Hi all, hope you're all good! Just wanted to let you know in advance that I'll be abroad for 3-4 weeks between July and August so might find it hard to post :) Should be good for the rest of June / mid-late August though!
Ingvar Sindram
- Seeker of the Maker -
With a nod of gratitude at Carn and Violet's words of affirmation (and not withholding a smile at the joy evident on Maggie's face), Ingvar rose from his hunched position.
'Then I shall be pleased to guide you to our mutual destination,' he said.
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Ingvar Sindram
- Seeker of the Maker -
Once again, the old priest's long years of observing those under his care did not miss Maggie's harried expression as her gaze flitted to the flintier mien of her companions. This being the case, he half-expected the next words that came from the young...
Heya, I know we wanted to wrap things up in this round of posts (if not, I apologise) but should I just post Ingvar performing a Miracle or something to alleviate concern from the rest of the party?
Ingvar Sindram
- Seeker of the Maker -
Ingvar gave a rippling laugh in full reassurance that he had spoken in jest. 'No need for apologies, dear sister, 'tis but an old man's teasing, pay it no heed,' he said to the priestess - now known to be Maggie - with a half-apologetic smile. 'It is a...
I'm truly sorry everyone, I've had a bit of a meltdown and ended up bedridden after trying to finish too many things that needed doing all at once - my fault entirely for overestimating my capacity in a very grim month for work! I'll have recovered enough to put out a post this weekend to get...
I agree with what Chordling said above, so I won't repeat them! Below are my suggestions:
Might be effective to have this on a single, separate paragraph.
Comma after mistake?
The use of London as a measuring unit is quite striking, immediately making the reader think this takes place in...
Happy to wrap it up in my next post - that said, I'm not sure how well I can presume on Ingvar's knowledge of this part of the mountains, as he's been dropped somewhere new. Should I say that he knows exactly where they are and can use his map to take them to where he thinks the dragon-hunters...
II.
Dear Father,
Thought you should know that I had a slight panic this morning because of you. I saw some smoke coming off a chair in the garden and thought it had caught fire in the sun. Then I realised was just really that cold last night that the sun was causing the ice on the chair to...
I think I visited a library once in university to get a feel for what it was like to RP in a school setting where people made responsible life choices. Don't know if that counts?
In all seriousness, I do love taking inspiration from past travels to places like US colleges and Japan (both of...
Yeah, I definitely did not do the exact opposite of what you implied I might have definitely done.
... but I posted!
@Kaerri just to clarify, in case it wasn't obvious enough, in the last line Ingvar is being pretend-serious and is actually poking fun at the fact that Maggie introduced...
Ingvar Sindram
- Seeker of the Maker -
Ingvar would not begrudge the priestess the warmth of a welcoming smile of his own at the sight of her coming forward to greet him with such unaffected delight. He did, however, wonder whether his imagination presumed upon the breath of tension he thought...
I.
Dear Father,
I had that leftover croissant for breakfast today. I left it out on the counter for like, nearly the whole day yesterday because I was waiting for it to cool down and have it as a snack later but I totally forgot about it. I put it in the fridge overnight and it was tough as...
Great - sounds like fun! Looking forward to making a character who just wants to run a food cart and has abysmal combat stats except for the one obscenely high knife skill level from cooking all day
I'd love to play a cook-type character! A fun RP with flexible response times seems just like the kind of thing I'm looking for right now :) Just wanted to ask, is this within the SAO universe or is it a universe that's styled like SAO? My knowledge of that particular world is pretty bleak haha
I agree with high school over college, as well as Emeraude's point about having more than romantic motivations.
An idea for something you could do to make it more viable for a group roleplay is to create more than one type of 'fangirl' all competing for the same guy for others to play (e.g. a...