Donut Village (Out of Character)

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Hanarei

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Have a seat, relax, and chat away all of your out of character needs!
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Love the stats system to keep ppl in balance! Question, are Uchihas allowed? And what about the noncannon ones like in the movies or games?
 
@Diagonal Noncannons are allowed, as well as purely original bloodlines. Just keep in mind how they work with Chakra Nature and keep that theme. I'm willing to work with someone to help them forge an original.


Uchiha... I'd say yes... but don't expect them to be exactly like the show. I'll probably regret it since everyone wants to be a damn uchiha but I don't want to straight up refuse it. Just expect it to be weaker and more limited.
 
@Hanarei Haha, that's true. When I Rp'd there were like five ppl who wanted to be an Uchia. I'm cool with making an original clan. I'll PM u the sheet before posting it on the character sign up~
 
@Diagonal I would say post about in through a message first with just the Kekkei Genkai in detail, giving what you saw with the backstory and the jutsu you see associated with it. It makes it easier to handle and if say it doesn't work you don't have a full sheet done with a blood limit that might of defined your character. ^^;;
 
Eyy people how ya'll doin?
 
Remember, the stat cap of 3 and total of 15 are meant as the 'highest', something that very few should really achieve. Characters who I see pushing to 'max out' the stats are going to be looked at with a far more critical eye. Remember, they are there in part for fun. Do not try and 'maximize' the character, the roleplay and development of a character is the most vital aspect to keep in mind. If you are in it to 'beat everyone', this roleplay might not be for you.
 
@Siri Academy Jutsu are Rank E, so they wouldn't count against you (thus why I don't put a limit on E-rank jutsu). Just keep in mind, you shouldn't really know that many Jutsu, its just more so what you can know... maybe having one or two techniques you might know from a family or the basics on a blood limit. ^^
 
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So I'm an idiot and realized I forgot to include Chakra Nature in the character sheets. I added that in now (just in the Jutsu section the 1st part of it) which shouldn't be hard to add to any sheets already in progress. I also touched up the code since it was bugging out and somehow didn't properly copy over the bold tags for some of the sections.


I threw together a quick example sheet to use as a reference just filled in with details of my character from a dead RP with the sheet used in the RP as a sample of what an average fresh Genin should look like and the end result of the sheet should generally be.
 
*stuffs face with donuts*


This is the best OOC ever! You were right @Hanarei !


Can I make the Uchia Clan? I have some ideas for a new take on them.


More E Ranked Jutsu! (Again anyone may use them)


Chakra Fenito-Chakra Feint


E Ranked Supplementary
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This jutsu tricks your opent into thinking that you have less (or more) chakra then you actually have.


It works by concentrating your chakra inwards (or outwards) and leaving less concentrated chakra on the outside (or inside).


Now I realise that this a cannon ability (making your chakra seem lower then it is, not the concentration bit.)


Chikyū Putto-Earth Fang


E-Ranked Offensive
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This jutsu uses chakra to throw a sharpend (by this technique) pebble sized bit of earth at your foe. Works by molfing your chakra to sharpen a rock (which you have used chakra to hold) and then throwing it.


Oh and this is the ultimate Jutsu


Donut Bombardment


S-Ranked World Destroyer
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Noooooo! The donut village have developed their doomsday device! Run their is no stopping it!

It works by casualy giving every one the most delicious and most explosive donut imaginable.​
 
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Questions! @Hanarei


1) When will we be able to get a second chakra nature? Would it be linked to stats? Also if you have a Bloodline would you start out with multiple natures?


2) How would we document stat changes?


3)How much of the academy are we RPing?


4) What are the conditions like in Koseis slums?


5) Do the inhabitants go to factories with conditions akain to post industrial London?


6) What abilitys can we give weapons and how powerfull can they be?


7) Should the smoke jutsu I made be fire natured or wind natured?
 
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@Kyubi Possibly... but your going to have to really sell Uchiha to me. I'm going to likely smack it down quite a bit in the process for accepting it and taking it down a few pegs. Consider it a big challenge to pitch it to me.


The first technique I would say no to... Chakra Suppression Jutsu already handles this with a good downside... though it would be likely be towards a C-Rank Jutsu considering its usefulness and the amount of chakra control in order to use it.


The second one I'd probably also be against. Sharping a rock is doing a lot more to it and could be used as an effective weapon involving quite a bit of control again. It doesn't come off as an E-rank Jutsu.


The final ultimate Jutsu is clearly an SSS-Rank jutsu and lacks the powder sugar option so it would be rejected. Alternatively I would accept peanut butter filled as a clear alternative.


In regards to the questions.


1.) Those without a blood limit (or with a blood limit utilizing Yin/Yang) won't be able to use it. Those who do have one probably would learn to use it around chuunin level. As a drawback though someone with a Bloodline are more limited on the Jutsu they can use being more restricted to their chakra affinity while those who do not use a Kekkei Genkai will generally have an easier time using other elemental techniques, maybe not to the extent of their affinity but they can still learn to utilize them.


2.) I hadn't actually planned on it, though I might make some rule to mention it in like a small 'update' section once we get to that point. I'm going to take it into consideration for now.


3.) As far as I saw the RP go, I figured we would skip the entire academy part. I can play ou the academy a bit if people generally want to (primarily through the 'closing' bits) but I wanted to focus on the Genin really entertaining the world and seeing things more clearly and leaving 'childhood' in a way.


4.) The slums are extremely crowded. While they are called the slums, they are actually not completely terrible. There is some crime although it is often restricted to the underbelly of the city. Think of it just being very populated with small living quarters with most people being on the impoverished side, but generally kept in like and provided with at least some care. Koseki wants its workers as content as possible, while also being as cheap in the process as they can be.


5.) Exactly what it is like. There are some places that are better then others, but generally its relatively hard work and not the safest conditions. In a large part it is causing many health issues with the populous though a lot of that isn't completely known to the public.


6.) Weapons with actual abilities will be looked at pretty strictly. Most 'named' weapons are likely just based of design. If its got some ability attached and its going on your Genin, expect it to likely be rejected. Anything weapons do should be from a practical side, weapons with 'abilities' would be extremely few and far between... and likely not made with the best intentions.


Bring over your other stuff...

Kemuri no wa- Smoke Ring


Wind Release E-Ranked Supplementary

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A basic jutsu for Wind Natured Ninja created by some of the first academy instructors of Kemuri.


It is used to create a slightly hard to see and sense through smoke area around the user. There are quite a few advance variations, mainly including ones that empower the user of the justsu. (I added that so it wouldn't just be Zabuza's mist jutsu but with smoke)


It works by molding chakra into multiple hoops stacked on top of each other and expelling them outwards around the waist with the Dog Seal. It is given an E-Rank because molding one ring is simple. (and is surprisingly effective considering it's simplicity).


(Google translate called the next jutsu Sumōkuchōku)




Kemuri Chōku - Smoke Choke


Wind Release D-Ranked Offensive

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A novice variation on Smoke Burst which sends a half of a smaller Smoke Burst form the user's hands (again, the dog seal) to well, choke the target by getting smoke in their lungs.


(Now because of me looking up words which rhymed with Smoke (choke) I made up the above jutsu. Now, because of the above jutsu, I want to make my character a Wind Nature (I quess smoke jutsu could be fire based) and having Smoke Choke as a variation her parents made.)


The 1st one... given its use being beyond just a brief smoke cloud would probably be a D-rank minimum. Even if its just one 'cloud' its still doing some task beyond what a ninja at an academy would learn being more advance. I wouldn't see it being wind release primarily since its involving smoke which goes beyond wind. I can see it being a varient utilizing a smoke bomb and then being used to spread the smoke out further beyond to make it more effective at temporarily obscuring the vision of someone, though it wouldn't really be effective at making it hard to see through. Actually creating the smoke would probably entail a Kekkei Genkai to do so without any other factors.


The second one... same issue as first as far as creating the smoke. I can see making it hard to breath but if your somehow manipulating it to choke someone... then the Jutsu is sound much more like a C-Rank Jutsu to be used.


Try and keep Jutsus as private messages to not clutter the thread. Questions are fine here just I'd rather not have huge posts addressing several questions, many of which would only effect one person. ^^:;
 
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@Kyubi Possibly... but your going to have to really sell Uchiha to me. I'm going to likely smack it down quite a bit in the process for accepting it and taking it down a few pegs. Consider it a big challenge to pitch it to me.
The first technique I would say no to... Chakra Suppression Jutsu already handles this with a good downside... though it would be likely be towards a C-Rank Jutsu considering its usefulness and the amount of chakra control in order to use it.


The second one I'd probably also be against. Sharping a rock is doing a lot more to it and could be used as an effective weapon involving quite a bit of control again. It doesn't come off as an E-rank Jutsu.


The final ultimate Jutsu is clearly an SSS-Rank jutsu and lacks the powder sugar option so it would be rejected. Alternatively I would accept peanut butter filled as a clear alternative.


In regards to the questions.


1.) Those without a blood limit (or with a blood limit utilizing Yin/Yang) won't be able to use it. Those who do have one probably would learn to use it around chuunin level. As a drawback though someone with a Bloodline are more limited on the Jutsu they can use being more restricted to their chakra affinity while those who do not use a Kekkei Genkai will generally have an easier time using other elemental techniques, maybe not to the extent of their affinity but they can still learn to utilize them.


2.) I hadn't actually planned on it, though I might make some rule to mention it in like a small 'update' section once we get to that point. I'm going to take it into consideration for now.


3.) As far as I saw the RP go, I figured we would skip the entire academy part. I can play ou the academy a bit if people generally want to (primarily through the 'closing' bits) but I wanted to focus on the Genin really entertaining the world and seeing things more clearly and leaving 'childhood' in a way.


4.) The slums are extremely crowded. While they are called the slums, they are actually not completely terrible. There is some crime although it is often restricted to the underbelly of the city. Think of it just being very populated with small living quarters with most people being on the impoverished side, but generally kept in like and provided with at least some care. Koseki wants its workers as content as possible, while also being as cheap in the process as they can be.


5.) Exactly what it is like. There are some places that are better then others, but generally its relatively hard work and not the safest conditions. In a large part it is causing many health issues with the populous though a lot of that isn't completely known to the public.


6.) Weapons with actual abilities will be looked at pretty strictly. Most 'named' weapons are likely just based of design. If its got some ability attached and its going on your Genin, expect it to likely be rejected. Anything weapons do should be from a practical side, weapons with 'abilities' would be extremely few and far between... and likely not made with the best intentions.


Bring over your other stuff...

Kemuri no wa- Smoke Ring


Wind Release E-Ranked Supplementary

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A basic jutsu for Wind Natured Ninja created by some of the first academy instructors of Kemuri.


It is used to create a slightly hard to see and sense through smoke area around the user. There are quite a few advance variations, mainly including ones that empower the user of the justsu. (I added that so it wouldn't just be Zabuza's mist jutsu but with smoke)


It works by molding chakra into multiple hoops stacked on top of each other and expelling them outwards around the waist with the Dog Seal. It is given an E-Rank because molding one ring is simple. (and is surprisingly effective considering it's simplicity).


(Google translate called the next jutsu Sumōkuchōku)




Kemuri Chōku - Smoke Choke


Wind Release D-Ranked Offensive

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A novice variation on Smoke Burst which sends a half of a smaller Smoke Burst form the user's hands (again, the dog seal) to well, choke the target by getting smoke in their lungs.


(Now because of me looking up words which rhymed with Smoke (choke) I made up the above jutsu. Now, because of the above jutsu, I want to make my character a Wind Nature (I quess smoke jutsu could be fire based) and having Smoke Choke as a variation her parents made.)


The 1st one... given its use being beyond just a brief smoke cloud would probably be a D-rank minimum. Even if its just one 'cloud' its still doing some task beyond what a ninja at an academy would learn being more advance. I wouldn't see it being wind release primarily since its involving smoke which goes beyond wind. I can see it being a varient utilizing a smoke bomb and then being used to spread the smoke out further beyond to make it more effective at temporarily obscuring the vision of someone, though it wouldn't really be effective at making it hard to see through. Actually creating the smoke would probably entail a Kekkei Genkai to do so without any other factors.


The second one... same issue as first as far as creating the smoke. I can see making it hard to breath but if your somehow manipulating it to choke someone... then the Jutsu is sound much more like a C-Rank Jutsu to be used.


Try and keep Jutsus as private messages to not clutter the thread. Questions are fine here just I'd rather not have huge posts addressing several questions, many of which would only effect one person. ^^:;


Okay will do. (btw my character isn't a Unchia)


Oooh that is an actual justu! (Well duh tree walking is on the wiki, oh I am an idiot.) I didn't think it was something that was noted as a jutsu and decided to make that as an explanation on how that justu works (when you have concentrated the chakra inwards, you find it harder to draw apon, unless you realse the jutsu). I quess it could be a new jutsu. Oh and in regards of the rank of it, I was thinking that the more you suppress your chakra the harder it is to do (so an very basic academy version would only help in academy level battles but a C-Ranked version would help against sensory types. Like Kage Bushin and Taju Kage Bushin, which separation always bugged me)


Okay, maybe pebble throwing jutsu? (Earth Fang being separate) Throwing a rock won't take that much control. (I never thought of this move being very accurate)


The most delicious donut ever will undoubtedly fulfil your desires. Oh and on a completely unrelated topic, will you like this totally not explosive pack of donuts?


1) Wait what? It sounded read like you wrote that bloodline-less people won't get a second nature (did you mean not be able to get bloodlines because I know that) but you then said that they will have a better grasp at other elements then people with bloodlines. (Btw my character dose not have a bloodline). Also I don't think there is any bloodlines utilizing Yin/Yang realise, only secret jutsus know only to a single clan. I may be wrong.


6) I was asking how supernatural we could make them (abilities came as an afterthought I had no intention to add for Minori) So if they could cut through weapons (Minori's Sai can't) and stuff like that. Eh just leave it, I didn't really think this though (an annoyingly common thing I do)


7) The reason I made them wind jutsu instead of a bloodline was because of a filler added hair monster's (the one with the kiss of death) wind justu, which had petals in it. Later on I thought that a smoke jutsu would be fire based, later still, I remembered Asuma using a smoke justu (FIRE RELEASE: ASH PILE BURNIN) so, if you allow it be as such, they will be fire natured or I could go with the smoke bomb idea.


Part of me was screaming at the rest of me, telling me to change them to higher Rank, so I decided to let someone else point that out then agree (so if no one else pointed it out they would of remaind at E-Rank) Oh and the more hoops the more smoke (I really should of just mentioned that there is a 'taju' variant)


If you breathe in smoke you choke (it was meant to like be blowen into a enemy's mouth)


Will do form now on, but the first 3 questions were very important to everyone, the 4th important to an.... I'm just gona stop now.


How would you get better at perspection though out the RP? Explain, elaborate with all the deaitials, dose it have to be fights? (sorry If I make no sense, I am tired)


Oh and, to everyone else, a stat of 3 is meant to be rare.
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@Kyubi


People without a bloodline can't have Chakra AFFINITY, though they have full access to the other chakra natures. Affinity means a user is adapt at that certain nature able to use it more freely and likely learn techniques with it easier. What I was saying is those with Kekkei Genkai would have a harder time using abilities of another nature then the two they have by default, and wouldn't be likely to learn/master those abilities as much


Weapons should be realistic... if its doing supernatural stuff (which I'd still count it as being such) like cutting through other weapons and stuff that would apply to what I mentioned before... so I did answer it. :P


Improving your skills involves training. Fighting COULD do that, but a lot of the improvements are through training. Something like perception could be advanced due to techniques that are learned, such as sensing chakra and all that, very much like Taijutsu could be improved by learning some fighting style or Ninjutsu through learning more advanced techniques for Jutsu. Most likely training would be the source of growth which can happen in many different ways. ^^
 
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Welcome to the Donut Village!

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Holy shishky, I love this OOC already X3
 
[QUOTE="Kiyoko Tomoe]Holy shishky, I love this OOC already X3

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My reaction exactly (o'v'o)


Oh and what is your character going to be called?
 
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Kyubi said:
Hi! What is your character going to be called?
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Haven't decided yet... I mean, hell, I didn't even realize this was up until ya tagged me over in your sheet eight minutes ago xD
 
[QUOTE="Kiyoko Tomoe]Haven't decided yet... I mean, hell, I didn't even realize this was up until ya tagged me over in your sheet eight minutes ago xD

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I am glad I did that then, let me quess no alerts? *offers donut*
 
@Kiyoko Tomoe Really? I threw up a tag before to state the thread was up. Eh might do a mass tag for those who were interested again here then if not everyone got the notification. >.< Glad you like the OOC, told you it might show up in some form. xD
 
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