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  1. Azo

    Story Goji's Writing Test Bench (Feedback Welcomed :D)

    Having the Red Demon leave instead of fighting would be a brilliant move indeed. The third chapter would then make completely clear, beyond any reasonable doubt, that he is a rounded up character, with both strengths and flaws. You are certainly right when pointing out that weaknesses do not...
  2. Azo

    Story Goji's Writing Test Bench (Feedback Welcomed :D)

    This is pretty good man. You made an amazing job at showing the extremely harsh and cruel living conditions of the protagonist. The action scene was well structured and intense, and the tortured inner world of the protagonist is perfectly portrayed. Some parts made me genuinely uncomfortable...
  3. Azo

    Introduce Yourself!

    Greetings and salutations! I answer to the name of Azo, even though you may call me by any other non-offensive appellative. I count with a rather limited, but existent, roleplaying experience. However, I can pledge to try my best and spare no effort to make my roleplaying as acceptable as...
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