Just some of my characters for a new RP

[Chen Gong]

Oh. And some context. Form's are ways of fighting. Chi is a extension of the spirit. X Form are Chi fighting. And Fukuya is a Japan inspired empire situated on a group of islands.

• Yuan Pang, The Drunken Serpent
• Yang Quin, Sealighted Soul
• WIP Characters and Ideas
• Other Stuff
• Update List

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  Yuan Pang, Drunken Serpent
  Name: Yuan Su Pang
  
  Age: 24
  
  Country of Origin: Fukuya
  
  Physique: Yuan stands at measly 5'7 and only weighs in at 157 Ibs. Alongside this, he has a slim, non muscular build and is generally physically weak.
  
  Chi Color: Purple
  
  Chi Accessible? Prodigal control and accessibility
  
  Equipment-
  
  • A feather fan[Used with chi to kick up winds when waved]
  • Tanto dagger
  • 2 bottles of heavy alcohol for leisure or for numbing pain
  • A bottle of poison should he ever need to...well...Stop himself from spilling secrets
  • Yumi Bow and quiver with 20 steel tipped arrows
  Proficient Weapon Forms-
  
  • Form XII-Guerrilla Tactics[Adept]
  • Form VIII-Unarmed Combat[Adept]
  • Form X-I[Near Mastery]
  • Form X-III[Near Mastery]
  Backstory: Born to a family of intellects from Matenichi, Yuan was a prodigy from birth, capable of basic Chi manipulation by 3, capable of Chi based wind manipulation by 5, capable of Chi based telekinesis by 8, capable of hovering for a short period of time by 14 and capable of using Chi to heal and boost his attacks by 18. It helped that he was extensively groomed and trained by the elders of the family to be the next clan patriarch which made him a master of politics, even earning him a Scroll of Political Recognition from the Shogun of Matenichi himself and was eventually recruited by the Shogun of Matenichi as a Political Advisor and as a Strategist when he was 23.
  
  Later that year, when in a tavern, Yuan set up a board game of Shogi[Think Japanese Chess] and stated that he would take any and all challengers, that he would bet money and that he would drink more alcohol from every piece he took from the opponents side. Yuan supposedly defeated more than thirty people using a basic strategy that he called 'Snake Coil' and had downed 17 mugs of alcohol by the time he passed out, this feat earned him the nickname of The Drunken Serpent and solidified him as a candidate for the smartest men in Fukuya and possibly in all of the explored world.
  
  Yuan himself is a confident, calm, well spoken and...well. Womanizing man. He is used to being smarter than most others and would probably become distressed if another of his intellect where to take the enemies' side. This has made Yuan quite paranoid and has caused him to develop a sociopathic personality towards others of his intellectual calibre. Yuan is also somewhat of a brat mainly due to his lavish upbringing and filled family coffers to pull money from, despite this, Yuan knows when to cut the brat attitude, especially with superiors.
  
  
  
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  Yang Quin, Sealighted Soul
  Name: Yang Tiong Quin[Prefers to be called Kui Tiong Quin due to his adoption]
  
  Age: 27
  
  Country of Origin: Fukuya
  
  Physique: Standing at a tall 6'7 and weighting in at 200 Ibs, Yang has a intimidating physique and build, being quite strong from training and wandering.
  
  Chi Color: Red-Orange
  
  Chi Accessible? Only in meditation.
  
  Equipment-
  
  • Full suit of steel plate armour
  • Basic Fukuya steel sword/katana
  • Round steel shield
  • Yumi bow and a quiver filled with 35 steel tipped arrows
  Proficient Weapon Forms-
  
  • Form I - Shielding[Adept]
  • Form VI - Mounted Blade[Journeyman]
  • Form VII - Guerrilla Tactics[Near Mastery]
  Backstory: Yang was born to the prestigious and powerful noble Quin family and had a life planned for him by the elders of the family, forcing him into training and scholarships from the young age of 5, this rigorous grooming happened from the age of 5 right up to the age of 16. This became too much for Yang and, taking his personally made armour, fled from his home town of Shikito and began wandering.
  
  Yang had a shaky wandering start and nearly died from illness if not for a couple in Matenichi who took him in and, with his permission, adopted him[That family is the Kui Family], and helped him hide from his pursuing family from Shikiti. Eventually, when Yang was 20, he joined the Fukuyan Military to lose his pursuers.
  
  Yang proved strong at quelling uprisings but was looked down upon for using a shield, this has led him to abandon using a shield unless necessary and use a Yumi Bow, he also prefers to be in sea battles which earned him the nickname The Sealighted Soul but has no qualms with land battles.
  
  
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  General:
  
  Kui Yi, The Vanquishing Mind
  Name: Kui Jin Yi
  
  Age: 43[Although he applies a chi layer over his skin which makes him appear younger]
  
  Country of Origin: Fukuya
  
  Physique: Most people haven't seen what Kui looks like under his heavy robes, he actually, unlike most people's ideas, has some meat on his bones and has trained to be decently built. He himself is 5'8 and weights around 175 Ibs.
  
  Chi Color: Magenta[Bright Purple]
  
  Chi Accessible? Masterful control.
  
  Equipment-
  
  • A horsehair whip, used mainly with Form X-I and with chi for attacks
  • Set of bracers with concealed blades[Think ACs Hidden Blades but it's on the top of the wrist and not the bottom]
  • A set of gloves with metal plates over the knuckles for unarmed combat
  Proficient Weapon Forms-
  
  • Form II[Adept]
  • Form V[Adept]
  • Form VIII[Adept]
  • Form X-I[Mastery]
  • Form X-II[Near Mastery]
  Backstory:
  
  To be added
  
  
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  Kui Wei, The Learning Leader
  Name: Kui Din Wei
  
  Age: 17
  
  Country of Origin: Fukuya
  
  Physique: Standing at 5'7 and weighing around 150 Ibs with a slim build, Kui Wei is a young man and filled with energy and aspiration.
  
  Chi Color: Dark Purple
  
  Chi Accessible? Not much.
  
  Equipment-
  
  • Unlike most Fukuyan's who use swords, Kui Wei does not use a traditional katana, he has a sword modelled after a sword found on skeleton around a year before the RP[That skeleton was a sailor from Heistrea, the sword being a duelling rapier.
  • A handmand wrist crossbow[It's a mini bow attached to his right wrist which he can fire iron bolts from.
  • A mask made of green jade and rimmed with gold.[It's based on the Phantom Of The Opera mask]
  Proficient Weapon Forms-
  
  • Form IV[Novice]
  • Form V[Novice]
  • Form X-II[Novice]
  Backstory: To be added
  
  
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  I'm giving these guys themes.
  
  Yuan:
  
  
  Huo:
  
  
  Yang:
  
  
  Kui Yi[What I think I'll use]:
  
  
  Kui Yi[Hypothetical backup story theme]:
  
  
  Kui Wei:
  
  
  
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  Update 10/10/2017: Removed Huo Song. Recycling his backstory and modifying it for a idea.
  
  Made a WIP fro Kui Yi and updated Yang to have been adopted by the Kui family.
  
  Made a WIP for Kui Wei, Kui Yi's son.
  
  

 

[Chen Gong]

No feedback, does that mean they're good or?

...I need feedback.

 

[Genji Shimada]

they all sound very promising

 

[adrian_]

wow

 

[Damafaud]

This is just preference, but I think the stats should be displayed on grid instead of a part of backstory as the others will have no idea what are the stats reflecting to. Maybe something like this?

Chi Manipulation
Aspect	Scale	Total
Basic Chi	▌▌▌▌▌▌▌▌▌▌▌▌▌▌▌▌▌▌▌▌	03/20
Wind Manipulation	▌▌▌▌▌▌▌▌▌▌▌▌▌▌▌▌▌▌▌▌	05/20
Telekinesis	▌▌▌▌▌▌▌▌▌▌▌▌▌▌▌▌▌▌▌▌	08/20
Hovering	▌▌▌▌▌▌▌▌▌▌▌▌▌▌▌▌▌▌▌▌	14/20
Healing	▌▌▌▌▌▌▌▌▌▌▌▌▌▌▌▌▌▌▌▌	18/20
Enhance Attack	▌▌▌▌▌▌▌▌▌▌▌▌▌▌▌▌▌▌▌▌	18/20

Again, this is just my preference. Sorry to bother. ^-^

 

[Chen Gong]

I would. But I can't BBCode for shit.