Opinion A Little Help For a High School Senior?

[LeniousStorm]

Hey guys!

So, it's that time of year for me. Filling out good old scholarships for college! Yay....not. I'm needing a bit of help. I was wondering if any of you would like to help me out at all? It's simple really, just not simple enough for my stupid brain! >_<

For one of these scholarships, it asks for personal goals. They want a paragraph of my goals in life. I have so many goals with my life, but I don't know if they care enough for them at all? I listed that I would like to go to college, earn an M.D., and pursue a career as a psychiatrist. These are just my career goals. I have other goals. Such as having a large family when I'm older, and moving to the state of Ohio. Would these matter enough to throw into my paragraph? Like I said, I listed that I would like to go to college, earn an M.D., and pursue a career as a psychiatrist. This only gives me two sentences, and that, my friends, is not a paragraph.

What do you guys think? Should I throw in my goal of having a large family and living in Ohio?
Did you guys have any other suggestions of goals I havn't thought of?

Any help would be appreciated!
Thanks!
-Leniousstorm

 

[farewell]

With things like this, I'd stick to mainly your career goals, but I'd discuss them too. Why is this your goal? How will college help? etc. You could throw in a tidbit about your personal goals too - you are a whole person, after all, not just a prospective student - but my guess is that an academic institution is a little more interested in your career or academic goals, so I'd put most of the emphasis there.