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Advice/Help I need some writing advice/critique from yall


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It was a RP starter that was meant for a group of people that are already familiar with my characters (so it’s not the best example of character introduction on that part). As far as the concept goes, Heaven and Hell are at war, but one demon introduces the idea of peace—this kind of mindset is unheard of and forbid in Hell. Most either fight for one side or the other, and are not neutral. The character speaks out on this, and is taken to see the King for his opinion on that matter.
I will admit there’s a lot of context missing here but I want to focus on the writing (description and whatnot) than the idea itself.
I see, I see. Well, good luck then :)

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