ANNOUNCEMENT: Preparations for Episode 5

Walker, R

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Welp, it is official: Lars is D rank after all. His powers are minimal: sometimes he gets flashes of things going on in other versions of earth,which give him insights into better ways to do things here in the AEGISverse. This effectively gives him an intellectual capacity slightly beyond normal humans. Obviously no visions will have any plot implications; in game, he is not even sure he's not just crazy. Mostly this is an attempt to satisfy ManicMuse ManicMuse and Syrenrei Syrenrei 's concerns that he can't possibly have the insights necessary to be the villain Baltimore deserves. Partly this also addresses an old concern welian welian had about how he could have fooled commonwealth into thinking he had powers. Finally, this gives some excuse for a tiny bit of judicious 4th wall breaking, but only with plausible deniability.

I look forward do leading some of 108's finest on a merry chase in the near future.

MAGNUSSON, L


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So, Kate is still hung up in the approvals process, even though at least three people gave approval previously and nobody gave any feedback other than AllHailDago AllHailDago who thought she was the bees knees.

Could anybody who has not gone to the announcements thread in discord please make time to do so and post approvals so we can start moving the story?

In case anyone missed Kate the first time, or wants to review her without digging back through the thread, I will post her again:

BARRETT, K.


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HART, L.

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CASAN, S.

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FARRAR, P.

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CALLOWAY, S.

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Lioness075 Lioness075

Hey,

So I am looking this over. Keep in mind I am tired, but I am not going to have time for this tomorrow so bare with me.

Wounds: If Scarlet suffers a wound in either an animal form or her human form, shifting becomes a tedious and extra painful process for her. If she shifts, the wound will worsen and take even longer to heal. She doesn't have the ability to heal any faster than a human would, so she has no extra benefits to shifting into an animal when wounded. Once she is injured enough to require hospitalization, Scarlet will automatically shift back into her human form until she has recovered well enough to shift again.

Pain Tolerance: While this is extraordinarily helpful for managing the pain of shifting forms, Scarlet oftentimes will not realize she's been injured in a fight until either someone points it out to her or the fight ends.

These two kind of contradict one another. I would like to remove Pain Tolerance. I feel its a stretch and pushes for a jack of all trades type deal. I get where you were going with it but I feel its over kill and not a limitation.

Beyond that, I feel the stats need to be reworked. Her health is crazy high for abilities. I get her power is about physical change but its does not give her extra super health and ability to not be wounded. Let's face it, normal women have survived child birth for decades. When you have to endure pain you can do so even a shape shifter. I am thinking her stats may want to be shifted toward willpower, energy or something. In the same sense, I feel the animal stats are way out there. Keep in mind those are SUPER super levels youve got listed. Even my cat character is not that high on agility on that one. I would honestly lose that section all together. Are you planning to have the animal forms be super powered above that of a normal animals? If so I would make a blanket stat listing that can play to many animal types but nothing too wild. If we can get that all tweaked, I have no issues approving her.

CALLOWAY, S.

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I don't wanna touch it. o.o Sorry but I have no idea what Weli is looking for with this type of character. I mean he looks okay but I think we should get with Teh Frixz Teh Frixz and see what the bar is for this type of character. If she approves, I approve. If that works?

PETROVICH, B


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I don't understand half of it but he has my stamp of approval. I know Sin and Weli also signed off on him so he is officially Approved in my book. Necessity4Fun Necessity4Fun could you please update the spread sheet? ^_^


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Marsolet, L.


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BECKETT, V
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KINGSTON, H.

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ROUSSEAU , E.


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RADFORD, S.


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CROSS, J


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Hey,

So I am looking this over. Keep in mind I am tired, but I am not going to have time for this tomorrow so bare with me.





These two kind of contradict one another. I would like to remove Pain Tolerance. I feel its a stretch and pushes for a jack of all trades type deal. I get where you were going with it but I feel its over kill and not a limitation.

Beyond that, I feel the stats need to be reworked. Her health is crazy high for abilities. I get her power is about physical change but its does not give her extra super health and ability to not be wounded. Let's face it, normal women have survived child birth for decades. When you have to endure pain you can do so even a shape shifter. I am thinking her stats may want to be shifted toward willpower, energy or something. In the same sense, I feel the animal stats are way out there. Keep in mind those are SUPER super levels youve got listed. Even my cat character is not that high on agility on that one. I would honestly lose that section all together. Are you planning to have the animal forms be super powered above that of a normal animals? If so I would make a blanket stat listing that can play to many animal types but nothing too wild. If we can get that all tweaked, I have no issues approving her.
I'll take out the pain tolerance and edit the health stat a bit, but even Welian liked my adding the animal stat sheets to the CS. That idea had tons of approval. I can modify the stats to be less super-ish, but you're the first person to say that's not a good idea. I do not feel comfortable scrapping it entirely because one person says it's no good. Now, I understand you're in charge this week and do not want to come across as disrespectful with my wording. But I know Welian was really enjoying the addition of these stat sheets when I was working on them last week since she was active at the time, too.
 
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I have edited Scarlet's CS with the following:

Her health stat is now at 3 and I have added the removed stat points each to Willpower and Energy.

The Pain Tolerance limitation has been removed.

Each animal form stat set has been modified so that they are considered E Ranks each, but with slightly exceptional stats per their strongest ability. Except for the corgi and guinea pig, who are both ridiculously clumsy IRL, so I did not give them any exceptional skills lol (though, the corgi should get a special 'cute' skill to overwhelm the easily amused types).
The guinea pig has a 2 in agility because those furballs can be surprisingly fast when they want to.
 
All looks good to me.

I think there was two votes needed on this one so we will make it official.

Gus Gus can you look over the changes and give us a thumbs up?

I have edited Scarlet's CS with the following:

Her health stat is now at 3 and I have added the removed stat points each to Willpower and Energy.

The Pain Tolerance limitation has been removed.

Each animal form stat set has been modified so that they are considered E Ranks each, but with slightly exceptional stats per their strongest ability. Except for the corgi and guinea pig, who are both ridiculously clumsy IRL, so I did not give them any exceptional skills lol (though, the corgi should get a special 'cute' skill to overwhelm the easily amused types).
The guinea pig has a 2 in agility because those furballs can be surprisingly fast when they want to.
 
I approve also.

I don't think energy is really germane to this power, but I will let it slide. Maybe Welian can weigh in when she gets back over whether that is necessary. (Dropping it to one would still have her in A rank territory, but would potentially free up a point to stay E rank with slightly better overall stats for some animal forms.)

I'd like to see a treatment of some D rank level forms, like a lion or an elephant, but those don't need to hold up approval.

We can negotiate stats for stronger forms individually while the story moves forward.

I would get started on those as you are able though Lioness075 Lioness075 with maybe a rule of thumb not to exceed 15 points, and not to go beyond 4 in any stat.

But that's a story for another day. For now, I say go for it!
 
I approve also.

I don't think energy is really germane to this power, but I will let it slide. Maybe Welian can weigh in when she gets back over whether that is necessary. (Dropping it to one would still have her in A rank territory, but would potentially free up a point to stay E rank with slightly better overall stats for some animal forms.)

I'd like to see a treatment of some D rank level forms, like a lion or an elephant, but those don't need to hold up approval.

We can negotiate stats for stronger forms individually while the story moves forward.

I would get started on those as you are able though Lioness075 Lioness075 with maybe a rule of thumb not to exceed 15 points, and not to go beyond 4 in any stat.

But that's a story for another day. For now, I say go for it!
I totally would love to look into those forms sometime. Maybe next week after my next drill is over and I have more time to focus on it. I think my first D Rank form will be a peregrine falcon. Next could be a cheetah.
 
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He's coming. Soon.

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I totally would love to look into those forms sometime. Maybe next week after my next drill is over and I have more time to focus on it. I think my first D Rank form will be a peregrine falcon. Next could be a cheetah.

One thing I noticed but forgot to mention: Your power is listed as photographic memory, which seems... odd?

In addition to my previous notes please pretend I had also said: "Change Photographic Memory (which is already in talents tab so you need not mention it here) to something like Beastform or Metamorphic Biology."

Thank you for pretending like Grandpa Gus doesn't have a mind like a sieve...
 
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Aid seems pretty decent, I might take a look at the stats when you've declared them fixed.
I've mostly just noted grammar mistakes, as well as a couple of inconsistencies and only one thing I'd call a larger problem, with his personality. It's all within the quote, bold and red.
 

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