Teal
Certifiably Political
((This thread reflects the BETA version of a particular character who has yet to be revised to meet current rules. The content is not quite where I'd like it to be, but in the interests of hurrying through this, I'm not going to rewrite the entirety of the scenes.))
The dark-haired sculptor took a step back, having finally finished brushing the shards out of the crevasses of her project, pocketing her chisel. Rainbow obsidian flecks carpeted the floor of the studio surrounding her completed work, a shining statue of the volcano god she held in most reverence. Kaimi's face beamed with pride as she inspected the work that had captured Maka Koa perfectly. Perfectly - at least - according to the mental image she held of him. She had never laid eyes upon any of the gods herself, but this spectacular piece was the blazing glory she imagined. It was easily her masterpiece.
After admiring it for a small spell, Kaimi checked the secures at the base of the statue before turning to put her tools away in their proper place. As pleased as she was, the room was a mess. Near her station a broom and a dustpan rested for her to pick up the hazardous deposits that carpeted the area immediately around it and got to it.
As Kaimi moved toward her cleaning implements, picking her way over the shard-littered cement floor of her work room, a deep rumble resounded in the small room. The shards of obsidian trembled, filling the chamber with high pitch pings, as the rumble changed. A voice, deep as the ominous groaning of shifting earth, filled the air.
"An impressive effort, mortal."
It came from behind her - the statue's body had twisted, and now faced the broom-wielding craftswoman.
Kaimi's attention snapped her gaze over her shoulder, the rest of her body quickly following suit in a small jump as she nearly dropped the broom. Startled enough to become breathless, no embarrassing cries came from her throat, but the sculptor remained slack jawed. "Th-thank you?" Kaimi stammered, a moment later.
A great and deep laugh boomed into the chamber, "It is not often that a prayer reaches me so loudly! To think, this magnificent form was crafted by...a mere mortal. You have made me pro -"
"Kaimi!" The slam of wood striking wood cut the divine voice off, drowning its praise out. "Are you alright!?" It was her mother, eyes wide and visibly frightened. In her hand, she held the wooden cudgel she kept under the shop counter. "The -"
Kaimi did not hear what she heard, as the world itself froze. Sunlight flooded through the walls and ceiling, casting the room in brilliant whites and golden shadows. The glare should have been blinding, yet Kaimi's copper eyes adapted with unnatural speed - pupils diluted to tiny black dots. Around the craftswoman's body, wisps of deep violet fire danced - much darker than the unnatural sunscape her workshop had become. On her forehead, the lidded eye of the Twilight caste shone - brilliant against her bronze skin. Over the wall at her back, an intricate mandala of violet light had burned itself into the sun-washed plaster - the symbol which dominated it was like a four-fingered hand, each pointing toward an ordinal direction.
Before her, a mass of darker violet essence began to collect - drawing together rapidly into a human shape. Then, in a flash of brilliant white light, the figure coalesced - a being with flesh of golden metal, shot through with crystalline veins, and liquid silver dripping from it's brow, in the likeness of hair. A magnificent broad-sleeved gown of strange liquid-white material hugged its chest, beneath an armor-like bodice of black-embellished gold. The metallic swell of the creature - a woman's? - breasts were barely visible at the bodice's upper-edge. Almost out of place where the being's steely grey eyes - which now rested coldly upon Kaimi's fire-backed form.
The craftswoman had the distinct impression of being weighted like meat in the market.
"So," The being spoke, voice hauntingly beautiful and distinctly feminine, "you, are my new incarnation." The creature's lips pulled back in a sneer, revealing rows perfect white enameled teeth, amid her humanoid golden mask.
Kaimi's mind raced, infinite questions forming as she tried to make sense of the strange void she now found herself in. Her hand reached to touch her own brow, numbly aware of the sign that shone from it, before it was interrupted by the shadows slithering together. What emerged from the writhing darkness was something indescribable. Having just witnessed her own craft at its finest, it paled in comparison to the metallic being before her. And what's more. It moved. It breathed. SHE spoke. And as the venomous words poured from her golden lips, Kaimi quivered. Then, a tang of bitterness rose in her, a fire that would not be stamped out with that remark. The craftsman steeled herself. "What!?"
It didn't sound nearly as imposing as she would have liked.
The being breathed a derisive - yet perversely beautiful - snort, turning away - her strange liquid armor gown, hemmed in intricate gold runes, whirled around her slender form. "You are my current incarnation." She repeated, gesturing dismissively over her shoulder, as she approached the statue in the room's center. Her slender orichalcum fingers trialed soundlessly over the - now white - obsidian face of Kaimi's statue. The being's eyes narrowed, though her words were absent minded. "We are the same - now and forever."
Memories - many which were not Kaimi's own - rose in her mind. Disparate references to Anathema and the Chosen of the Sun came together, informed by the memories of the being - Viveka, called the Dying, of the Twilight caste - to reveal their true character; of the Solar Exalted.
Kaimi's mouth worked before her voice did, sufficiently alarmed by the liquid motion. Everything about this being was on the outer edges of her imagination, and she briefly wondered if this is what it was like to meet a god. There was a mental twitch to this comparison. Even most gods had their flaws. The new exalt was at a loss to describe what she was seeing even to herself as it was happening. Beautiful for her age and people, Kai felt small, powerless and disgusting, her voice sounding as a croak following the other, "I, th-that's imp -"
"You should feel honored." Viveka observed, voice mild.
She stopped, the memories flooding through her mind. Visions of the ancient world, paradise, magic beyond imagination and hell. Kaimi's stomach turned as mass destruction, blood and torture began to invade her thoughts as well. Throat dry, she stammered, "Honored? For this?" Never feeling the relief of evacuating her stomach, it took all of her to not reel in place. "Y-you're a monster. You weren't always but...no. I'm not you. I'm not that."
The strength she attempted to project with those words failed. She was only trying to convince herself.
Viveka's silver lips quirked in a confident and cold smirk, as the weight of her gaze settled fully on Kaimi and she stepped away from the bleached obsidian of the statue. "A monster?" She asked, voice lyrical. One of her golden hands slid through the liquid silver mane of her hair. She laughed merrily, the sound both beautiful and unnatural. Her smile returned as she regarded the craftswoman, "I simply made the world more beautiful." She gestured vaguely toward the statue at her back, "As a fellow craftswoman, surely you can see the value in that."
The stonemason sneered, not buying it, “You raped the land and its creatures, churning out abominations to add to your collection, your military might. Perhaps at one point you did, but it was outweighed by the destruction you’ve wrought.” Standing her ground against the impossibly intimidating Solar echo, copper hands balled into fists. “You’ve murdered thousands in cold blood, all for your selfish drive. There is no value in that. Now leave me, apparition.”
Viveka's smile was cold, the strangely beautiful laugh that filled the air carried a tinge of - chillingly infectiousness - madness. Reflexively, Kaimi felt herself smile - and the realization chilled her, shocking her into sobriety. With that, the ancient Solar began to fade - though at the last moment, the golden caste to her skin vanished and was replaced with the healthy deep brown flesh of the Southeast.
"I am a Lawgiver." Viveka stated, voice suddenly fuller and far more human. On her now transparent forehead was the same crest Kaimi herself now bore. "I sought knowledge, and with it, I changed the world." Viveka's grey eyes looked with Kaimi's copper ones, as her words faded to a mere whisper.
"...and so will you."
When Kaimi next blinked, she found herself - once more - clutching a broom. Her mother's voice cut in, as if no time had passed.
"- house is shaking!"
The dark-haired sculptor took a step back, having finally finished brushing the shards out of the crevasses of her project, pocketing her chisel. Rainbow obsidian flecks carpeted the floor of the studio surrounding her completed work, a shining statue of the volcano god she held in most reverence. Kaimi's face beamed with pride as she inspected the work that had captured Maka Koa perfectly. Perfectly - at least - according to the mental image she held of him. She had never laid eyes upon any of the gods herself, but this spectacular piece was the blazing glory she imagined. It was easily her masterpiece.
After admiring it for a small spell, Kaimi checked the secures at the base of the statue before turning to put her tools away in their proper place. As pleased as she was, the room was a mess. Near her station a broom and a dustpan rested for her to pick up the hazardous deposits that carpeted the area immediately around it and got to it.
As Kaimi moved toward her cleaning implements, picking her way over the shard-littered cement floor of her work room, a deep rumble resounded in the small room. The shards of obsidian trembled, filling the chamber with high pitch pings, as the rumble changed. A voice, deep as the ominous groaning of shifting earth, filled the air.
"An impressive effort, mortal."
It came from behind her - the statue's body had twisted, and now faced the broom-wielding craftswoman.
Kaimi's attention snapped her gaze over her shoulder, the rest of her body quickly following suit in a small jump as she nearly dropped the broom. Startled enough to become breathless, no embarrassing cries came from her throat, but the sculptor remained slack jawed. "Th-thank you?" Kaimi stammered, a moment later.
A great and deep laugh boomed into the chamber, "It is not often that a prayer reaches me so loudly! To think, this magnificent form was crafted by...a mere mortal. You have made me pro -"
"Kaimi!" The slam of wood striking wood cut the divine voice off, drowning its praise out. "Are you alright!?" It was her mother, eyes wide and visibly frightened. In her hand, she held the wooden cudgel she kept under the shop counter. "The -"
Kaimi did not hear what she heard, as the world itself froze. Sunlight flooded through the walls and ceiling, casting the room in brilliant whites and golden shadows. The glare should have been blinding, yet Kaimi's copper eyes adapted with unnatural speed - pupils diluted to tiny black dots. Around the craftswoman's body, wisps of deep violet fire danced - much darker than the unnatural sunscape her workshop had become. On her forehead, the lidded eye of the Twilight caste shone - brilliant against her bronze skin. Over the wall at her back, an intricate mandala of violet light had burned itself into the sun-washed plaster - the symbol which dominated it was like a four-fingered hand, each pointing toward an ordinal direction.
Before her, a mass of darker violet essence began to collect - drawing together rapidly into a human shape. Then, in a flash of brilliant white light, the figure coalesced - a being with flesh of golden metal, shot through with crystalline veins, and liquid silver dripping from it's brow, in the likeness of hair. A magnificent broad-sleeved gown of strange liquid-white material hugged its chest, beneath an armor-like bodice of black-embellished gold. The metallic swell of the creature - a woman's? - breasts were barely visible at the bodice's upper-edge. Almost out of place where the being's steely grey eyes - which now rested coldly upon Kaimi's fire-backed form.
The craftswoman had the distinct impression of being weighted like meat in the market.
"So," The being spoke, voice hauntingly beautiful and distinctly feminine, "you, are my new incarnation." The creature's lips pulled back in a sneer, revealing rows perfect white enameled teeth, amid her humanoid golden mask.
Kaimi's mind raced, infinite questions forming as she tried to make sense of the strange void she now found herself in. Her hand reached to touch her own brow, numbly aware of the sign that shone from it, before it was interrupted by the shadows slithering together. What emerged from the writhing darkness was something indescribable. Having just witnessed her own craft at its finest, it paled in comparison to the metallic being before her. And what's more. It moved. It breathed. SHE spoke. And as the venomous words poured from her golden lips, Kaimi quivered. Then, a tang of bitterness rose in her, a fire that would not be stamped out with that remark. The craftsman steeled herself. "What!?"
It didn't sound nearly as imposing as she would have liked.
The being breathed a derisive - yet perversely beautiful - snort, turning away - her strange liquid armor gown, hemmed in intricate gold runes, whirled around her slender form. "You are my current incarnation." She repeated, gesturing dismissively over her shoulder, as she approached the statue in the room's center. Her slender orichalcum fingers trialed soundlessly over the - now white - obsidian face of Kaimi's statue. The being's eyes narrowed, though her words were absent minded. "We are the same - now and forever."
Memories - many which were not Kaimi's own - rose in her mind. Disparate references to Anathema and the Chosen of the Sun came together, informed by the memories of the being - Viveka, called the Dying, of the Twilight caste - to reveal their true character; of the Solar Exalted.
Kaimi's mouth worked before her voice did, sufficiently alarmed by the liquid motion. Everything about this being was on the outer edges of her imagination, and she briefly wondered if this is what it was like to meet a god. There was a mental twitch to this comparison. Even most gods had their flaws. The new exalt was at a loss to describe what she was seeing even to herself as it was happening. Beautiful for her age and people, Kai felt small, powerless and disgusting, her voice sounding as a croak following the other, "I, th-that's imp -"
"You should feel honored." Viveka observed, voice mild.
She stopped, the memories flooding through her mind. Visions of the ancient world, paradise, magic beyond imagination and hell. Kaimi's stomach turned as mass destruction, blood and torture began to invade her thoughts as well. Throat dry, she stammered, "Honored? For this?" Never feeling the relief of evacuating her stomach, it took all of her to not reel in place. "Y-you're a monster. You weren't always but...no. I'm not you. I'm not that."
The strength she attempted to project with those words failed. She was only trying to convince herself.
Viveka's silver lips quirked in a confident and cold smirk, as the weight of her gaze settled fully on Kaimi and she stepped away from the bleached obsidian of the statue. "A monster?" She asked, voice lyrical. One of her golden hands slid through the liquid silver mane of her hair. She laughed merrily, the sound both beautiful and unnatural. Her smile returned as she regarded the craftswoman, "I simply made the world more beautiful." She gestured vaguely toward the statue at her back, "As a fellow craftswoman, surely you can see the value in that."
The stonemason sneered, not buying it, “You raped the land and its creatures, churning out abominations to add to your collection, your military might. Perhaps at one point you did, but it was outweighed by the destruction you’ve wrought.” Standing her ground against the impossibly intimidating Solar echo, copper hands balled into fists. “You’ve murdered thousands in cold blood, all for your selfish drive. There is no value in that. Now leave me, apparition.”
Viveka's smile was cold, the strangely beautiful laugh that filled the air carried a tinge of - chillingly infectiousness - madness. Reflexively, Kaimi felt herself smile - and the realization chilled her, shocking her into sobriety. With that, the ancient Solar began to fade - though at the last moment, the golden caste to her skin vanished and was replaced with the healthy deep brown flesh of the Southeast.
"I am a Lawgiver." Viveka stated, voice suddenly fuller and far more human. On her now transparent forehead was the same crest Kaimi herself now bore. "I sought knowledge, and with it, I changed the world." Viveka's grey eyes looked with Kaimi's copper ones, as her words faded to a mere whisper.
"...and so will you."
When Kaimi next blinked, she found herself - once more - clutching a broom. Her mother's voice cut in, as if no time had passed.
"- house is shaking!"
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