Blais & Cherryl

Ammokkx

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NAME:


Blais


AGE:


14


GENDER:


Male


APPEARANCE:


Blais has extremely bright, bushy, red hair which almost covers his emerald eyes underneath it. His face is immature, with a small nose and mouth and freckles dotted on top of his nose and cheeks. He usually wears a white shirt underneath a dimly red-dyed, leather vest and leather pants of the same color. He's not strong enough to wear full plate armor and has trouble keeping the heavy lances he holds steady on top of his wyvern, so to not weigh himself down further his gloves are made of cloth and his boots are made of fur.


He befriended a light gray wyvern he calls Feihr, but has trouble riding it due to a lack of training.


HEIGHT:


1m53


WEIGHT:


48 kg


ALIGNMENT:


Outlander


CLASS: 


Wyvern Speaker > Wyvern Rider > Wyvern Lord > Wyvern King 


PRIMARY STAT


[SIZE= 16px]Avoid[/SIZE]


WEAPON PROFICIENCY


[SIZE= 12px]Lances: E[/SIZE]


(later promotions unlock swords and axes)


SKILLS:


Personal Skill


  • Wyvern panic: When enemy has a bow equipped and Blais is unable to retaliate, gain +25 to avoid.



Starting Skills

  • Pierce: %Chance to ignore target's Defense.
  • Blossom: Halves experience, but increases growth rates.

WEAPONS:

  • Iron Lance
  • Vulnerary





ARMOR/APPAREL: 



Leather vest and leggings, cloth gloves and fur boots.

CLASSES STRONG TO:


Pegasus riders, Mercenary line, Myrmidon line, Quickstep line, Thief, Treasure Seeker line, Cavalier Line


CLASSES WEAK TO:


Archer line, Nomad line, Bowman line, Arcane Archer line, Hex line, Mage line, Dark mage line, Monk line, Manaketes


CLASSES NEUTRAL TO:


Wyvern riders, Knight line, Puritan line, Communer line, Guard line, Drifter line


PERSONALITY:


Blais is shy and distant from others, but when they break his shell he's a very cheerful and optimistic kid.


HISTORY/BIO


Blais was raised in an orphanage in a small town on the outskirts of Valken, with the orphanage ran by a priest who treated them all like family. The bonds between the children there were strong, and they all considered each other brothers and sisters. None of them really missed their parents, since they all saw the priest who raised them as a father figure. The children weren't allowed far outside the town walls, but that didn't stop some of them from sneaking out anyway. Blais was one of those curious ones, often venturing into the nearby forest to play. One day he ran into Feihr, who was lazily resting in a clearing in the forest. Blais was scared since he'd heard tales of wyverns attacking humans, but was also interested in the rare creature. He went over to pet it, and the wyvern found the boy curious enough to let him do so. From then on, Blais saw the same wyvern pop up more and more in the forest. At some point, the wyvern had started tossing Blais on its back and taking the boy for short flights, which kept increasing in length. Eventually, the two became inseparable friends.


Feihr knew Blais was from the village since he saw the boy constantly entering and leaving it, and knew that he usually arrived at around night. One day the small town was pillaged and set aflame by bandits, including the orphanage, which forced Blais to flee. Luckily he had Feihr to rely on, who flew him far away. Now Blais is in kind of a tricky spot, since he doesn't really have a home to go back to and never really had an interest in the valken/outlander war.


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NAME:


Yrresil Cherryl


AGE:


27


GENDER:


Female


APPEARANCE:


Cherryl is a well-off, healthy woman with medium sized, deep blue hair and eyes of the same color. She has a rather refined face with a slightly tilted up nose and small lips. She wears a black choker around her neck. The girl's above-average chest size is clearly visible from underneath her white dress, which is buttoned up and bound with a purple ribbon to be form-fitting around the stomach. She has a light physique, making her look like a young maiden despite her age. On her feet are cute, white pumps.


HEIGHT:


1m68


WEIGHT:


59 kg


ALIGNMENT: 


Valken upper class


CLASS:


Clergy > Cleric > Mother > Cardinal


PRIMARY STAT


[SIZE= 16px]Magic[/SIZE]


WEAPON PROFICIENCY


[SIZE= 12px]Staves: C[/SIZE]


[SIZE= 12px](Gains the ability to use Light tomes at later stages)[/SIZE]


SKILLS:


Personal Skill


  • Careful tending: Halves all healing done, but also halves all damage the healed unit takes during the next turn.



Starting Skills

  • Emergency Rescue: Rescue targets with no penalty.
  • Celerity: Movement +2

MAGIC: 

  • Heal staff
  • Barrier staff



ARMOR/APPAREL: 



White cleric robes, featureless black choker

CLASSES STRONG TO:


(Only when promoted)
Dark mage line, Hex line, Wyvern riders, Knight line, Guard line


CLASSES WEAK TO:


Pegasus riders, Mercenary line, Myrmidon line, Quickstep line, Thief, Treasure Seeker line, Cavalier Line, Drifter line, Archer line, Nomad line, Bowman line, Communer line, Mage line


CLASSES NEUTRAL TO:


Puritan line, Monk line, Arcane Archer line


PERSONALITY:


Cherryl is to-the-point and rather cold, but shows concern for wounded people. She doesn't show her emotions at all and can come off as apathetic because of it.


HISTORY/BIO


She was born into a strong religious household within the capitol of Valken, with her parents being extremely wealthy to boot. She never had any shortcomings and frequently attended high-end balls, though she never found much enjoyment in them as a child. Cherryl was forced to study at least four hours every single day in her childhood without fail, but she never really cared much about anything. The girl was taught how to be a medic for the people, with her parents' intent for her to become one of the royal healers. Cherryl wasn't opposed to the idea, but she did long for more freedom. Her parents died a natural death through illness, which left Cherryl cold as she didn't really receive any love from them during her upbringing anyway. She now leads a rather mundane life as a doctor in the capitol of Valken, sometimes being called upon to heal injured soldiers when they show up.
 
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Blais

  • Wyvern Panic is a bit op. I get the point, but maybe put it at 25 Avoid?
  • Also, Im gunna change his line name (im working on putting all the canon fe classes up, so this type of confusion doesnt happen again <3)

Wyvern Speaker - Wyvern Rider - Wyvern Lord - Wyvern King


(so hed be a Wyvern Speaker)

  • I dont normally point these out, but you gota pretty big typo thing in the last paragraph of his History.
  • I know this is a weird thing to point out, but I dont think hed be good against the Drifter line, since they use Lances and Axes



Yrresil

  • Change the name of Savior skill, since its already a skill for another class <3
  • Also changed up the Cleric class line some, here it is how it appears in Valken



Clergy 
latest



the rest seems good :)  though Blais would be an Outlander, by the way you described him, just to point that out


@Ammokkx
 
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Blais

  • Wyvern Panic is a bit op. I get the point, but maybe put it at 25 Avoid?
  • Also, Im gunna change his line name (im working on putting all the canon fe classes up, so this type of confusion doesnt happen again <3)

Wyvern Speaker - Wyvern Rider - Wyvern Lord - Wyvern King


(so hed be a Wyvern Speaker)

  • I dont normally point these out, but you gota pretty big typo thing in the last paragraph of his History.
  • I know this is a weird thing to point out, but I dont think hed be good against the Drifter line, since they use Lances and Axes



Yrresil

  • Change the name of Savior skill, since its already a skill for another class <3
  • Also changed up the Cleric class line some, here it is how it appears in Valken



Clergy 
latest



the rest seems good :)  though Blais would be an Outlander, by the way you described him, just to point that out


@Ammokkx

The reason he'd be good against Drifter is because Wyvern riders are typically considered the king of melee, but terrible against anything else. They're only neutral to axes due to their high avoid and speed, and once they unlock swords they're beasts in melee combat. This is offset due to a crippling weakness to magic or bow attacks, as they have terrible RES and the latter gains bonus damage against them.


No idea how that typo happened. Chalk it up to being 8 PM


Also, savior is an actual skill.


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The rest of the changes were made as you asked them.
 
The reason he'd be good against Drifter is because Wyvern riders are typically considered the king of melee, but terrible against anything else. They're only neutral to axes due to their high avoid and speed, and once they unlock swords they're beasts in melee combat. This is offset due to a crippling weakness to magic or bow attacks, as they have terrible RES and the latter gains bonus damage against them.


No idea how that typo happened. Chalk it up to being 8 PM


Also, savior is an actual skill.


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The rest of the changes were made as you asked them.



Yuh, but someone else made their char's personal skill this


View attachment 223351Savior: When rescuing an ally Bishop gains a slight boost in every stat. The lower the units heath the greater buff Bishop gets.


So, you can use the skill "Savior" there, but just name it something else, it can do the exact same thing, but I already accepted his charrie.


After that change, both charries will be fine to go ^^
 
i also dont think hed end up good against the drifter line, since the drifter line is basically a similar line to his, just with horseback, but eh oh well lol
 
i also dont think hed end up good against the drifter line, since the drifter line is basically a similar line to his, just with horseback, but eh oh well lol

For the sake of argument, Paladins had access to axes in the GBA games and they still wound up getting destroyed by Wyvern Riders' extremely high combat stats.


But, changed drifter to neutral and changed the skill name to 'Emergency Rescue'.
 
For the sake of argument, Paladins had access to axes in the GBA games and they still wound up getting destroyed by Wyvern Riders' extremely high combat stats.


But, changed drifter to neutral and changed the skill name to 'Emergency Rescue'.

Now its great :) <3


Both Accepted :D


Its just if the Drifter line was at its peak, with stats mattering, theyre well-rounded units, with high stats in all stats :P  . I just think if there was a powerful final drifter first your charrie, itd be mostly neutral battle wise.
 

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