Howdy! Brainygrrrrl here! Looking for villains to play against my Batgirl(Barbara Gordon). 1x1 rp would be ideal but would be open to a small group in which case both villains and heroes would be welcome! (Nightwing anyone? :))
Rules and Requisites:
1)Strictly PG-13, fellas. More...
Name: Alexander 'Lex' Luthor
Nicknames\Aliases: Lex, Lexie, Lexie-Pooh (only Mercy calls him this and only when they're alone)
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Species: Human
Appearance:
Personality: A complete and total narcissist. Dresses really well and likes to think of himself...
Name: Alexander 'Lex' Luthor
Nicknames\Aliases: Lex, Lexie, Lexie-Pooh (only Mercy calls him this and only when they're alone)
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Species: Human
Appearance:
Personality: A complete and total narcissist. Dresses really well and likes to think of...
Character Sheet:
Name: BARBARA GORDON / BATGIRL
Nicknames\Aliases: BABS, BEANIE, BAR-BRAIN, BANG-GIRL, BRATGIRL
Age: 16
Gender: FEMALE
Appearance:
Long red hair, normally worn in a ponytail. Green eyes. Wears glasses. ...
Ra's is accepted! :) I'm sending you an invite to the group chat PM. Please stop by and say Hi! Also, we need to figure out a way to get Ra's into the story. ;)
Hey Jefferson! I added you to the group chat PM. Come on over and say hi to everyone when ya get the chance! And again, welcome aboard! Really great to have ya! :D
Better! Do me a favor. Find some other way to describe the League so you don't have a sentence that reads " He eventually trained a League of Assassins, known of the League of Assassins" and do a final proofread to fix any grammar/spelling issues. It's getting really late for me so I won't be...
Penguin
"Oh, no offense taken!" he assured her. "Insults have a way of just rolling off me! They're nothing but pathetic little jabs made by inferior, jealous little worms! And I must say, Ivy," he responded teasingly, "I'm shocked that you would think I would overlook a detail, no matter...
Good beginning but needs some work. Here are a few quick suggestions:
Concerning his age, never say you don't know something about your character. It's your character which means you should know everything about your character. And even if you don't know, pretend that you do. Remember...
"Her fans definitely had a "type." Pastel hair, nose piercings, dark lipstick, and unhealthily pale. Die-hard, feminist looking women. What did they call themselves? Social justice warriors? Honestly, Ivy felt that all these bogus bohemian babies hadn't the slightest idea how to protest."...
Also, another concern of mine- With magic, it's easy to make your character overpowered. In a fight, he could be throwing up energy shields and all sorts of things that would make him basically invincible. So, I need very clear parameters and limits to his power so that one of Batman's...