Pastry
spiritually disconnected
So I have started role - playing a long while ago, and it would be nice to have some sort of criticism for my Original Characters, I only have two, for now, and maybe I could get some feedback on how to... Do this thing? xD here they are:
Mars
-Vampire Werewolf Hybrid, he's has a confident personality, with red eyes that dull when he's hungry, usually he wears leather jackets, smokes, and bothers women with his, flirty ways, which is practically the only way he can talk to people.
Ayden
- Mystical Dark Witch, (I don't like the term "Wizard" so I just call him a witch) He has brown hair, green eyes, and wears polos, or Hawaiian shirts, he has a very uptight personality, keeping everything he does a secret, He covers his head with a hood, and his eyes change color based on his mood. When he uses his magic, his veins that are on the top of his skin bulge and turn to a black to grey colour. His eyes do the same too. He is very powerful, and he lives alone. He's mostly a solitary loner.
What do you think?
Mars
-Vampire Werewolf Hybrid, he's has a confident personality, with red eyes that dull when he's hungry, usually he wears leather jackets, smokes, and bothers women with his, flirty ways, which is practically the only way he can talk to people.
Ayden
- Mystical Dark Witch, (I don't like the term "Wizard" so I just call him a witch) He has brown hair, green eyes, and wears polos, or Hawaiian shirts, he has a very uptight personality, keeping everything he does a secret, He covers his head with a hood, and his eyes change color based on his mood. When he uses his magic, his veins that are on the top of his skin bulge and turn to a black to grey colour. His eyes do the same too. He is very powerful, and he lives alone. He's mostly a solitary loner.
What do you think?
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