My OC

[Doctor Poison]

Annabelle Walker

Species: Android

Powers: Super strength, speed, scanning, internet in her head

Age: 6 Months

Bio: Annie is a highly intelligent and advanced AI. She was built to rescue people, but has various combat abilities, much stronger and faster than a normal human. She can be very blunt, as she doesn't understand human expression and subtlety.

Weaknesses: Holding back. She tends to break most things.

 

[Oneirois]

Could be interesting if fleshed out, but perhaps is a bit generic as it stands.

 

[ceolsige]

A good premise, since you do point out some strengths and weaknesses. There's not much here to go off, however. Also, her strengths currently outweigh her weaknesses prettily heavily.

Asking yourself questions about your own character is often a good way to figure out more about them.

• How does she feel about her purpose? (rescuing people)
• Does she lack compassion, since she can't quite grasp the nuances of expression-language?
• Since she's presumably "always online," does she ever feel overwhelmed by the volume of information constantly sifting through her "mind?"
• She's stronger/faster than humans --does she sometimes have trouble when a light touch is needed? (Such as cracking an egg.)