Other From Absolute Monarchy to Social Democracy. | What do you think of this concept?

[NesyCelvestian]

Story - From Absolute Monarchy to Social Democracy. | A story by NesyCelvestian | Uptated 16th september.

Chapter 1: New beginnings, an introduction. In the lands of fairy tales and in the lands of myth, there were four kingdoms that were once divided into 20 countries. Those kingdoms united to form 4 kingdoms for unknown reasons; Saura , Ardogan , Xerota and Lynexia. A world war has broken...

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So, I made a concept of a character that is "Isekai" where it's basically introducing foreign concepts into an alternate medieval world. I also made it a plot and I thought, hey it might be cool and was wondering if I could actually make it feasible with a plot. I think I did, but I want to hear your opinion about this story and what kind of jam I can improve on it.
Thanks.

 

[Idea]

"Social" democracy? How is that different from plain old democracy? (sorry if the question seems accusatory, I don't mean it that way, just wasn't sure how else to phrase it)

 

[NesyCelvestian]

"Social" democracy? How is that different from plain old democracy? (sorry if the question seems accusatory, I don't mean it that way, just wasn't sure how else to phrase it)

Social Democracy is where the citzens have a say in the governments actions. It is a representative democracy. Social Democracy is an ideology based out of capitalism with social safety net as a counterweight. It also wants to reform capitalism instead of replacing it but democratic socialism wants to replace capitalism with socialism.

 

[Idea]

Social Democracy is where the citzens have a say in the governments actions. It is a representative democracy. Social Democracy is an ideology based out of capitalism with social safety net as a counterweight. It also wants to reform capitalism instead of replacing it but democratic socialism wants to replace capitalism with socialism.

I see. Thank you.

 

[NesyCelvestian]

I see. Thank you.

Always welcome!

 

[Lorsh]

Will probably read more, you should proofread it though.

 

[NesyCelvestian]

Will probably read more, you should proofread it though.

Absoloutly, I'll try to find any inconsistancies.