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Graded [Osun City] Into the Woods

Isekai Hell RP Grade
The rp felt like it started with promise and goals, but then got lost somewhere along the way. Didn't help that some rp'ers don't reliably finish the projects they start. There were several funnies which were amusing to read. There was also a few cringe moments where relatively low level 0 influence characters were claiming to be greater and more influential than they were including controlling npcs they shouldn't have had (coughjulietcough). Felt like the rp may have been more cohesive if the narrator had more control over how the later additions to the cast came in. Perhaps the narrator did have control, but it felt like folks kinda introduced themselves as they felt best. The new additions then became the focus of the plot as opposed to the objectives around the characters gathering in the first place. I do praise the concluding of the rp rather than dragging it out in an attempt to make more of it. Likely, this storyline could be picked up again at a later time and achieve more.

Aftermath
Light County and Orbeye barony have improved relations
Light county and wilderness fae in the county have improved relations
County is aware of the odd, water drinking construct. The peasantry generally regard it as a construct rather than a monster anyway due to hits lack of visible armaments.
The church privately sends its apologies to the Light County for any troubles caused by the envoy they 'sent'.

Rewards
Linneus - 24 points (narrating bonus present)
  • optional title acquired [Peace Maker] - Character has taken steps to maintain the peace and good relations in his domain. Character's domain has reduced chance of being in a hostile relationship with other domains.

Ciunan - 22 points -
  • optional title acquired [Merry] - character is frequently overcome with fae like merriment. While more respectable individuals may try to hide their amusement at improper times, character freely displays their amusement. It is often contagious.
Aria - 22 points
  • optional title acquired [Liaison] - character has become the go between for one or more entities and acts as the voice of a faction/group of individuals.
Pierre - 12 points
  • optional title acquired [Crawling Boat] - character is frequently close to water and perceived to be crawling along the ground due to lack of legs. Most do not know its origin or purpose, and it does not look like any existing construct they are familiar with, so the term persists in the minds of many who see it for the first time.
Porpentina - 16 points
  • optional title acquired [Fated] - Despite size of the world, circumstance, and goals, the character shows what can happen when fate is at work. Sometimes, when there is no way forward, one will work out. And sometimes when there are many ways forward, all but one will close.
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