Original Characters

JesterTheSheep

A Jester in space
(subject to updates)
This is where I will be keeping a list of my original characters, or OCs. Got questions? Got comments? Fire away.

Name: Lucius Heydrich

Alias: Anthropoid (literal translation: Human-like)

Age: 22

Gender: Male

Race: Human

Appearance:
Usually wears a dress shirt, jeans and coat.

Personality: Lucius is a sadist in his own right. He enjoys inflicting pain – at least, when called for. He tends to avoid people, but when he does encounter someone he deems friendly, he opens up a little more, showing his sense of humor and rather friendly aura. When angered, he seems to lose his humanity – and he’s perfectly aware of this. The reason behind this is unknown.

Backstory: Lucius is subject to hatred and blame on a daily basis since he was 12, primarily due to his last name, which belonged to his great - grandfather, Reinhardt Heydrich, known for butchering hundreds of thousands of people during WWII. Though he claims to have inherited his title as “the butcher,” anyone who can get close enough to him will see otherwise.

Notes:
Lucius is always armed. He carries a pistol in his coat pocket at all times, though he rarely feels entitled to use it.
Lucius has a “questionable” emotional state. Medical experts theorize this was due to abuse or a past trauma, but he refuses to share.
Lucius has a hefty inheritance, but still works part time at a local bar to make a little extra, and to make him feel less sheltered.
Very rarely will Lucius show signs of illness or pain. He has a tendency to hide his pain, saying “I don’t want your pity.”
Lucius lives alone. He has no siblings, and claims pets are too much responsibility.

any and ALL advice is appreciated!
 
I’d add a bit more to his personality, myself. You’ve explored one or two of his traits, all of which are along the same lines, but maybe...I don’t know, humanise him? I know he’s not supposed to be particularly human, but even just a few quirks can really round out a character.

Other than that, love it <3
 
I’d add a bit more to his personality, myself. You’ve explored one or two of his traits, all of which are along the same lines, but maybe...I don’t know, humanise him? I know he’s not supposed to be particularly human, but even just a few quirks can really round out a character.

Other than that, love it <3
Noted and realized, my friend! I'll keep this in mind. He's long overdue for a bit of tampering anyway.
 

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