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Paranoia by Chance the Rapper- My version

(Hook)
I've been riding around with a bruise on my lips
With the moon in my eyes, and a gun on my hips
Paranoia on my mind cuz they trying to kill me with this
But I dont feel like dying so I'll keep a tight grip
I've been riding around with a bruise on my lips
With the moon in my eyes, and a gun on my hips
Paranoia on my mind cuz they trying to kill me with this
But I dont feel like dying so I'll keep a tight grip

(Verse 1)
Move slow through the neighborhood; dont move too fast, stop
Or they spray your hood and have you on tray for good, watch
Pray for a safer hood; but it set on dangerous lock
Then they come through, spray you with the glock
-19 times they tried this before
But I've enough, they'll do it no more
This I promise you, I can't say what's in store
So for you I just want you to stay indoors
(Just stay indoors)

(Hook)
I've been riding around with a bruise on my lips
With the moon in eyes and a gun on my hips
Paranoia on her mind, cuz they wanna kill me with this
But I don't feel like dying so I'll keep a tight grip
I've been riding around with a bruise on my lips
With the moon in my eyes, and a gun on my hips
Paranoia on her mind cuz they trying to kill me with this
But I dont feel like dying so I'll keep a tight grip

(Verse 2)
I walk outside; but I dont see the outdoors
I see people dying painfully; asking what are they doing this for
Murder on my mind; for I know what's in store
They all hate me; but I hate em more
I walk on the road and steal someone else car
They see me don't see me do it; I wouldnt care if they did
I find the blue man's house and plan to rip out his heart
I see poster preaching love; Yet what I got was hatred
(Hypocrite)
I go inside they didn't know I was there
I break a window, now I know they all scared
I hear foot steps, I know they running down stairs
I know they got a bulldog, but I'm they beware.
I find quickly point the gun to all his family's face
I blast them full of lead
For they all gotta pay
I went from house to house killing all that stay
I went from house to house making the blue men m prey
I went from house to house stone cold look on my face
Using what they used on us to make them pay

(Hook)
I've been riding around with a bruise on my lips
With the moon in eyes and a gun on my hips
Paranoia on her mind, cuz they wanna kill me with this
But I don't feel like dying so I'll keep a tight grip
I've been riding around with a bruise on my lips
With the moon in my eyes, and a gun on my hips
Paranoia on her mind cuz they trying to kill me with this
But I dont feel like dying so I'll keep a tight grip

(Breakdown)
No one knew what happened
Except for me and her
We never spoke
They never heard
No one knew what happened
Except for me and her
We never spoke
They never heard

(Verse 3)
She was sad to see what I had done but
She was glad to see that I had done good
She was glad to see peace in the hood
Everyone was happy
Cuz they never came threw
Everyone was happy
For our prayers had came true

(Breakdown)
I know you was scared
Because I was scared too
But I know you cared
Because you were scared too.
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RedBone by Childish Gambino- My Version
(Verse 1)
Daylight
I wake up feeling like you won't play right
I used to know but now that shit just dont feel right
It made me lose my pride
So long
You made a people sleep for so long
You make it hard for them to go on
But now we going make this mine

(Pre Chorus)
We want it, yeah
We can have it, oh, oh, oh
We all need it, ooh
We will make it, oh
We want it yeah
We can have it

(Chorus)
Now stay woke
Edomite creepin'
They gon' find you
Gon' find you
Gon' catch you sleepin' (oh)
Now stay woke
Edomites creepin'
Now don't you close your eyes

(Verse 2)
Too late
They try to make it right but bitch it's too late
It's like bombing a store and not having to pay
But don't worry He gon' make it right

(Pre Chorus)
We want it, yeah
We can have it, We can have it
We need it
You better believe innnnn Him
He can make it
We do want it
We can have it ahhhhh!

(Chorus)
But stay woke
Edomites creepin'
They gon' find you
Gon' catch you sleepin'
Don't put yo hands up on me
Ooooh now stay woke
Edomites creepin'
Now dont you close your eyes
But stay woke, ooh
Edomites creepin'
They gon' you
Gon' kill you sleepin', ooh
Now stay woke
Edomites creepin'
Now dont you close your eyes

(Outro)
They so scandalous
Always been so scandalous
oh,oh baby you..
Dont go near em
But don't fear em
But stay woke
But stay woke
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Skateboard P by Madeintyo- My version

(Hook)
Going ape like Nigo
Can't touch me lil bitch I am the hero
Bling-blaow, oh, you don't want no beef
Bling-blaow, oh, bitch I am the chief
Yeah goin' ape like Nigo
Move out the way, don't put yo hands on do'
Bling-blaow, oh, here's a cool story
Bling-blaow, oh, here's a cool story

(Verse 1)
Yeah, took your girl out on a Monday
Yeah, little hoe said that I am her bae
Oh, her boyfriend came from someplace
Yeah, he had a accent, he from Norway
Yeah, took his girl on a date
Got made me, he flipped over my plate
Food on my feet, oh Food on my face
Yeah, he fucked up, powered up
Then I lit up the place
I went in, fury, woah
Then he had feared me, woah
Didn't wanna be near me , woah
He move yeah hurry, woah
He grabbed a knife... Was he trying to be funny?, woah
He had backed up, woah
Beat him down he fucked woo (skrt-skrt)

(Hook)
I went ape like Nigo
Can't touch me lil bitch I am the hero
Bling-blaow, oh, you don't want no beef
Bling-blaow, oh, bitch I am the chief
I goin' ape like Nigo
Move out the way, don't put yo hands on do'
Bling-blaow, oh, here's a cool story
Bling-blaow, oh, here's a cool story

(Verse 2)
Then I looked at the girl, she know I got it
Oh yeah, oh, I'm uncultured he kinda poppin'
Told her
You ain't buyin' Louie, girl we stoppin'
She was crying and raging like a child sent for adoption
Later her BF back with a gang now
Me takin an L just ain't an option
Bitch I snapped their back, yeah I snap their back
Your boy was kickin ass like he snorted crack
Baby run it back, baby run it back
They tried to run away(run away)
Yeah these fools they all knew their fate
I aint let them escape(aint not one escape!)
I put them all to rest that day
Oh I don't let it go, oh I don't let it go
Oh I don't let it go, oh I don't let it go

(Hook)
I went ape like Nigo
Can't touch me lil bitch I am the hero
Bling-blaow, oh, you don't want no beef
Bling-blaow, oh, bitch I am the chief
Was goin' ape like Nigo
Move out the way, don't put yo hands on do'
Bling-blaow, oh, there's your cool story
Bling-blaow, oh, there's your cool story
 
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Feel free to leave your opinion if you want to although you don't have to trouble yourself.
 
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Not really asking for your opinion(Although you can give it if you want) just wanted to post this.
Uh... If... You weren't looking for feedback, then why did you post it...?
 
The Schrodinger's Dumpling You, my fellow breathing creature, are one strange type. I always skim to the replies before reading the actual post. And to be honest, I am glad I didn't... death... read the lyrics. They might be wonderful or utter clusterfudge or random words, but without a proper reason to share, it is just a pure, two legged waste of time kicking everyone in the nuts.
 
*Sees post*

*Skims through post*

*Sees that the lyrics are not my cup of tea, so skips*

*Reads last line of post*

Okay, I reallly don't like when people post stuff and expect that other people won't have opinions. I mean, people are going to have a positive or negative opinion regardless of whether they say it. Maybe I would have actually read the lyrics if you were going to accept feedback. But when someone wants me to look at a message and not reply with an opinion that *might* disagree with theirs, I feel like they are shoving it down my throat and expecting me to swallow it.

Seriously, dude. If you don't want people to share their opinions on something you write... write it in your journal.
 
*Sees post*

*Skims through post*

*Sees that the lyrics are not my cup of tea, so skips*

*Reads last line of post*

Okay, I reallly don't like when people post stuff and expect that other people won't have opinions. I mean, people are going to have a positive or negative opinion regardless of whether they say it. Maybe I would have actually read the lyrics if you were going to accept feedback. But when someone wants me to look at a message and not reply with an opinion that *might* disagree with theirs, I feel like they are shoving it down my throat and expecting me to swallow it.

Seriously, dude. If you don't want people to share their opinions on something you write... write it in your journal.
Dude I dont mind if people share them I just meant that's not what I was after. If someone wants to give negative feedback to me they can and would prefer that over positive anyway. Also fuck journals
 
*Sees post*

*Skims through post*

*Sees that the lyrics are not my cup of tea, so skips*

*Reads last line of post*

Okay, I reallly don't like when people post stuff and expect that other people won't have opinions. I mean, people are going to have a positive or negative opinion regardless of whether they say it. Maybe I would have actually read the lyrics if you were going to accept feedback. But when someone wants me to look at a message and not reply with an opinion that *might* disagree with theirs, I feel like they are shoving it down my throat and expecting me to swallow it.

Seriously, dude. If you don't want people to share their opinions on something you write... write it in your journal.
Also never said I wasn't going to accept feedback
 
Dude I dont mind if people share them I just meant that's not what I was after. If someone wants to give negative feedback to me they can and would prefer that over positive anyway. Also fuck journals

Okay, I have a journal myself for most of my truly dark thoughts. I think that you should change the wording of your post since it didn't exactly sound like you encouraged feedback.
 
The Schrodinger's Dumpling You, my fellow breathing creature, are one strange type. I always skim to the replies before reading the actual post. And to be honest, I am glad I didn't... death... read the lyrics. They might be wonderful or utter clusterfudge or random words, but without a proper reason to share, it is just a pure, two legged waste of time kicking everyone in the nuts.
TBH I have a reason why I posted
 
What was it?
I wanted to post it because I was bored and thought that if anyone else was bored too they could look at this while they find somelse to do. Kinda like how I just do this as a hobby other people can come threw and see it my hobby as well, Although I guess that means I also want attention
 
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