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BADAZZ (Anime/Fighter Story Interest Check)

#76
Character Name: Alexander Matte
Alias: N/A
Age: 25
Gender: Male
Height: 5'11"
Weight: 112
Hair Color:
Red
Eye Color: Green
Complexion: Light
Build: Lean
Occupation: Doctor (Chiropractor, Acupuncturist, and Acupressurist)

Visual Appearance:

Written Appearance: Alexander has long thin fingers crisscrossed with small scars. Underneath his clothes are more scars, small pinprick little dots at specific points along his body. His body is built surprisingly well for a doctor.

Personality: He has always been a helpful person, kind and fair. He likes to give people aid when no one else will.

It is not entirely altruistic, he understands that he has to charge money for his actions, if only to help more people.

He has an experimentive side as well, always striving to improve his martial art, even at the expense of testing it on his own body.

He has also been known to help his friends, though not always with their permission. If they complain about a pain or discomfort near him, he feels the need to make it better.
Current Story: Alex was always a sickly kid, something was always wrong with him in one way or another. He spent most of his time in hospitals, tests being run on him. He was never really expected to live a normal life.

There were few things he could do. One of those things was the slow and methodical Tai Chi. It was the least stressful of the martial arts he could find and it seemed to improve his health, at least a little. Being the son of a rather wealthy entrepreneur allowed him the freedom to explore his interests.

Tai Chi led to Chinese medicine. Acupressure and Acupuncture specifically. Needles weren't an issue and sticking them into his body was the least of his problems. This naturally led to chiropractic practices and Aikido. Grappling and redirection, correcting poor stances and bodies.

With each new study he became healthier and stronger. Each experimentation on his own body corrected something wrong about himself.

With the completion of his main studies, came the completion of his own personal Martial Art. The Medical Arts were born.

Naturally he put these skills to use in helping the sick and weak like he had been. Pseudoscience or not, it proved effective and soon people were paying to have his services.

He became quite well known for how healthy his patients would become.

Weapon(s): He actually carries around a few needles on his person just in case he is attacked. Proper application of needles can paralyze or otherwise dispose of an assailant. This has proven to be a necessary precaution as not everyone is happy about his medical practices.

Aura: Light Green, similar to his eyes.

Fighting Style: The Medical Arts. A personal martial art created by Alex to improve his own health. It is a combination of several medical practices as well as grappling and precision martial arts.

It doesn't focus on harming the target. It is designed to help people by adjusting their bodies and realigning their internal energy.

However it can easily be used to disable a threatening force. The same with any medicine, proper use can kill as easily as heal.

Techniques

Disruption: Proper use of grappling and chiropractic techniques strike joints and dislocates fingers, arms, knees, shoulders. Alex does this with extreme precision and speed.

Puncture: Acupuncture in its purest form, with high speed movement. Proper placement of needles are used to aggravate and disable limbs as well as disrupt ki techniques.

Internalize: The skill of acupressure is mainly used to disrupt ki techniques as well as alter the internal body activities. Precise knuckle and finger strikes can temporarily alter breathing, blood flow, and equilibrium.

Happy Time: Not all of Alex's techniques are used to harm others. Their main feature is to help. This technique was specifically designed to do just that. Accupressure and Accupuncture are combined to hit specific points on the body to cause the brain to release oxytocin, bringing the target to a euphoric state and taking them out of combat.
I was on my phone as well when I reviewed this, but I am online now. XD Your character is allowed a fifth technique. He is allowed 5 total starting out. Never mind (deleted what was said).
 
#79
Yeah, I couldn't think of a fifth technique :P Got any ideas?
Well, he can always learn it later. There are opportunities to learn more technique slots in this game. Just don't forget that you were supposed to start with five so that the fifth one is a freebee. He's good to go. You can add him to the Character Thread.
 

Ennuis

Junior Member
#80
@The Black Knight
Alright, got it finished.
Character Name: Thaddeus Johnson
Alias: Blood Beatz
Age: 26
Gender: Male
Height: 5'10"
Weight: 152 lbs.
Hair Color: Black
Eye Color: White
Complexion: Red
Build: Thin, but not scrawny.
Occupation: Ninja mercenary

Visual Appearance:
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Written Appearance:
Blood Beatz has used his ninjutsu to change himself from the boring man he used to be. Now his skin is a deep red, his teeth end in sharp points, his eyes glow white, and his hair is kept short.

Personality:
Blood Beatz exudes confidence and speaks boldly. His motivation is to have fun, which has led him to take dangerous jobs for pitiful pay, simply for the challenge. In fact, he has taken this desire for challenge so far as to hold back against dangerous foes.

Current Story:
Thaddeus Johnson was a nobody. He had no friends, his family never talked to him, and even his coworkers never acknowledged his existence. While this sounds like a miserable life, Thad liked it. It allowed him to indulge in strange hobbies that normal people would have looked down on him for. Over time, Thad eventually wanted more from life and looked to the internet for something that could bring him new joy. What he found was Super Goemon's Online Iga-Koga Number One Oniwaban Academy, naturally, Thad signed up immediately.

The courses he signed up for were scheduled to take five years for him to finish, but because of his dedication, natural talent, and lack of a personal life, he completed it in just a single year and immediately begun his new career. While he had success early on, he struggled to make a name for himself, at least until he discovered the ancient art of branding. Using his ninjutsu to transform himself into a crimson skinned demonic being and adopting the name of Blood Beatz, he quickly became known as a reliable mercenary willing to take the most dangerous of jobs.


Weapon(s):
Super Goemon's Official Iga-Koga Number One Oniwaban Katana - Murasame Style: A sword bought from the Super Goemon's Online Iga-Koga Number One Oniwaban Academy's online shop. It somehow has held up to the rigors Blood Beatz puts it through on a daily basis.

Super Goemon's Official Iga-Koga Number One Oniwaban Shuriken: Shurikens bought from the Super Goemon's Online Iga-Koga Number One Oniwaban Academy's online shop. Bought in bulk with a nice discount.

Super Goemon's Official Iga-Koga Number One Oniwaban Crushed Glass: A pouch of glass shards bought from the Super Goemon's Online Iga-Koga Number One Oniwaban Academy's online shop. The shards are small enough to be blown by the wind but large enough to cut the eyes and shred the lungs if inhaled.

Super Goemon's Official Iga-Koga Number One Oniwaban Shuko: Climbing claws bought from the Super Goemon's Online Iga-Koga Number One Oniwaban Academy's online shop. They can also be used to parry in emergencies.

Fighting Style: Blood Beatz was trained in the art of Super Goemon's Official Iga-Koga Number One Oniwaban Ninpo and has added his own stylish flair to it. (Un)Surprisingly, his fighting style mostly resembles that of pop culture ninjas.

Techniques
Super Goemon's Iga-Koga Number One Oniwaban Technique - Transformation: Blood Beatz can use this technique to transform himself to any humanoid form, although it's really just used for his current appearance. These transformations don't affect his strength but can be used to gain new functions. (Making himself more muscular doesn't increase his strength, but growing wings allows him to fly.)

Super Goemon's Iga-Koga Number One Oniwaban Technique - Replacement:
A technique used to switch places with a nearby object, typically to avoid a dangerous attack but can be used for surprise attacks.

Super Goemon's Iga-Koga Number One Oniwaban Technique - Raging Inferno:
This technique allows Blood Beatz to spew a torrent of flames from his mouth.

Super Goemon's Iga-Koga Number One Oniwaban Technique - Creeping Ice:
This technique creates a wave of ice that originates from Blood Beatz that freezes the surfaces it travels across and traps anything touching it as it spreads.

Super Goemon's Iga-Koga Number One Oniwaban Ultimate Technique - Blade of Light:
Blood Beatz throws his Super Goemon's Official Iga-Koga Number One Oniwaban Katana - Murasame Style with such force, it transforms into a narrow beam of light that scorches everything in its path.
 
#81
@The Black Knight
Alright, got it finished.
Character Name: Thaddeus Johnson
Alias: Blood Beatz
Age: 26
Gender: Male
Height: 5'10"
Weight: 152 lbs.
Hair Color: Black
Eye Color: White
Complexion: Red
Build: Thin, but not scrawny.
Occupation: Ninja mercenary

Visual Appearance:
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Written Appearance:
Blood Beatz has used his ninjutsu to change himself from the boring man he used to be. Now his skin is a deep red, his teeth end in sharp points, his eyes glow white, and his hair is kept short.

Personality:
Blood Beatz exudes confidence and speaks boldly. His motivation is to have fun, which has led him to take dangerous jobs for pitiful pay, simply for the challenge. In fact, he has taken this desire for challenge so far as to hold back against dangerous foes.

Current Story:
Thaddeus Johnson was a nobody. He had no friends, his family never talked to him, and even his coworkers never acknowledged his existence. While this sounds like a miserable life, Thad liked it. It allowed him to indulge in strange hobbies that normal people would have looked down on him for. Over time, Thad eventually wanted more from life and looked to the internet for something that could bring him new joy. What he found was Super Goemon's Online Iga-Koga Number One Oniwaban Academy, naturally, Thad signed up immediately.

The courses he signed up for were scheduled to take five years for him to finish, but because of his dedication, natural talent, and lack of a personal life, he completed it in just a single year and immediately begun his new career. While he had success early on, he struggled to make a name for himself, at least until he discovered the ancient art of branding. Using his ninjutsu to transform himself into a crimson skinned demonic being and adopting the name of Blood Beatz, he quickly became known as a reliable mercenary willing to take the most dangerous of jobs.


Weapon(s):
Super Goemon's Official Iga-Koga Number One Oniwaban Katana - Murasame Style: A sword bought from the Super Goemon's Online Iga-Koga Number One Oniwaban Academy's online shop. It somehow has held up to the rigors Blood Beatz puts it through on a daily basis.

Super Goemon's Official Iga-Koga Number One Oniwaban Shuriken: Shurikens bought from the Super Goemon's Online Iga-Koga Number One Oniwaban Academy's online shop. Bought in bulk with a nice discount.

Super Goemon's Official Iga-Koga Number One Oniwaban Crushed Glass: A pouch of glass shards bought from the Super Goemon's Online Iga-Koga Number One Oniwaban Academy's online shop. The shards are small enough to be blown by the wind but large enough to cut the eyes and shred the lungs if inhaled.

Super Goemon's Official Iga-Koga Number One Oniwaban Shuko: Climbing claws bought from the Super Goemon's Online Iga-Koga Number One Oniwaban Academy's online shop. They can also be used to parry in emergencies.

Fighting Style: Blood Beatz was trained in the art of Super Goemon's Official Iga-Koga Number One Oniwaban Ninpo and has added his own stylish flair to it. (Un)Surprisingly, his fighting style mostly resembles that of pop culture ninjas.

Techniques
Super Goemon's Iga-Koga Number One Oniwaban Technique - Transformation: Blood Beatz can use this technique to transform himself to any humanoid form, although it's really just used for his current appearance. These transformations don't affect his strength but can be used to gain new functions. (Making himself more muscular doesn't increase his strength, but growing wings allows him to fly.)

Super Goemon's Iga-Koga Number One Oniwaban Technique - Replacement:
A technique used to switch places with a nearby object, typically to avoid a dangerous attack but can be used for surprise attacks.

Super Goemon's Iga-Koga Number One Oniwaban Technique - Raging Inferno:
This technique allows Blood Beatz to spew a torrent of flames from his mouth.

Super Goemon's Iga-Koga Number One Oniwaban Technique - Creeping Ice:
This technique creates a wave of ice that originates from Blood Beatz that freezes the surfaces it travels across and traps anything touching it as it spreads.

Super Goemon's Iga-Koga Number One Oniwaban Ultimate Technique - Blade of Light:
Blood Beatz throws his Super Goemon's Official Iga-Koga Number One Oniwaban Katana - Murasame Style with such force, it transforms into a narrow beam of light that scorches everything in its path.
Transformation: I don't think he should be able to do anything outside what he can normally do as a ninja. Say if he does transform into a winged humanoid, he can't fly because naturally, he can't fly. I also don't think he could learn the techniques or the abilities of the people he mimics. This limitation makes for a believable weakness that doesn't take away from his concealment but for someone familiar with the person he is mimicing, they could call him out.

Also, making the Ninja school online. Anyone can access it and learn about the techniques. Actual Ninja schools were secret for a reason. Since his is just open source, how do you even know he wasn't scammed with ass ninja knowledge?
 

RI.a

"愛を知りたいのです."
#82
"I don't need sight to see that you'll Lose"
full name
Dai
alias
the blind breaker
age
18
gender
female
sexuality
hetero-flex
occupation
underground fighter
height
170 cm
weight
60 kg
hair color
dark brown
eye color
black/milky
complexion
olive, freckled
build
lean, athletic
tl;dr
orphan, adopted by The Emperor
foster family is the right hand man
was taught how to fight by Old Man
learned Old Man was The Emperor in underground fight
The Emperor gave her the scar on her eye
now she's aiming for AUFC
power
acute senses
weapon
nunchucks, dagger
aura
green
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artist
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personality
Loud, cocky, and independent, Dai is someone you'd benefit a lot from by befriending. She's friendly towards everyone unless they throw at insult at her directly, as she becomes direct, sarcastic and confrontational. She sees the gang members as family as she was literally raised by them and they are the only ones she's got. She can be immature when others offer to help her with menial tasks, as she thinks they take pity on her for being blind and she would be stubborn and grumpy enough to show them that she can do everything an able person can. Dai is protective of those she considers her family and friends, whether they like her or not as she considers herself unbiased.

Some may consider her petty as her fuse is easily lit, but Dai doesn't hold grudges. She prefers to express her emotions then and there to get it over with then to bottle it all up. "Sometimes being a good friend means giving a good punch!" She'd laugh after getting into a barfight with someone about who's paying. Because Dai didn't attend school nor have a 'normal' nurturing family, the way she acts and talks can be mistaken as rude and always looking for a fight. And most of the time she probably is! Her honest, direct attitude is what makes her loveable and a pain in the ass. She can be trouble on the streets, but those who follow her have fun in the fights she pick.
written appearance
Taller than most women in Andromeda with features of Asian descent, Dai is recognised for her scar across her left eye. Not to mention that she's blind as hell. From a distance, her eyes are deep black color, but if you pay more attention she's not actually looking at you when she's talking. And if you actually make it up close, parts of her eyes have milky white lines. She keeps her dark brown hair short. In fact, the left side is completely shaved, while the rest of her naturally wavy locks are kept at bob length. For a blind person, she's dressed decently well and is surprisingly inked. She is usually in a loose black top and bottoms or an all black jumpsuit. She has a tattoo of a black scorpion on the right side of her neck, and her name (台) in Kanji on her left chest. Due to her lack of sight (and her ability), she does not wear shoes. Her bare feet are at most wrapped with thin bandages around the middle. To hold items, Dai has a leather belt with a small pouch and two holsters; one to keep her trusty dagger, the other for her nunchucks.
current story
Abondoned on the streets of Kinrin, an infant was on the brink of death. Her cries that fell on deaf ears was heard by a very powerful man; The Emperor of Deathstalkers. The stoic man held the babe close to his chest. And even when all his followers thought he'd snap the innocent child's neck, he instead commanded to get a doctor. His underlings, though shocked at first, praised and worshipped him for being a noble, merciful, and kindhearted man. The Emperor didn't raise her at all, rumours say it's because the doctor said the babe is born blind, or he was simply too busy. He entrusted his right hand to take care of her and would even check in on the child now and then. His visits became less and less frequent as she got older, until it stopped altogether when she turned 3.

Dai had always felt like an outsider in her foster family, she was pitiful that's why they took her in. But she didn't want to dependent all her life, she wanted to be dependable. She started training when she was 8. It was laughable at the start. A blind girl learning to throw punches at a beanbag and she was missing most of the time. A kind stranger, whom she decided to nickname Old Man (because of his voice), decided to show her the ropes, to use her other senses. That her weakness is a strength if she chooses it to be. For the next four years, she got into street fights, upping the risk in her training. And even if she got black and blue, the Old Man would still treat her wounds after a good hour of lecturing. The more she started winning at street fights, the more challenging fights she craved and she finally entered the Underground Fights. At a chance to become recruited. At a chance for more. The Old Man was adamant about other ways to get a good life, but Dai wanted to go anyway... even if it meant breaking ties with her first teacher.

Her first night was one she'd never forget. She actually won two rounds, and was in for the finals. The crowd loved her, and she loved them. To everyone's surprise, they added another round before the finals. She was set to have a bonus round with The Emperor himself. It was an honour, and pretty damn nervewrecking for the young teenager. The match was decided to include weapons, making the crowd roar louder in excitement. The match ended a lot quicker than the ones before. Everyone could see that Dai was clearly outmatched. All her attacks didn't seem like it even scratch The Emperor. In a flash, the man surged forward and slashed. Lucky for Dai, she managed to react... but not fast enough. The sharp weapon cut across her left eye. It was then she realised that he actually meant to kill her in that one move. But before she could retreat any further, a powerful fist knocked the air out of her lungs. Her body hunched over his own. Right before she fell unconscious she heard his voice. One she'd never forget. It belonged to the one who taught her how to fight.

Dai had a taste of victory... and defeat that night. But she didn't give up. She had tried to find the Old-- The Emperor, but he refused to see her. So the only way to see him was through the underground ring. Her scar was still fresh and pink when Dai returned, but she had remained undefeated since. Despite winning countless times, The Emperor has yet to come down to the ring again. And the runner-ups had always received recommendations to Seifu District schools. Sure she's received plenty of credits for her winnings, but she won't stop until she gets to talk with The Emperor. Though now, with years of being the champion, maybe her desire has changed; and her goals are set towards AUFC. Could that warrant a meeting with her first teacher?
fighting style
A very rough combination of mixed martial arts, krav maga, akido, and street fighting results in Dai's fighting style. She is quick on her feet and smart about her movements. An attack from her is rarely wasted and is usually a flurry of attacks using her whole body or a few decisive ones. Her trademark is to give her opponents one or more broken bones by the end of the fight, whether it was in the ring or not. Thus giving her the name of 'the blind breaker'.

Dai is not someone who would resort of use of weapons firsthand. She's more of a bare fist and feet fighter first. Only when her opponents raises the stakes or she gets both parties to agree does she rely on her weapons. Her first choice would be the nunchuck, as her dagger is usually used as a paperweight in threats.

techniques

01 Seismic Sense
Dai is able to feel every vibration through the ground. She is able to perceive shapes, the tiniest movement, location of animate and inanimate objects to its precise location. This technique allows her to be able to react to enemies and counter appropriately. Dai is also able to feel vibrations through air, but this only extends up to 1 meter radius. This allows her to be able to dodge projectiles and even bullets by a very close margin.
02 Bulls-Barrage
A combo of quick, impactful punches and kicks; this attack can easily send a full grown man through the wall, then to the hospital.
03 Bull-Whip
Holding one stick in a hand, Dai can spread her ki to her nunchuck. Resulting in her ki extending from the other stick into a long whip of up to 3 meters. A mid-range attack, the whip is as flexible and functional as an actual bullwhip, but thrice as deadly.
04 Deflecting Rock
Similar to akido and krav maga, Dai counters her opponents' attacks using their momentum. A defensive technique usually applicable to a situation where Dai is surrounded.
05 Bulls-eye
A combination of Bulls-Barrage and Bull-Whip, this is her strongest technique with near 100% accuracy. When hit with her barrage of attacks, Dai "locks" her ki on the surface of her opponent(s). The ki will last for a total of 10 minutes from the moment of impact, and acts a magnetic target. The ki on her whip will then hit the targets even as they move to dodge. Her Bull-Whip is still limited to 3 meter radius.
trivia

01
Her name 台, Dai means pedestal or stage. She does not have a family name.
02
Many who resent her out of jealousy or otherwise call her 'pity thrash'.
03
She is The Emperor's unofficial adopted child.
04
Dai is born blind.
05
She can perceive shapes and bodies but not faces.
06
She can recognise voices she's heard before.

theme
code by Ri.a
 
#83
"I don't need sight to see that you'll Lose"
full name
Dai
alias
the blind breaker
age
18
gender
female
sexuality
hetero-flex
occupation
underground fighter
height
170 cm
weight
60 kg
hair color
dark brown
eye color
black/milky
complexion
olive, freckled
build
lean, athletic
tl;dr
orphan, adopted by The Emperor
foster family is the right hand man
was taught how to fight by Old Man
learned Old Man was The Emperor in underground fight
The Emperor gave her the scar on her eye
now she's aiming for AUFC
power
acute senses
weapon
nunchucks, dagger
aura
green
/////////
/////////
/////////
artist
/////////
/////////
/////////
/////////
/////////
personality
Loud, cocky, and independent, Dai is someone you'd benefit a lot from by befriending. She's friendly towards everyone unless they throw at insult at her directly, as she becomes direct, sarcastic and confrontational. She sees the gang members as family as she was literally raised by them and they are the only ones she's got. She can be immature when others offer to help her with menial tasks, as she thinks they take pity on her for being blind and she would be stubborn and grumpy enough to show them that she can do everything an able person can. Dai is protective of those she considers her family and friends, whether they like her or not as she considers herself unbiased.

Some may consider her petty as her fuse is easily lit, but Dai doesn't hold grudges. She prefers to express her emotions then and there to get it over with then to bottle it all up. "Sometimes being a good friend means giving a good punch!" She'd laugh after getting into a barfight with someone about who's paying. Because Dai didn't attend school nor have a 'normal' nurturing family, the way she acts and talks can be mistaken as rude and always looking for a fight. And most of the time she probably is! Her honest, direct attitude is what makes her loveable and a pain in the ass. She can be trouble on the streets, but those who follow her have fun in the fights she pick.
written appearance
Taller than most women in Andromeda with features of Asian descent, Dai is recognised for her scar across her left eye. Not to mention that she's blind as hell. From a distance, her eyes are deep black color, but if you pay more attention she's not actually looking at you when she's talking. And if you actually make it up close, parts of her eyes have milky white lines. She keeps her dark brown hair short. In fact, the left side is completely shaved, while the rest of her naturally wavy locks are kept at bob length. For a blind person, she's dressed decently well and is surprisingly inked. She is usually in a loose black top and bottoms or an all black jumpsuit. She has a tattoo of a black scorpion on the right side of her neck, and her name (台) in Kanji on her left chest. Due to her lack of sight (and her ability), she does not wear shoes. Her bare feet are at most wrapped with thin bandages around the middle. To hold items, Dai has a leather belt with a small pouch and two holsters; one to keep her trusty dagger, the other for her nunchucks.
current story
Abondoned on the streets of Kinrin, an infant was on the brink of death. Her cries that fell on deaf ears was heard by a very powerful man; The Emperor of Deathstalkers. The stoic man held the babe close to his chest. And even when all his followers thought he'd snap the innocent child's neck, he instead commanded to get a doctor. His underlings, though shocked at first, praised and worshipped him for being a noble, merciful, and kindhearted man. The Emperor didn't raise her at all, rumours say it's because the doctor said the babe is born blind, or he was simply too busy. He entrusted his right hand to take care of her and would even check in on the child now and then. His visits became less and less frequent as she got older, until it stopped altogether when she turned 3.

Dai had always felt like an outsider in her foster family, she was pitiful that's why they took her in. But she didn't want to dependent all her life, she wanted to be dependable. She started training when she was 8. It was laughable at the start. A blind girl learning to throw punches at a beanbag and she was missing most of the time. A kind stranger, whom she decided to nickname Old Man (because of his voice), decided to show her the ropes, to use her other senses. That her weakness is a strength if she chooses it to be. For the next four years, she got into street fights, upping the risk in her training. And even if she got black and blue, the Old Man would still treat her wounds after a good hour of lecturing. The more she started winning at street fights, the more challenging fights she craved and she finally entered the Underground Fights. At a chance to become recruited. At a chance for more. The Old Man was adamant about other ways to get a good life, but Dai wanted to go anyway... even if it meant breaking ties with her first teacher.

Her first night was one she'd never forget. She actually won two rounds, and was in for the finals. The crowd loved her, and she loved them. To everyone's surprise, they added another round before the finals. She was set to have a bonus round with The Emperor himself. It was an honour, and pretty damn nervewrecking for the young teenager. The match was decided to include weapons, making the crowd roar louder in excitement. The match ended a lot quicker than the ones before. Everyone could see that Dai was clearly outmatched. All her attacks didn't seem like it even scratch The Emperor. In a flash, the man surged forward and slashed. Lucky for Dai, she managed to react... but not fast enough. The sharp weapon cut across her left eye. It was then she realised that he actually meant to kill her in that one move. But before she could retreat any further, a powerful fist knocked the air out of her lungs. Her body hunched over his own. Right before she fell unconscious she heard his voice. One she'd never forget. It belonged to the one who taught her how to fight.

Dai had a taste of victory... and defeat that night. But she didn't give up. She had tried to find the Old-- The Emperor, but he refused to see her. So the only way to see him was through the underground ring. Her scar was still fresh and pink when Dai returned, but she had remained undefeated since. Despite winning countless times, The Emperor has yet to come down to the ring again. And the runner-ups had always received recommendations to Seifu District schools. Sure she's received plenty of credits for her winnings, but she won't stop until she gets to talk with The Emperor. Though now, with years of being the champion, maybe her desire has changed; and her goals are set towards AUFC. Could that warrant a meeting with her first teacher?
fighting style
A very rough combination of mixed martial arts, krav maga, akido, and street fighting results in Dai's fighting style. She is quick on her feet and smart about her movements. An attack from her is rarely wasted and is usually a flurry of attacks using her whole body or a few decisive ones. Her trademark is to give her opponents one or more broken bones by the end of the fight, whether it was in the ring or not. Thus giving her the name of 'the blind breaker'.

Dai is not someone who would resort of use of weapons firsthand. She's more of a bare fist and feet fighter first. Only when her opponents raises the stakes or she gets both parties to agree does she rely on her weapons. Her first choice would be the nunchuck, as her dagger is usually used as a paperweight in threats.

techniques

01 Seismic Sense
Dai is able to feel every vibration through the ground. She is able to perceive shapes, the tiniest movement, location of animate and inanimate objects to its precise location. This technique allows her to be able to react to enemies and counter appropriately. Dai is also able to feel vibrations through air, but this only extends up to 1 meter radius. This allows her to be able to dodge projectiles and even bullets by a very close margin.
02 Bulls-Barrage
A combo of quick, impactful punches and kicks; this attack can easily send a full grown man through the wall, then to the hospital.
03 Bull-Whip
Holding one stick in a hand, Dai can spread her ki to her nunchuck. Resulting in her ki extending from the other stick into a long whip of up to 3 meters. A mid-range attack, the whip is as flexible and functional as an actual bullwhip, but thrice as deadly.
04 Deflecting Rock
Similar to akido and krav maga, Dai counters her opponents' attacks using their momentum. A defensive technique usually applicable to a situation where Dai is surrounded.
05 Bulls-eye
A combination of Bulls-Barrage and Bull-Whip, this is her strongest technique with near 100% accuracy. When hit with her barrage of attacks, Dai "locks" her ki on the surface of her opponent(s). The ki will last for a total of 10 minutes from the moment of impact, and acts a magnetic target. The ki on her whip will then hit the targets even as they move to dodge. Her Bull-Whip is still limited to 3 meter radius.
trivia

01
Her name 台, Dai means pedestal or stage. She does not have a family name.
02
Many who resent her out of jealousy or otherwise call her 'pity thrash'.
03
She is The Emperor's unofficial adopted child.
04
Dai is born blind.
05
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She's approved. We have another player who played a champion underground fighter. It'll be interesting to see your character and his clash one day. I like the story with The Emperor. Since she has a Black Scorpion tattoo does that mean she's a Deathstalker? We can talk more in the discord. I'll send you a link.
 

Ennuis

Junior Member
#84
Transformation: I don't think he should be able to do anything outside what he can normally do as a ninja. Say if he does transform into a winged humanoid, he can't fly because naturally, he can't fly. I also don't think he could learn the techniques or the abilities of the people he mimics. This limitation makes for a believable weakness that doesn't take away from his concealment but for someone familiar with the person he is mimicing, they could call him out.

Also, making the Ninja school online. Anyone can access it and learn about the techniques. Actual Ninja schools were secret for a reason. Since his is just open source, how do you even know he wasn't scammed with ass ninja knowledge?
Well for the transformation thing, it's based on the fact that people claimed ninja could transform into animals like birds to escape, but just spiffed up to be cooler. Also I never intended to have him copy moves since I imagine even the most basic of looking moves people have are powered by ki/chi/chakra/etc and that isn't a physical function, so unless someone has "grows a third arm" as technique, power copying isn't an option.

As for the ninja school being online, it's meant to be silly because it obviously looks like a scam so who would waste their time and money on it? Like, your brain should be screaming at you to not give them your credit card info so it ended up being a "hidden in plain sight" type thing.
 
#85
Well for the transformation thing, it's based on the fact that people claimed ninja could transform into animals like birds to escape, but just spiffed up to be cooler. Also I never intended to have him copy moves since I imagine even the most basic of looking moves people have are powered by ki/chi/chakra/etc and that isn't a physical function, so unless someone has "grows a third arm" as technique, power copying isn't an option.

As for the ninja school being online, it's meant to be silly because it obviously looks like a scam so who would waste their time and money on it? Like, your brain should be screaming at you to not give them your credit card info so it ended up being a "hidden in plain sight" type thing.
It says "humanoid" in the transformation description, but then you're saying "animals."
 

Ennuis

Junior Member
#89
@The Black Knight
There you go.
Character Name: Thaddeus Johnson
Alias: Blood Beatz
Age: 26
Gender: Male
Height: 5'10"
Weight: 152 lbs.
Hair Color: Black
Eye Color: White
Complexion: Red
Build: Thin, but not scrawny.
Occupation: Ninja mercenary

Visual Appearance:
View attachment 522985
Written Appearance:
Blood Beatz has used his ninjutsu to change himself from the boring man he used to be. Now his skin is a deep red, his teeth end in sharp points, his eyes glow white, and his hair is kept short.

Personality:
Blood Beatz exudes confidence and speaks boldly. His motivation is to have fun, which has led him to take dangerous jobs for pitiful pay, simply for the challenge. In fact, he has taken this desire for challenge so far as to hold back against dangerous foes.

Current Story:
Thaddeus Johnson was a nobody. He had no friends, his family never talked to him, and even his coworkers never acknowledged his existence. While this sounds like a miserable life, Thad liked it. It allowed him to indulge in strange hobbies that normal people would have looked down on him for. Over time, Thad eventually wanted more from life and looked to the internet for something that could bring him new joy. What he found was Super Goemon's Online Iga-Koga Number One Oniwaban Academy, naturally, Thad signed up immediately.

The courses he signed up for were scheduled to take five years for him to finish, but because of his dedication, natural talent, and lack of a personal life, he completed it in just a single year and immediately begun his new career. While he had success early on, he struggled to make a name for himself, at least until he discovered the ancient art of branding. Using his ninjutsu to transform himself into a crimson skinned demonic being and adopting the name of Blood Beatz, he quickly became known as a reliable mercenary willing to take the most dangerous of jobs.


Weapon(s):
Super Goemon's Official Iga-Koga Number One Oniwaban Katana - Murasame Style: A sword bought from the Super Goemon's Online Iga-Koga Number One Oniwaban Academy's online shop. It somehow has held up to the rigors Blood Beatz puts it through on a daily basis.

Super Goemon's Official Iga-Koga Number One Oniwaban Shuriken: Shurikens bought from the Super Goemon's Online Iga-Koga Number One Oniwaban Academy's online shop. Bought in bulk with a nice discount.

Super Goemon's Official Iga-Koga Number One Oniwaban Crushed Glass: A pouch of glass shards bought from the Super Goemon's Online Iga-Koga Number One Oniwaban Academy's online shop. The shards are small enough to be blown by the wind but large enough to cut the eyes and shred the lungs if inhaled.

Super Goemon's Official Iga-Koga Number One Oniwaban Shuko: Climbing claws bought from the Super Goemon's Online Iga-Koga Number One Oniwaban Academy's online shop. They can also be used to parry in emergencies.

Fighting Style: Blood Beatz was trained in the art of Super Goemon's Official Iga-Koga Number One Oniwaban Ninpo and has added his own stylish flair to it. (Un)Surprisingly, his fighting style mostly resembles that of pop culture ninjas.

Techniques
Super Goemon's Iga-Koga Number One Oniwaban Technique - Transformation: Blood Beatz can use this technique to transform himself to any humanoid form, although it's really just used for his current appearance.

Super Goemon's Iga-Koga Number One Oniwaban Technique - Replacement:
A technique used to switch places with a nearby object, typically to avoid a dangerous attack but can be used for surprise attacks.

Super Goemon's Iga-Koga Number One Oniwaban Technique - Raging Inferno:
This technique allows Blood Beatz to spew a torrent of flames from his mouth.

Super Goemon's Iga-Koga Number One Oniwaban Technique - Creeping Ice:
This technique creates a wave of ice that originates from Blood Beatz that freezes the surfaces it travels across and traps anything touching it as it spreads.

Super Goemon's Iga-Koga Number One Oniwaban Ultimate Technique - Blade of Light:
Blood Beatz throws his Super Goemon's Official Iga-Koga Number One Oniwaban Katana - Murasame Style with such force, it transforms into a narrow beam of light that scorches everything in its path.
 
#90
@The Black Knight
There you go.
Character Name: Thaddeus Johnson
Alias: Blood Beatz
Age: 26
Gender: Male
Height: 5'10"
Weight: 152 lbs.
Hair Color: Black
Eye Color: White
Complexion: Red
Build: Thin, but not scrawny.
Occupation: Ninja mercenary

Visual Appearance:
View attachment 522985
Written Appearance:
Blood Beatz has used his ninjutsu to change himself from the boring man he used to be. Now his skin is a deep red, his teeth end in sharp points, his eyes glow white, and his hair is kept short.

Personality:
Blood Beatz exudes confidence and speaks boldly. His motivation is to have fun, which has led him to take dangerous jobs for pitiful pay, simply for the challenge. In fact, he has taken this desire for challenge so far as to hold back against dangerous foes.

Current Story:
Thaddeus Johnson was a nobody. He had no friends, his family never talked to him, and even his coworkers never acknowledged his existence. While this sounds like a miserable life, Thad liked it. It allowed him to indulge in strange hobbies that normal people would have looked down on him for. Over time, Thad eventually wanted more from life and looked to the internet for something that could bring him new joy. What he found was Super Goemon's Online Iga-Koga Number One Oniwaban Academy, naturally, Thad signed up immediately.

The courses he signed up for were scheduled to take five years for him to finish, but because of his dedication, natural talent, and lack of a personal life, he completed it in just a single year and immediately begun his new career. While he had success early on, he struggled to make a name for himself, at least until he discovered the ancient art of branding. Using his ninjutsu to transform himself into a crimson skinned demonic being and adopting the name of Blood Beatz, he quickly became known as a reliable mercenary willing to take the most dangerous of jobs.


Weapon(s):
Super Goemon's Official Iga-Koga Number One Oniwaban Katana - Murasame Style: A sword bought from the Super Goemon's Online Iga-Koga Number One Oniwaban Academy's online shop. It somehow has held up to the rigors Blood Beatz puts it through on a daily basis.

Super Goemon's Official Iga-Koga Number One Oniwaban Shuriken: Shurikens bought from the Super Goemon's Online Iga-Koga Number One Oniwaban Academy's online shop. Bought in bulk with a nice discount.

Super Goemon's Official Iga-Koga Number One Oniwaban Crushed Glass: A pouch of glass shards bought from the Super Goemon's Online Iga-Koga Number One Oniwaban Academy's online shop. The shards are small enough to be blown by the wind but large enough to cut the eyes and shred the lungs if inhaled.

Super Goemon's Official Iga-Koga Number One Oniwaban Shuko: Climbing claws bought from the Super Goemon's Online Iga-Koga Number One Oniwaban Academy's online shop. They can also be used to parry in emergencies.

Fighting Style: Blood Beatz was trained in the art of Super Goemon's Official Iga-Koga Number One Oniwaban Ninpo and has added his own stylish flair to it. (Un)Surprisingly, his fighting style mostly resembles that of pop culture ninjas.

Techniques
Super Goemon's Iga-Koga Number One Oniwaban Technique - Transformation: Blood Beatz can use this technique to transform himself to any humanoid form, although it's really just used for his current appearance.

Super Goemon's Iga-Koga Number One Oniwaban Technique - Replacement:
A technique used to switch places with a nearby object, typically to avoid a dangerous attack but can be used for surprise attacks.

Super Goemon's Iga-Koga Number One Oniwaban Technique - Raging Inferno:
This technique allows Blood Beatz to spew a torrent of flames from his mouth.

Super Goemon's Iga-Koga Number One Oniwaban Technique - Creeping Ice:
This technique creates a wave of ice that originates from Blood Beatz that freezes the surfaces it travels across and traps anything touching it as it spreads.

Super Goemon's Iga-Koga Number One Oniwaban Ultimate Technique - Blade of Light:
Blood Beatz throws his Super Goemon's Official Iga-Koga Number One Oniwaban Katana - Murasame Style with such force, it transforms into a narrow beam of light that scorches everything in its path.
So what do you mean by humanoid?
 
#92
Because androids can be humanoid, mermaids can be humanoid, even aliens can have a humanoid figure. If you just mean transform into any "human," then I would just write human. If you're trying to transform into anything that has two arms, two legs, and a head because even apes are humanoid, then I'm going to say no.
 
#94
We're still where we have been for the past so-so minutes. You are allowed to change into any human, or to change into any animal. If you want him to have that demonic appearance, then make it cosmetic. Make it a mask. Ninjas used to wear masks back in the day. Or make it that he's possessed by a demon or something.
 
#96
The deal breaker is you want a technique that I'm not approving, and you don't want to accept the terms I presented. So there really isn't much else to discuss.
 

Ennuis

Junior Member
#97
I don't really see what the big deal is with giving up a technique slot to explain a weird appearance, I guess you're just overthinking it and assuming I'm trying to trick you? I think I'll just make a different character if that's alright with you.
 
#98
I don't really see what the big deal is with giving up a technique slot to explain a weird appearance, I guess you're just overthinking it and assuming I'm trying to trick you? I think I'll just make a different character if that's alright with you.
Hey Ennuis, if it has been this complicated for a CS to get approved, then I would rather you not submit another sheet. My instincts are telling me that this game just won't workout for you and if you submit another CS, I would hate for that one to be a waste of time for you. So take this as a good try. You wouldn't be the first person I've rejected for this game.
 

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