Duskstalker
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Link to the script in my DA
So I went through my DeviantArt gallery and cleared out a couple of failures to launch, but it still looked like a bit much to throw out on a forum looking for feedback, so I spent the weekend committing a new story to paper. Character profiles for Hephaestus and Solstice can be found in the gallery, but Duck and Cover have been rewritten to the point that I deleted the old profile. That being said, this seems like a good chance to test my ability to convey my characters through just the storytelling.
Feedback is beyond appreciated. I'd like to get my writing on a regular enough schedule that I'd feel justified turning it into a secondary income, and having more to work with than "I don't really get it, but I'm proud of you for trying, son" would be immensely helpful.
So I went through my DeviantArt gallery and cleared out a couple of failures to launch, but it still looked like a bit much to throw out on a forum looking for feedback, so I spent the weekend committing a new story to paper. Character profiles for Hephaestus and Solstice can be found in the gallery, but Duck and Cover have been rewritten to the point that I deleted the old profile. That being said, this seems like a good chance to test my ability to convey my characters through just the storytelling.
Feedback is beyond appreciated. I'd like to get my writing on a regular enough schedule that I'd feel justified turning it into a secondary income, and having more to work with than "I don't really get it, but I'm proud of you for trying, son" would be immensely helpful.
