DarknessSama17
A star can't shine without darkness
"Kariah-Belle... My love don't do this." The woman pleaded. "You'll make an enemy of the village! Of me!"
Kariah-Belle stared at the woman who gave birth to her through one eye. The blackness surrounding the gold diamond that seemed to glow in the darkness. Flames licked at the midnight sky as they ate away at the anbu storage room. Kariah-Belle felt slightly satisfied at what she had done only moments ago.
"Mother." Kariah-Belle spoke trying hard not to let her voice crack. "They sent Rygilya to his death. I won't just stand by and let the Riakage get away with that! I refuse to be a pawn in this twisted game any longer!"
Kariah-Belle outstretched her hand. "Come with me mom. We can run away. We could escape." She said softly.
Kariah-Belle's mother gave her a pained look as tears flowed. She said nothing.
Kariah-Belle retracted her hand. Tears now flooded from her eyes as well. "Then you are my enemy too." She said in an eerily calm voice. "If you don't kill me now, I'll return to destroy this village and you along with it."
Kariah-Belle could see the hurt on her mother's face as she looked away. Kariah-Belle stared at her. Pain racking her heart. She couldn't turn back though. She had steeled herself.
For her brother.
It was then that Kariah-Belle heard yelling. It wouldn't be long before the lapdogs of the riakage showed up.
"So be it." She turned to leave. "Farewell mother."
With that Kariah-Belle disappeared into the darkness. She wiped her tears as she gripped her mother's forbidden scroll.
(This was just a short intro for a Naruto rp as to why my character ran away. I could really use help improving it. Should I add more? I was told it seemed too forced and didn't paint the scene. Anyone willing to help? I'm currently working on a novel and any feed could prove beneficial in the long run. Thanks a ton!)
Kariah-Belle stared at the woman who gave birth to her through one eye. The blackness surrounding the gold diamond that seemed to glow in the darkness. Flames licked at the midnight sky as they ate away at the anbu storage room. Kariah-Belle felt slightly satisfied at what she had done only moments ago.
"Mother." Kariah-Belle spoke trying hard not to let her voice crack. "They sent Rygilya to his death. I won't just stand by and let the Riakage get away with that! I refuse to be a pawn in this twisted game any longer!"
Kariah-Belle outstretched her hand. "Come with me mom. We can run away. We could escape." She said softly.
Kariah-Belle's mother gave her a pained look as tears flowed. She said nothing.
Kariah-Belle retracted her hand. Tears now flooded from her eyes as well. "Then you are my enemy too." She said in an eerily calm voice. "If you don't kill me now, I'll return to destroy this village and you along with it."
Kariah-Belle could see the hurt on her mother's face as she looked away. Kariah-Belle stared at her. Pain racking her heart. She couldn't turn back though. She had steeled herself.
For her brother.
It was then that Kariah-Belle heard yelling. It wouldn't be long before the lapdogs of the riakage showed up.
"So be it." She turned to leave. "Farewell mother."
With that Kariah-Belle disappeared into the darkness. She wiped her tears as she gripped her mother's forbidden scroll.
(This was just a short intro for a Naruto rp as to why my character ran away. I could really use help improving it. Should I add more? I was told it seemed too forced and didn't paint the scene. Anyone willing to help? I'm currently working on a novel and any feed could prove beneficial in the long run. Thanks a ton!)