Fantasy Alpha: The First OOC

[Yhmera]

Mine is half typed out haha finishing this morning!

Oh I can't wait to see what you come up with!
And I won't be surprised if we are all in very different timezones. ^^

Baryonray
About the same lol.
I've woken up the past few days feeling brain dead. XP

 

[Dgjkbfx]

My first post is rather lengthy! I hope you're all okay with this. Seraph is there anything you class as too long? Do you prefer shorter responses?

 

[Seraph Darkfire]

Nah, go as big as you want. I've written short stories for opening posts before

 

[Seraph Darkfire]

TwoBitMatthew I'm thinking that there is an age limit for this program, around twenty one or so. It is also limited by offenses which is why your character would limit themselves to petty theft vs harder stuff.

 

[Dgjkbfx]

Posted. Let me know what you think

 

[Dgjkbfx]

I enjoyed writing it

 

[TwoBitMatthew]

TwoBitMatthew I'm thinking that there is an age limit for this program, around twenty one or so. It is also limited by offenses which is why your character would limit themselves to petty theft vs harder stuff.

ok sounds good.

 

[TwoBitMatthew]

Posted. Let me know what you think

I liked it, you are quite a good writer

 

[Dgjkbfx]

I liked it, you are quite a good writer

Thank you!

 

[TwoBitMatthew]

No problem

 

[Yhmera]

*reads over all the introduction posts* hmm... I really need to improve. XP
There is alot of talent here!

 

[Seraph Darkfire]

Alright, one more intro post and then I can make the post to move the story forwards and bring the characters together.

 

[jrink]

*reads over all the introduction posts* hmm... I really need to improve. XP
There is alot of talent here!

Honestly yea, ya'lls posts really made me try to up my game cx

 

[TwoBitMatthew]

*reads over all the introduction posts* hmm... I really need to improve. XP
There is alot of talent here!

I really need to improve lol.

 

[Dgjkbfx]

I enjoyed reading everyone's intros! We have a nice varied group

 

[Dgjkbfx]

It's been a fairly long time since I've written much! I really enjoyed doing my intro and was worried I would struggle haha

 

[Yhmera]

I understand. But I think you did beautifully LunaRose. So did everyone else!

 

[Dgjkbfx]

Couldn't agree more it's an exciting story!

 

[TwoBitMatthew]

I am excited on how this is going to turn out, I wonder how our characters will meet and interact with each other.

Luna you did really good and Elora sounds cool af.

 

[Dgjkbfx]

And thank you Yhmera!

 

[Dgjkbfx]

Thank you Matthew I'm looking forward to them all interacting too. It'll be interesting to see all of their backgrounds coming together. I'm glad we all went for something different. I really like the idea of the at risk program!

 

[TwoBitMatthew]

Yeah lol, its going to be a good coming of age story for heroes. And no problem.

 

[Baryonray]

Going to post tonight. Sorry for the delay all, it's hard making time w/ work projects.

I keep debating between an upper class snob that has to tangle w/ his newfound empathy, or a working class kid that already cares but has been too mistrusting/afraid to act on it (wants to get out of their situation via college and is afraid of getting in trouble, doesn't trust people, etc.). They'd start getting braver & more willing to put themselves at risk to act on it.

 

[Yhmera]

Baryonray
Oh hard choice. Roll a dice! odd the first one Evens the second. XD

 

[Dgjkbfx]

Going to post tonight. Sorry for the delay all, it's hard making time w/ work projects.

I keep debating between an upper class snob that has to tangle w/ his newfound empathy, or a working class kid that already cares but has been too mistrusting/afraid to act on it (wants to get out of their situation via college and is afraid of getting in trouble, doesn't trust people, etc.). They'd start getting braver & more willing to put themselves at risk to act on it.

I like the upper class idea as thats different to what we have and it's always a good character transition seeing them start to empathize with people