Axty
Want To Be Writer
Archie stood frozen for a moment, eyes wide with quiet astonishment as his gaze fell upon the charm she handed him. He reached out slowly, as though touching it too quickly might break the spell of the moment. He remembered—vividly—the story he had once mentioned to her in passing, barely thinking she’d remember. And yet, she had. She listened. She remembered. His fingers brushed the charm, and then he gently clasped it, holding it like something sacred before fastening it around his neck.
“Thank you,” he whispered, his voice rough with emotion. His hand lingered on the charm resting just over his heart, and he looked at her with eyes that shone, overwhelmed by the love she had just shown him.
Then, slowly, Archie stepped back.
“But with that…” he said, his voice steadying with purpose, “I should give you something too.”
He knelt.
With a quiet, deliberate motion, he pulled out a small box from the inner pocket of his robe—his fingers shaking only slightly now. As he opened it to reveal the delicate ring nestled inside, the moonlight caught the silver band, making it glimmer like a soft promise.
“Florence,” he began, voice thick with emotion, “I’ve opened up to you more than I’ve opened up to anyone in my life… and even after all of it, you haven’t looked at me with pity or disgust. You’ve never once flinched. You’ve seen me… all of me… and still, you stayed.”
His eyes lifted to meet hers, steady and sincere.
“Your heart is so beautiful—so kind, so gentle. Almost as beautiful as you are. And I don’t want our marriage to be just something arranged. I want it to be something we choose. I want to be with you not as nobles fulfilling a duty, but as two people in love… as us.”
He took a breath, his hand holding the ring out toward her.
“So will you accept me—truly accept me—not just as your husband, but as the man who wants to spend the rest of his life loving you, honestly, completely?”
“Thank you,” he whispered, his voice rough with emotion. His hand lingered on the charm resting just over his heart, and he looked at her with eyes that shone, overwhelmed by the love she had just shown him.
Then, slowly, Archie stepped back.
“But with that…” he said, his voice steadying with purpose, “I should give you something too.”
He knelt.
With a quiet, deliberate motion, he pulled out a small box from the inner pocket of his robe—his fingers shaking only slightly now. As he opened it to reveal the delicate ring nestled inside, the moonlight caught the silver band, making it glimmer like a soft promise.
“Florence,” he began, voice thick with emotion, “I’ve opened up to you more than I’ve opened up to anyone in my life… and even after all of it, you haven’t looked at me with pity or disgust. You’ve never once flinched. You’ve seen me… all of me… and still, you stayed.”
His eyes lifted to meet hers, steady and sincere.
“Your heart is so beautiful—so kind, so gentle. Almost as beautiful as you are. And I don’t want our marriage to be just something arranged. I want it to be something we choose. I want to be with you not as nobles fulfilling a duty, but as two people in love… as us.”
He took a breath, his hand holding the ring out toward her.
“So will you accept me—truly accept me—not just as your husband, but as the man who wants to spend the rest of his life loving you, honestly, completely?”