Breeze the Glaceon - RMOC

[Woomy]

I make my OCs on Google Docs. I know how to deal with them and maneuver them easily. I hope they're acceptable here.


Breeze the Glaceon - the wandering Ice knight


Please tell me what you think of her! I'd love some feedback.

 

[Sugary_Paragraphs]

I make my OCs on Google Docs. I know how to deal with them and maneuver them easily. I hope they're acceptable here.


Breeze the Glaceon - the wandering Ice knight


Please tell me what you think of her! I'd love some feedback.

* ^ * It's too cute and well-written. I especially hate the cool drawing.

 

[Woomy]

* ^ * It's too cute and well-written. I especially hate the cool drawing.

... does that mean it's good? The "well-written" part threw me off a bit in your post.

 

[Sugary_Paragraphs]

... does that mean it's good? The "well-written" part threw me off a bit in your post.

No. It's TOO good. Ya gotta change it. 

 

[Borkus Lazorus]

No. It's TOO good. Ya gotta change it. 

He's a puritanical roleplayer, Woomy. Just take it as it is.


As for me personally, your character seems solid to me. Now, all you got to do is get it up and kicking. 

 

[Sugary_Paragraphs]

He's a puritanical roleplayer, Woomy. Just take it as it is.


As for me personally, your character seems solid to me. Now, all you got to do is get it up and kicking. 

:T How can you stand such a well-drawn appearance and an interesting bio? Doesn't it make you sick inside?

 

[Borkus Lazorus]

I make my OCs on Google Docs. I know how to deal with them and maneuver them easily. I hope they're acceptable here.


Breeze the Glaceon - the wandering Ice knight


Please tell me what you think of her! I'd love some feedback.

But, in all seriousness, I think a few of the Rpers here would love to take commissions from you of our character if you had the time. That artwork is on par with some of the artists here I've seen. 


Just something I thought I would post. 

 

[Woomy]

Thanks guys! I love making OCs, and in fact, I'm making another one with a friend as we speak. Anyway, I'm going to be using her on two different sites. So far, she's been hunted down though being framed. She was saved by a man who took her to a cave.


The fact that you're commenting on that sketchy art is amazing. I just liked the style.