(( I hope it's not in bad taste to write another short story in this thread. It's just great creative exercise! ))
A shadow followed them home.
The wind howled slowly in the boy's ear. In his hand, his little sister's small fingers embraced his own, webbed in a tight knot of affection...
It was quiet, for a moment. The soft humming of the semi-malfunctioned bedside lamp had now begun to fade. The soft white noise of crackling electricity had abruptly stopped into a miserable silence, and the soft breeze that once whistled outside had disappeared.
The once gentle-faced child...
Sounds good! I imagine a warrior entering the ring in literal hand-caged chastity, finally being released, only to go nuts in the midst of battle. I've changed my character as well, in reference to the late Mayan conch boxers.
Character Sheet(s) W.I.P
Combatant -
Name: Dean Kan
Sex: Male
Age: 32
Appearance: Dean is a tall, grizzled figure. Rising to a formidable 6'5" at 110 kilos, this man is a solid block of vascular muscle; his body a monument to his dedication to combat. Dean is of mixed ethnicity; olive...
In all honesty, all of them sound like spectacular ideas! Honestly, if you asked me to choose between them, I wouldn't be able to give you a valid decision. Your taekwondo character gives me some shotokan vibes - a real protagonist type. Seems like a decent flat-arced character that can be...