Khadame
thugdere
As RPN seems to not have a lot of futuristic RPs that are both interesting and cyborg oriented, I figured I could just make my own and roll with it. With the recent release of Nier: Automata , and the ideas I got from Cytus and League of Legends, I tried my hand at making a plot that I tried to make coherent enough to provide a good backstory for a RP.
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- Tensions in the world rise due to climatic change and pollution, citizens protesting due to new laws that further this development by funding companies responsible for the pollution
- Automata founded and funded by the government to further advance robot technology to help against the crisis by reducing these problems and running without any energy required
- Using an unknown test subject, Automata creates the first Operator model, Ophelia
- Operators serve as robot servants and personal computers – they store and look up information, can complete simple and complicated tasks alike and are also capable of learning and developing a personality
- Ophelia goes on the market, is a huge hit, and funds another 3 generations of Operators – Andromeda, Cassandra and Calypso
- Automata obtains the funds to experiment on cyborg advancements
- The first PROJECT: Velocity line is brought into life, using the impaired body of the CEO’s daughter, Camilla
- PROJECTs are primarily meant as military weapons
- Camilla is put into cybernetic sleep
- PROJECT: Velocity is completed without any known problems; the amount of missing person cases rises and Jin investigates with the help of Nathaniel
- Camilla joins the ranks of the military and helps the state fend off enemy militants and spreads propaganda for Automata and the government, masses
- Automata announces the next line, PROJECT: Force
- Nathaniel and Jin find the cause of the disappearances to be Automata and try to forward the story to Macha, a freelance reporter
- The story spawns a huge controversy, but Automata avoids any punishment by blackmailing Macha into discrediting her own story
- Nathaniel gets abducted by an unknown party after trying to convince people of the story’s truth, Jin and Macha get arrested after they try to spread the word of his disappearance
- Some people rebel against their arrest and get both women out, Jin decides to form a rebel group to protest Automata’s ethics
- 8 years’ pass; Automata has five new PROJECTs in the late development phase, Force about to be finished, the Rebellion has been declared a terrorist group and any contact with them will result in prison time
- The Rebellion planned an attack on their biggest factory on the outskirts of the city
- Operation is successful, and the group manages to rescue several Operators containing inside data, Defectives (unsuccessful experiments to perfect the PROJECT line) and two non-activated PROJECTs, a disc was found with Nathaniel’s name on it
- Two months after these events, the story starts
- The long-term goal: Destroy Automata or change their ethics for the better
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I figure the plot still has some things (a lot) that bug me (like the beginning, which seems a bit unrealistic). I absolutely appreciate any criticism and help I can get.
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- Tensions in the world rise due to climatic change and pollution, citizens protesting due to new laws that further this development by funding companies responsible for the pollution
- Automata founded and funded by the government to further advance robot technology to help against the crisis by reducing these problems and running without any energy required
- Using an unknown test subject, Automata creates the first Operator model, Ophelia
- Operators serve as robot servants and personal computers – they store and look up information, can complete simple and complicated tasks alike and are also capable of learning and developing a personality
- Ophelia goes on the market, is a huge hit, and funds another 3 generations of Operators – Andromeda, Cassandra and Calypso
- Automata obtains the funds to experiment on cyborg advancements
- The first PROJECT: Velocity line is brought into life, using the impaired body of the CEO’s daughter, Camilla
- PROJECTs are primarily meant as military weapons
- Camilla is put into cybernetic sleep
- PROJECT: Velocity is completed without any known problems; the amount of missing person cases rises and Jin investigates with the help of Nathaniel
- Camilla joins the ranks of the military and helps the state fend off enemy militants and spreads propaganda for Automata and the government, masses
- Automata announces the next line, PROJECT: Force
- Nathaniel and Jin find the cause of the disappearances to be Automata and try to forward the story to Macha, a freelance reporter
- The story spawns a huge controversy, but Automata avoids any punishment by blackmailing Macha into discrediting her own story
- Nathaniel gets abducted by an unknown party after trying to convince people of the story’s truth, Jin and Macha get arrested after they try to spread the word of his disappearance
- Some people rebel against their arrest and get both women out, Jin decides to form a rebel group to protest Automata’s ethics
- 8 years’ pass; Automata has five new PROJECTs in the late development phase, Force about to be finished, the Rebellion has been declared a terrorist group and any contact with them will result in prison time
- The Rebellion planned an attack on their biggest factory on the outskirts of the city
- Operation is successful, and the group manages to rescue several Operators containing inside data, Defectives (unsuccessful experiments to perfect the PROJECT line) and two non-activated PROJECTs, a disc was found with Nathaniel’s name on it
- Two months after these events, the story starts
- The long-term goal: Destroy Automata or change their ethics for the better
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I figure the plot still has some things (a lot) that bug me (like the beginning, which seems a bit unrealistic). I absolutely appreciate any criticism and help I can get.