Imperator_tenebrae
Senior Member
Feel free to critique my characters here.
These are characters that have been in RPs that prematurely died or being thought up and have not found a RP to fit in yet. This maybe updated from time to time and anyone who comes here looking for characters feel free to contact me if you wish to cast any of these characters into your RP.
Without breather
Casual + breather
Appearance: Beneath his breather and cowl is a sickly ashen complexion on a hairless face with dark eye sockets and chapped lips. He has piercing cold indigo eyes of a ruthless warrior and beneath the rest is a very pale individual bearing various scars and discoloration from previous wounds and over exposure to toxins and chemicals during his youth. Lithe and slightly athletic at 6’ 1” despite his sickly appearance.
Name: Slayne (no record of last name)
Nickname/Codename: Murder
Gender: Male
Age: 28
Sexuality: Asexual although heterosexual when pushed
Personality: Slayne is obsessed with the use of ruthless firepower, fear factor and sense of invulnerability. His philosophy is based on the projecting the sense of invulnerability by taking huge amounts of punishment, debasing the enemy’s will to fight and being an unstoppable force of death and destruction. He is a rather cold individual who exhibits cruel and savage demeanor in combat, reserving neither mercy nor pity for the enemy and innocent bystanders. He is a dangerous combination of cool methodical patience, brutality and rancor when in the cockpit. Outside the cockpit, Slayne can be very anti-social and fixated on the next mission.
Bio: Raised as a child soldier, when he was an infant his parents were political enemies and thus killed off through a purge of an unjust cause in some god forsaken backwater country that no longer exists. His first kill was at six years old and survived numerous near-death incidents and has killed his way through the ranks which over time gave him the psychological implication of kill or be killed and fixated on instinct that in order to live another day he must take a life. His close encounter with power armored infantry developed his psychological profile in the effectiveness of combating a seemingly invulnerable enemy as his rifle was useless against the armor. The psychological effect of fear and hopelessness until using overwhelming firepower to kill his tormentors, there is no such thing as excessive firepower. At age 15 he was exposed to chemicals and toxins that damaged his lungs and after prolonged exposure during his teenage years caused further disfigurement to the point he needed to wear a breather since breathing clean air would turn his lungs into mush and must receive regular injections of chemicals that act both as pain killer and psychiatric compound. Over the years after killing cell leaders, fundamentalists, high ranking clerics and rebel faction leaders, many of whom were his former mentors, superiors and caretakers he was tired of being duped into fighting for causes that only inflict more misery and pain upon others and decided to work for himself and chose the life of the mercenary.
Likes: Solitude, rain, tea, working on his mech, dark humor, cold weather
Dislikes: Crowds, lairs, physical contact, manipulative characters, cats
Rank: First Sergeant
Other: Heavy assault specialist, battle hardened veteran and surprisingly a good cook.
Appearance: A custom chassis built with an amalgamation of augmentations of other older and new designs to maximize durability and the capacity to carry as much firepower the actuators can handle. Originally made from a long retired behemoth chassis made of rare composites reinforced with carbon fibers, endo alloys and duratech materials that proven to be far too expensive for mass production. Aptly named “Destroyer” and it embodies everything in Slayne’s ideology on the battlefield. Painted and designed to be an effigy of death itself it bristles with weapons and multiple layers of armor and protection to maximize durability at the high cost of tactical mobility and speed.
Mech I.D.: 166-109-33-7
Armaments: Crusher claws with death grip piston upgrades, wrist mounted twin-linked “Firelance” beam lasers, dual heavy 150mm “Punisher” railguns, head mounted quad 20mm chain cannons, dual chest mounted 220mm “Warhammer” class tandem missile bays and under wrist mounted “Demon Fire” two stage plasma flame throwers.
Defenses: Smoke grenades, Iron Crown hard-kill anti-missile defenses, ERA blast plates and Durban II ECM package for soft-kill weapon targeting and layered anti-missile defenses.
Other: All systems are redundant with analog hardware since he distrusts the new fangled digital hardware on the newer mechs. It reciprocates Slayne’s mindset of durability and battlefield endurance to project the factor of being an unstoppable killing force. The latest edition was an active kinetic weave plates around vulnerable areas such as the cockpit, heat sinks, radiator vents and reactor block to improve the durability even further.
These are characters that have been in RPs that prematurely died or being thought up and have not found a RP to fit in yet. This maybe updated from time to time and anyone who comes here looking for characters feel free to contact me if you wish to cast any of these characters into your RP.
Appearance: Beneath his breather and cowl is a sickly ashen complexion on a hairless face with dark eye sockets and chapped lips. He has piercing cold indigo eyes of a ruthless warrior and beneath the rest is a very pale individual bearing various scars and discoloration from previous wounds and over exposure to toxins and chemicals during his youth. Lithe and slightly athletic at 6’ 1” despite his sickly appearance.
Name: Slayne (no record of last name)
Nickname/Codename: Murder
Gender: Male
Age: 28
Sexuality: Asexual although heterosexual when pushed
Personality: Slayne is obsessed with the use of ruthless firepower, fear factor and sense of invulnerability. His philosophy is based on the projecting the sense of invulnerability by taking huge amounts of punishment, debasing the enemy’s will to fight and being an unstoppable force of death and destruction. He is a rather cold individual who exhibits cruel and savage demeanor in combat, reserving neither mercy nor pity for the enemy and innocent bystanders. He is a dangerous combination of cool methodical patience, brutality and rancor when in the cockpit. Outside the cockpit, Slayne can be very anti-social and fixated on the next mission.
Bio: Raised as a child soldier, when he was an infant his parents were political enemies and thus killed off through a purge of an unjust cause in some god forsaken backwater country that no longer exists. His first kill was at six years old and survived numerous near-death incidents and has killed his way through the ranks which over time gave him the psychological implication of kill or be killed and fixated on instinct that in order to live another day he must take a life. His close encounter with power armored infantry developed his psychological profile in the effectiveness of combating a seemingly invulnerable enemy as his rifle was useless against the armor. The psychological effect of fear and hopelessness until using overwhelming firepower to kill his tormentors, there is no such thing as excessive firepower. At age 15 he was exposed to chemicals and toxins that damaged his lungs and after prolonged exposure during his teenage years caused further disfigurement to the point he needed to wear a breather since breathing clean air would turn his lungs into mush and must receive regular injections of chemicals that act both as pain killer and psychiatric compound. Over the years after killing cell leaders, fundamentalists, high ranking clerics and rebel faction leaders, many of whom were his former mentors, superiors and caretakers he was tired of being duped into fighting for causes that only inflict more misery and pain upon others and decided to work for himself and chose the life of the mercenary.
Likes: Solitude, rain, tea, working on his mech, dark humor, cold weather
Dislikes: Crowds, lairs, physical contact, manipulative characters, cats
Rank: First Sergeant
Other: Heavy assault specialist, battle hardened veteran and surprisingly a good cook.
[MECH]
Appearance: A custom chassis built with an amalgamation of augmentations of other older and new designs to maximize durability and the capacity to carry as much firepower the actuators can handle. Originally made from a long retired behemoth chassis made of rare composites reinforced with carbon fibers, endo alloys and duratech materials that proven to be far too expensive for mass production. Aptly named “Destroyer” and it embodies everything in Slayne’s ideology on the battlefield. Painted and designed to be an effigy of death itself it bristles with weapons and multiple layers of armor and protection to maximize durability at the high cost of tactical mobility and speed.
Mech I.D.: 166-109-33-7
Armaments: Crusher claws with death grip piston upgrades, wrist mounted twin-linked “Firelance” beam lasers, dual heavy 150mm “Punisher” railguns, head mounted quad 20mm chain cannons, dual chest mounted 220mm “Warhammer” class tandem missile bays and under wrist mounted “Demon Fire” two stage plasma flame throwers.
Defenses: Smoke grenades, Iron Crown hard-kill anti-missile defenses, ERA blast plates and Durban II ECM package for soft-kill weapon targeting and layered anti-missile defenses.
Other: All systems are redundant with analog hardware since he distrusts the new fangled digital hardware on the newer mechs. It reciprocates Slayne’s mindset of durability and battlefield endurance to project the factor of being an unstoppable killing force. The latest edition was an active kinetic weave plates around vulnerable areas such as the cockpit, heat sinks, radiator vents and reactor block to improve the durability even further.
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