Mother Trucking Dragons!!
nah for reals that was pretty epic though
OK excellent all good to know.Some things you'll need to consider:
While Mcrae touched on it before, mentioning her sight, she doesn't often make things even or proper. I would like to make bullets too, but she doesn't even realize that one eye doesn't work properly. That is something he's going to have to explain to her and show her for her to start creating proper bullets.
I also want him to basically adopt her, I've created this story to do that. Just know, for some time, she'll still be stand offish. She grew up in a family where parents became obsolete by the time they were 10 and were only there to teach. Sometimes a nymph needs to let out steam with a fight, other times she just needs a good, somewhat forced, nap. She wasn't much allowed to have emotions either.
The big corporation fight has a lot more in it than you realize, A LOT more, which not only helps them gain a better fatherly/daughterly bond, but continues to world build.
And, yeah, she wants to get revenge with him...