Futuristic Looking for experienced writers/RPers to help expand on a story with me

[Darth Oats]

I am planning for this to be a Sci-Fi Thiller/Horror with a high possibility of death. The main goal of this space-faring group is to find new planets to inhabit.

Also, the humans will not be the center of this story. I'm planning of more for the Sirens to be the central focus.

:This is what I have so far:

HUMAN STORY


It is the year 2105, a planet named Earth is on the brink of eradication thanks to the sentient species who live on it's surface. Overpopulation and a considerable amount of pollution coupled with the lack of focus towards space travel has caused the Humans to become highly self-destructive. The emotionally driven, war-like species only has a small group of individuals who have realized their fault earlier in time. This group calls themselves "The Collection".


It's members include a good mix of occupations. The majority of which are scientists and those who believe in a more natural or spiritual way of living. They live together in the last bit of natural forest that hasn't been affected by nuclear radiation or recreated by scientific means. All of their focus being that of protecting this forest and preserving their way of life. Security and military trained individuals are also a part of The Collection and dedicate their lives to defending it from outside governments. So far they are successful, but only mainly because outside governments are more focused on domination of each other instead of taking a bit of forest from the hippies.


SPECIES INFORMATION:


FOR MALE AND FEMALE


Average Age Limit: 100 yrs


Average Height: 5'6"


Average Weight: 137 lbs


Skin Variations: From pale pink to dark brown. Albino occurs, but is rare.


Eye Colors: Shades of blue, green, and brown have been observed.


Biotic Ability: Humans of this age have recognized their level of intuition. The ability to make something from almost nothing is now widely known. Humans can invent a simple machine on the spot with a small amount of resources.


MILITARY/SECURITY APPEARANCE:


Human combat uniforms come in many variations due to each person having a diverse background.

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SPACE TRAVEL:


The Human's low level space technology is helped along by the Siron and Kist Ra'om engineers.


-Carrier-


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SIRON STORY


Light Years away, multiple sentient species are coming together to create a group called The Order of Infinite. The primary objective being to explore the galaxy and catalog every planet that has evolved life-forms. With a secondary objective of finding a new planet, or group of planets, to call home. The creators and in some ways, leaders, of this group are a species that call themselves Siron. From the planet, Ultier Rech, a planet whose landscape has a government-enforced ratio of natural wildlife and Siron-reformed desert land. Fences line the wildlife, and they're strictly maintained by guards and soldiers. The rest is shining lights and huge crowds. The homeless are nonexistent, and rumors circulate as to why.


Their culture is Militaristic and power-based. They have an absolute monarchy, controlled by the one they call King, who is treated much like a god, and has all the power of one. The masses pay taxes gladly, and value honor and service above most. Everything is institutionalized, from art and poetry to military service. Each structure of society is under a single man's power, each called "Prime Minister". The Siron are comfortable with this, since it works, and they are given limited freedom over their lives, so long as they submit to greater power, they are left alone. Conflict arises when the monarchy seizes land, or smothers naysayers, and as a result, a small group has fragmented from this society, one of lawyers, scientists, and artists. They've amassed their wealth and are the causers of this whole event, deciding to split from their homeworld due to the overwhelming oppressiveness from their government that was accepted by the rest of their culture for so long.[/tab]


SPECIES INFORMATION:

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FOR MALE AND FEMALE


Average Age Limit: 200 yrs


Average Height: 5'2"


Average Weight: 113 lbs


Skin Variations: All shades of blue and purple. Darker shades are observed in males. The opposite for females. The albino white are extremely rare.


Eye Colors: Neon shades of blue, purple, red, and green have been observed.


Biotic Ability: Telepathy. This mind link can only be reached through physical touch however. Siron are spoiled by this and prefer it to communicate with instead of actually speaking.


MILITARY/SECURITY APPEARANCE:


Siron have access to great minds and top of the line technological advancements.

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SPACE TRAVEL:


The majority of Siron technology is very sleek in appearance.


They believe they are better than most, so they enjoy showing it off in their design.


-Carrier-

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-Exploration Shuttle-

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-Fighters-

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[Darth Oats]

PHELIDIOM STORY


Along with them, the Sirons brought their species that had been purely evolved with a servitory nature. A species from the planet, Kelvet VI, Lush jungles beset by plains, water pouring in from the moon in a stream of liquid. The core of their planet is particularly close, drying much of the ground except what liquid immediately touches or is near. The sheer raw resource is met with the industrial takeover of the Siron.


A jovial, complacent culture that has evolved while under service of the Siron. A much higher level past what the Humans had done to the dog species, the Siron had done to the Phelidiom. They accept criticism with smiles and song, and take on hard labor with no complaint. While some are bitter being the bottom of the barrel, such voices are quickly either silenced or buried under the majority of happy workers. Different groups used for different purposes. The military, the food handlers, and the laborers. All forming a caste system within themselves as well. Some within the Siron also believe the Phelidiom should be free just as they had wanted to be free from their oppressors. This movement hasn't made much momentum, though, considering how comfortable everyone has become with their roles in society. The majority of the Phelidiom admitting to not even knowing what they would do if they were set free. They are seen as unintelligent and good only for obedience.[/tab]


SPECIES INFORMATION:

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FOR MALE AND FEMALE


Average Age Limit: 100 yrs


Average Height: 6'6"


Average Weight: 218 lbs


Skin Variations: Shades of browns, grays, and black. No albino has ever been observed.


Eye Colors: Shades of gold, brown, and gray have been observed.


Biotic Ability: Enhanced natural senses. Depending on what they are bred for determines which senses are heightened.


MILITARY/SECURITY APPEARANCE:


Phelidiom are always equipped with a past version of Siron gear.

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SPACE TRAVEL: [see Siron technology.]


KIST RA'OM STORY


After setting off on the this journey, the first species met also had a group that wanted to leave their homeworld. The species called Kist Ra'om, from the planet Alisar then joined them. Their planet burned to a crisp by warfare, the remaining portion of habitable land is held in a suspended bubble of cultivated land. Scorched land, and that which is not has an artificial atmosphere wherein green plants are a rare sight and much is maintained by machinery. The buildings scrape at the sky, bunched together, and every person is small. Multiple levels make up this single massive metropolis, and underground, farms take up every habitable space.


Scientists and a broken culture holds learning and restraint of emotion as principal tenets. They focus upon non conflict, and any physical violence is immediately met with fierce, swift, and withdrawn exile that leads to death without question. When emotional outbursts are witnessed, it manifests in the growing of "flames" across their skin, the accused is put on trial. If two or more witnesses attest to seeing what they call "The Forbidden", the accused is put in solitary confinement or are permanently exiled. Many of their people have an undying loyalty to each other. Their leaders are a council of the most accomplished persons, voted upon by the majority of land-owning citizens. This council makes the laws and appoints the judiciary system. The state uses percentages for each political party, supporting a multi-party system of governance.[/tab]


SPECIES INFORMATION:

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FOR MALE AND FEMALE


Average Age Limit: 150 yrs


Average Height: 6'1"


Average Weight: 157 lbs


Skin Variations: Almost all colors in the light spectrum have been observed.


Eye Colors: Any color other than pure white and pure black have been observed.


Biotic Ability: "The Forbidden" is something used when in high emotional stress. Pheromones excrete from the pores in their skin in a bright orange or red. Which is why it is said to look like flames. This process induces accelerated regeneration for a short period of time. It is physically tolling and leaves permanent scarring.


MILITARY/SECURITY APPEARANCE:


The Kist Ra'om does have a military. They successfully created inhibitors that are built into their suits. It's sole purpose is to restrict chemical imbalances that are caused by emotions while in combat.

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SPACE TRAVEL:


The majority of Kist Ra'om technology is very rugged in appearance. Their engineers believe endurance is more important than any other quality.


-Carrier-

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-Exploration Shuttle/Frigate-

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:First Planet:

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There she was. Big and beautiful. Bet’tatula. The vast green planet glowed in the distance. A thin outer atmosphere reflected the sun back at them. A combustible, poisonous film that held in all the glory and wealth of this long sought out planet. It was not until the last 30 years or so that we had finally came upon the technology to let us break through this protective layer. In the years before, our crafts would just burn up like moths to a flame trying to reach the treasures behind the wonderful light.


The planet was completely green from this distance; it seemed to be a solid mass of trees and grass. No signs of free flowing water, a concept that our scientist had struggled for so long to comprehend. But as it goes, science superseded itself and we found the truth. Deep rivers rolled underneath a reedy underbrush. Hopefully teeming with some sort of marine wildlife.

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[Darth Oats]

:Main antagonists of the first story:

The Queen. The babies from it's thorax either grow into the drones in second image or the beast in the 3rd image. 1 "warrior" beast for every 20-25 drones.

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