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    Poetry I wrote you some flowers

    I can't trust a single word from the person who gave a like react to me posting the lyrics to Old Town Road
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    Poetry I wrote you some flowers

    this is an affront to everything I have created in all media I am a failure as an artist and as a human being
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    Poetry I wrote you some flowers

    @Swift_Phoenix how dare you like react that poem
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    Poetry I wrote you some flowers

    I'm going to take my horse to the old town road I'm gonna ride until I can't no more.
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    Poetry I wrote you some flowers

    Before you Nobody told me I matter And now Nobody does
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    Digital Maloney's Gaming Projects

    Here's a story flowchart for the demo (with all the birds) Of course, the story beats are blocked up with green squares, but it consists of 2 primary endings with one hidden ending. One of the primary endings is far more streamlined (with a minimum of only 7 beats from start to end) and is...
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    Poetry I wrote you some flowers

    Hey, just making sure y'all know there are no girls allowed on this thread. If you are a girl and you are looking at this thread know that you are stinky and have germs.
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    Music Could someone help me please?

    A musician needs help in LEGO City! When it comes down to the nitty-gritty of composition, you should always start by studying. I'm a music educator, and the number one thing I was taught in music composition classes was to study. Study your theory. Study your scales. Study your instrument...
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    Request Visual Novel: Chronicle of Beast [need demo testers!]

    Unfortunately, I'm having trouble downloading your demo from RPN. I'm not really sure what the problem is, there just isn't a download button. Could you try attaching the zip as a file attachment (not inside a spoiler but attached to the post) or maybe making a google drive link?
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    Story Laura ( a sort of Caroline story)

    An interesting start, but I recommend you proofread it a little more. The language is kind of hard to follow and is a little bland. If you want some tonal inspiration, Neil Gaiman's original Coraline. Gaiman likes to cut straight to the punch (sometimes a little too much), and I feel like with...
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    Story Editing Fiction Work : Scratch my back and I'll scratch yours! :)

    I'm an arts student with a fairly solid background in creative writing and a previous job as a professional non-fiction writer, I can give your stuff a lookie-loo @SaltyPuppy.
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    Digital Maloney's Gaming Projects

    As for the music, I was originally going to hire out somebody who was much more qualified. But, as times are tight, I had to take it upon myself to make something. After several attempts to come up with original music, I used little arrangements of Zelda music as placeholders. It wasn't until...
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    Poetry I wrote you some flowers

    too long you've been looking for a plane to fly when all you need to do to fly is spread your wings
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    Digital Maloney's Gaming Projects

    This is Bull Eagle. He just wants to fly, and you need a plane off of this island if you want to go home. The problem is that his plane is in a pile on the beach and is missing some parts. Why doesn't he use his wings? Nobody knows. EDIT: And here's what spending a little more time on a doodle...
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    Digital Maloney's Gaming Projects

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    Digital Maloney's Gaming Projects

    oh god what has happened to the project where did zelda go what have I been doing all these weeks????? what? where's link? where's ganonononan? what's this video that's on my youtube channel? So, yeah, I got sidetracked. Really sidetracked. The Zelda stuff is about 80% complete, but all of...
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    Poetry I wrote you some flowers

    There’s a rainbow singing in the harmony of the Wabash In that tender I III IV And those low low basslines Which hum like the wind on the prairies.
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    Poetry I wrote you some flowers

    I beat against the waves with weathered hands and broken oars but I keep rowing as I sing you to sleep. The ocean is cold and empty and beats me back like a broken heart but I keep rowing as I see your face in the sunshine. You're across the ocean and I'll never reach you rowing with broken...
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    Poetry I wrote you some flowers

    Tawny paints on memory's canvas: Scenes that I hold dear. I recall them in days after; clearly they appear. A vision fair I see: I know there'll always be The moonlight fair tonight upon the Wabash; From the fields there comes the breath of new-mown hay. Through the sycamores, the candlelights...
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    Poetry I wrote you some flowers

    There will come soft rains and the smell of the ground, And swallows calling with their shimmering sound; And frogs in the pools singing at night, And wild plum-trees in tremulous white; Robins will wear their feathery fire Whistling their whims on a low fence-wire; And not one will know of...
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