of Madness
This, is the first part of chapter 1 of a book that I'm writing. It's a high-fantasy story set in a world of my own making. It has all of the usual stuff, from Elves and Dwarves, all the way to Dragons and dungeons. This, is simply all that I have written down for chapter 1 so far, which I want to be around 9,000 words. I'll post further parts in ~1k word segments. This is for two reasons, one to get feedback on the story so far, and two to essentially 'crowd source' the editing job before I put up the finished chapter on somewhere more official. (At the moment, I'm thinking the website/app Tapas.)
Stories are what make a world. They are our histories, our fantasies, and our religions. Stories can make us feel things that we would not feel otherwise. Pain at losing people we have never met, joy at the accomplishments of people long dead. Stories can take up many forms, from a simple poem, to an epic tale regaling the stories of people lost and forgotten. It is within these stories that we escape our mundane lives, in the hopes of feeling things that otherwise we could not. Many things take up these stories, and many things interest our lives in ways we could not imagine. For these stories, one and all, are doors to worlds beyond our imaginations. It is within one of these worlds that our story begins. A world of might, and of magic.
It is here, that we find ourselves today, observing but a single world. Inside this world, are many small nations, with many peoples within that go about their daily lives, unaware of what awaits them in the future. One, amongst them is the Albion Federation, a loose collection of smaller city-states that had banded together to combat against the neighboring region. One which also had a lose collection of roving bands of nomadic peoples. These people had been labeled as Demonic in origin, though it was unclear if they truly were demons. While this would be the subject of debate for several years, this is not in fact, why we are here this day.
On the outskirts of one such City state, resided the small forest village of Alfeon. It was a quaint little town, where not much happened year round save for the yearly harvest festival, where the villagers gathered together to drink and eat the night away in celebration of a bountiful harvest. Life was mostly peaceful here, despite being close enough to the border of the Demon Clans land that the occasional raid took place. The villagers were lucky enough, that the closest clans were more interested in fighting amongst themselves, than in taking over land near by. This, lead to an almost inevitable melting pot of the races, as people from all over gathered in this small village to trade, both in culture and in goods.
One such person in this village was what many called an 'Adventurer'. While the village was too small, and too peaceful to have an official branch office of the Adventurer's Guild at the time, this particular adventurer had taken up residence in one of the small abandoned houses on the outskirts of the village. This of course would mean that many of the wandering Adventurers found themselves at her home, if they ever traveled through the town. She didn't mind this most of the times, as due to being a youthful dark-elf, the lady in question did not mind the occasional company. Though she had moved to the town a few years prior, she was indeed a rather accomplished Adventurer, having reached the rank of Silver at a young age due to events that had taken place. At first, the villagers did not fully understand why someone of her caliber would abandon such renown, to live in a small village mostly out of the way, but over the years they had gotten used to the young elf woman living there along side them.
On one such morning, the young elf was resting on the porch area just outside her home, as the morning sun slowly crept over the horizon filled with trees, unaware of what the day would bring her. At the time, rumors had been going around the Adventurers that traveled near the village that one of the young princesses of the City-state she had found herself in had been wandering around, gathering a crew of sorts to head into one of the small dungeons that dotted the lands. According to the rumors, it had something to do with some old artifact that the royal family was looking for, though what it was, no one knew. The Elven girl smiled softly as she glanced out at the fields, some of the villagers already out and working on them early in the morning. That years harvest festival would be soon and the villagers wanted to celebrate even more this year, due to a rather bountiful harvest.
As the elf watched the sunrise, one of the adventurers staying in town as well at the time, slowly approached her from the forest. She smiled softly, waving a hello to him as she watched him, the young human lad at the time a wood ranked Adventurer, meaning at most he could help with the local goblin problem as the forest was filled with all manner of monsters. As a wood ranked Adventurer, he was rather new to the whole affair, and looked up to the Elf girl, who had reached the rank of Silver despite looking younger than he. While it was true, that she looked younger than he, having the appearance of a young teenage girl, he had to be careful with her, due to the nature of elves growing rather slowly, compared to humans. As such, he bowed and saluted her as he approached her, a soft smile upon his face as he did so.
The young adventurer smiled as he dropped off a leather bag filled with a few goblin ears just outside the door to the elf's home. The fifth bag this week, in fact. Goblins, while not exactly intelligent, were known to be pack hunters. And the fact that there was a growing number of them in such a small area, usually meant there was also Hobgoblins, and likely a Goblin King hiding out deeper in the forest. While this may have been the case, the Elf had been sitting at her porch, almost unmoving, for several days now on the look out for any signs of such activity. So far, there had just been more and more Goblins. One of them were likely to evolve into a Goblin King soon, if they weren't constantly cleared out by wandering adventurers, after all.
While normally, such a thing would be a problem for this town, ever since the elf had moved in, a merchant associated with the Adventurer's Guild came around every two weeks or so, to gather any sort of goods that the wanderers had dropped off at her home, as well as divvy out any rewards. This, of course, was another reason why there was no official branch of the guild in the village, as there was only one resident adventurer, the elf. This, generally meant that if one wanted to upgrade their rank, or take on more dangerous tasks, they would have to take the trek to the nearest Town with an Adventurer's Guild, which was almost a days travel away by horse. Faster, of course, if you had other more efficient means of travel, such as teleportation magic.
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Ch01
On Histories of Might. (Part 1)
Ch01
On Histories of Might. (Part 1)
Stories are what make a world. They are our histories, our fantasies, and our religions. Stories can make us feel things that we would not feel otherwise. Pain at losing people we have never met, joy at the accomplishments of people long dead. Stories can take up many forms, from a simple poem, to an epic tale regaling the stories of people lost and forgotten. It is within these stories that we escape our mundane lives, in the hopes of feeling things that otherwise we could not. Many things take up these stories, and many things interest our lives in ways we could not imagine. For these stories, one and all, are doors to worlds beyond our imaginations. It is within one of these worlds that our story begins. A world of might, and of magic.
It is here, that we find ourselves today, observing but a single world. Inside this world, are many small nations, with many peoples within that go about their daily lives, unaware of what awaits them in the future. One, amongst them is the Albion Federation, a loose collection of smaller city-states that had banded together to combat against the neighboring region. One which also had a lose collection of roving bands of nomadic peoples. These people had been labeled as Demonic in origin, though it was unclear if they truly were demons. While this would be the subject of debate for several years, this is not in fact, why we are here this day.
On the outskirts of one such City state, resided the small forest village of Alfeon. It was a quaint little town, where not much happened year round save for the yearly harvest festival, where the villagers gathered together to drink and eat the night away in celebration of a bountiful harvest. Life was mostly peaceful here, despite being close enough to the border of the Demon Clans land that the occasional raid took place. The villagers were lucky enough, that the closest clans were more interested in fighting amongst themselves, than in taking over land near by. This, lead to an almost inevitable melting pot of the races, as people from all over gathered in this small village to trade, both in culture and in goods.
One such person in this village was what many called an 'Adventurer'. While the village was too small, and too peaceful to have an official branch office of the Adventurer's Guild at the time, this particular adventurer had taken up residence in one of the small abandoned houses on the outskirts of the village. This of course would mean that many of the wandering Adventurers found themselves at her home, if they ever traveled through the town. She didn't mind this most of the times, as due to being a youthful dark-elf, the lady in question did not mind the occasional company. Though she had moved to the town a few years prior, she was indeed a rather accomplished Adventurer, having reached the rank of Silver at a young age due to events that had taken place. At first, the villagers did not fully understand why someone of her caliber would abandon such renown, to live in a small village mostly out of the way, but over the years they had gotten used to the young elf woman living there along side them.
On one such morning, the young elf was resting on the porch area just outside her home, as the morning sun slowly crept over the horizon filled with trees, unaware of what the day would bring her. At the time, rumors had been going around the Adventurers that traveled near the village that one of the young princesses of the City-state she had found herself in had been wandering around, gathering a crew of sorts to head into one of the small dungeons that dotted the lands. According to the rumors, it had something to do with some old artifact that the royal family was looking for, though what it was, no one knew. The Elven girl smiled softly as she glanced out at the fields, some of the villagers already out and working on them early in the morning. That years harvest festival would be soon and the villagers wanted to celebrate even more this year, due to a rather bountiful harvest.
As the elf watched the sunrise, one of the adventurers staying in town as well at the time, slowly approached her from the forest. She smiled softly, waving a hello to him as she watched him, the young human lad at the time a wood ranked Adventurer, meaning at most he could help with the local goblin problem as the forest was filled with all manner of monsters. As a wood ranked Adventurer, he was rather new to the whole affair, and looked up to the Elf girl, who had reached the rank of Silver despite looking younger than he. While it was true, that she looked younger than he, having the appearance of a young teenage girl, he had to be careful with her, due to the nature of elves growing rather slowly, compared to humans. As such, he bowed and saluted her as he approached her, a soft smile upon his face as he did so.
The young adventurer smiled as he dropped off a leather bag filled with a few goblin ears just outside the door to the elf's home. The fifth bag this week, in fact. Goblins, while not exactly intelligent, were known to be pack hunters. And the fact that there was a growing number of them in such a small area, usually meant there was also Hobgoblins, and likely a Goblin King hiding out deeper in the forest. While this may have been the case, the Elf had been sitting at her porch, almost unmoving, for several days now on the look out for any signs of such activity. So far, there had just been more and more Goblins. One of them were likely to evolve into a Goblin King soon, if they weren't constantly cleared out by wandering adventurers, after all.
While normally, such a thing would be a problem for this town, ever since the elf had moved in, a merchant associated with the Adventurer's Guild came around every two weeks or so, to gather any sort of goods that the wanderers had dropped off at her home, as well as divvy out any rewards. This, of course, was another reason why there was no official branch of the guild in the village, as there was only one resident adventurer, the elf. This, generally meant that if one wanted to upgrade their rank, or take on more dangerous tasks, they would have to take the trek to the nearest Town with an Adventurer's Guild, which was almost a days travel away by horse. Faster, of course, if you had other more efficient means of travel, such as teleportation magic.
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