Futuristic The Undesired Wings Of Eden CS

Interest Check: The Undesired Wings Of Eden *Reboot*
Lore: The Undesired Wings Of Eden Lore
OOC: Cesspool
Main Thread: The Undesired Wings Of Eden *Reboot*
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Name:


Nickname:


Age (16+):


Race (Normal or Winged):


Gender:


How many years as a member?(The Undesired Wings have been around for about 9 years):


Appearance (no pictures here. A description of hair, height, weight,things like that):


Outfit (optional. If you choose to include one, remeber this is a dystopian future, and to include a mask. This protects your identity when in the heavier patrolled districts)


Wings (picture is allowed here):


Pass or Fail? (Did you pass or fail the trials? You can leave this blank until I post the lore):


Personality:


Preferred Weapon/ any current weapons:


Preferred fighting style:


Skills/Talents (at least three):


Fears:


Weaknesses:


Strengths:


Likes (at least three):


Dislikes(at least three):


Bio(optional):


Mannerisms (habbits, things they do like nail bitting):


Extra:


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Name: Bethany Romanov


Nickname: Roman


Age (16+):


Race (Normal or Winged): Winged


Gender: Female


How many years as a member?(The Undesired Wings have been around for about 9 years): 2 years


Appearance (no pictures here. A description of hair, height, weight,things like that): Hair- dyed and curled (sometimes gets a weave)
Height- 5 feet and 9 inches
Eyes- Brown
Skin- Mocha
Body- Slim but with a bump in her stomach

Outfit (optional. If you choose to include one, remeber this is a dystopian future, and to include a mask. This protects your identity when in the heavier patrolled districts)

She still likes to look stylish


Wings (picture is allowed here):


Pass or Fail? (Did you pass or fail the trials? You can leave this blank until I post the lore):


Personality:


Preferred Weapon/ any current weapons: Sai and assault rifle.


Preferred fighting style: MCMAP (marine fighting style)


Skills/Talents (at least three):


Fears:


Weaknesses:


Strengths:


Likes (at least three):


Dislikes(at least three):


Bio(optional):


Mannerisms (habbits, things they do like nail bitting):


Extra: When I mean her body type looks like this. I love her to bits.


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Name: Blade Garrish


Nickname: Drakiel


Age (16+): 24


Race (Normal or Winged): Normal


Gender: Male


How many years as a member?(The Undesired Wings have been around for about 9 years): None


Appearance (no pictures here. A description of hair, height, weight, things like that): Blade has short red hair, is 5' 6", weighs 120 pounds, has a muscular and slim body type


Outfit (optional. If you choose to include one, remember this is a dystopian future, and to include a mask. This protects your identity when in the heavier patrolled districts)

Wings (picture is allowed here): None


Pass or Fail? (Did you pass or fail the trials? You can leave this blank until I post the lore):


Personality: Chilled, layed back, level-headed


Preferred Weapon/ any current weapons:
Has a second sword that is blue

Preferred fighting style: fast- pace


Skills/Talents (at least three): Can use Dusk Shells (will be explained later), if he can focus hard enough can hear bullets mid-air,


Fears: Losing fights, and seeing people being killed


Weaknesses: Sometimes overuses his abilities and pushes himself too hard


Strengths: Good shot, great strategist, and overall good fighter


Likes (at least three): Ramen, guns, and training


Dislikes(at least three): Loud and annoying people, prideful and overconfident people, and incomplete work.


Bio(optional): Not right now but I will have one


Mannerisms (habits, things they do like nail biting): Has a habit taking apart and building guns.


Extra: None


Theme: None

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Name: Bethany Romanov


Nickname: Roman


Age (16+):


Race (Normal or Winged): Winged


Gender: Female


How many years as a member?(The Undesired Wings have been around for about 9 years): 2 years


Appearance (no pictures here. A description of hair, height, weight,things like that): Hair- dyed and curled (sometimes gets a weave)
Height- 5 feet and 9 inches
Eyes- Brown
Skin- Mocha
Body- Slim but with a bump in her stomach

Outfit (optional. If you choose to include one, remeber this is a dystopian future, and to include a mask. This protects your identity when in the heavier patrolled districts)

She still likes to look stylish


Wings (picture is allowed here):
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Pass or Fail? (Did you pass or fail the trials? You can leave this blank until I post the lore):


Personality:


Preferred Weapon/ any current weapons: Sai and assault rifle.


Preferred fighting style: MCMAP (marine fighting style)


Skills/Talents (at least three):


Fears:


Weaknesses:


Strengths:


Likes (at least three):


Dislikes(at least three):


Bio(optional):


Mannerisms (habbits, things they do like nail bitting):


Extra: When I mean her body type looks like this. I love her to bits.

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I'll go ahead an tell you that the only think yiu need to change so far is her wings. They Winged have bird like wings, mostly dark in color, but there are a few who have lighter colored wings.

Name: Edgar 'Ed' J. Stockholm

Nickname: Handyman

Age (16+): 30

Race (Normal or Winged): Formerly winged, now cyborg

Gender: Male

How many years as a member?(The Undesired Wings have been around for about 9 years): 8.5

Appearance (no pictures here. A description of hair, height, weight,things like that):

• Hair Color:
• Eye Color:

Outfits:

Spoiler: Casual

Spoiler: Mission Gear

Mask:


Wings (picture is allowed here): None.

Pass or Fail: Fail. His x is marked on the side of his neck

Personality:

Preferred Weapon/ any current weapons:

Preferred fighting style: Due to cybernetic enhancements, Edgar is the master at ten different forms of martial arts.

Skills/Talents (at least three):

• Brilliant mechanic and technician
• Crack shot
• Amazing cook

Fears: Snakes

Weaknesses:

Strengths:

Likes (at least three):

Dislikes(at least three):

Bio(optional): TBR

Mannerisms (habbits, things they do like nail bitting): Twirls things in his fingers (bullets, pens, pencils, etc.), listens to music on missions, more to come.

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Name: Dakota Tran
Nickname: Dakota, Tiger, Normie
Age (16+): 28
Race (Normal or Winged): Normal
Gender: Male
How many years as a member?: Just joined last week
Appearance: Dakota stands at about 6’2, rather tall and rather muscular, with a face of that from Korean parents. His hair is blond, but if one would look closely, one may be able to determine that it has been dyed. On his chest, there’s a nasty scar running down his chest, with some stitches and a few scars that look like bullet wounds. Additionally, both of his arms are tattooed, left side with a tiger and the other with a butterfly.
Outfits:
Casual Gear: Usually wears a black hoodie with a ballistic vest and t-shirt underneath, fingerless gloves, as well as carrying around a backpack. His lower body consists of black cargo pants with various pockets and boots as well as knee-pads and a leg strap puch.
Combat Kit: He goes a bit lighter, usually wearing a T-shirt and cargo pants, but still with a ballistic vest and this time with a utility webbing as well as his backpack, knee pads, and leg bag pouch. His mask is dark blue, usually wears it normally too, and has an earpiece for communications.

Wings: None
Pass or Fail?: N/A
Personality: One may think Dakota is a silent, serious, cold, maybe even introverted killer, at least those who don’t get to know him. He’s actually relatively chill about most thinks, and like to converse with people on a wide number of topics. Many can describe him to be a pissimisste when everyone else is an opptomist and a opptomist when everyone is a pissimist. Dakota is also described to be grounded in reality, one that aims high, but expects to hit lower. Though, in combat he’s much more serious, always calling out things he sees and having the backs of those he fights with. He does not tolerate needless killing, and will step in if something of the sort happens, though regular violence is something Dakota can accept. Dakota doesn't much talk about his past, though if one may gain his trust he may yet revel it.
Preferred Weapon/ any current weapons:

• 9mm Pistol + Silencer
• .357 Magnum Revolver
• Rechargeable Taser Pistol
• Remington CRS + Scope + Silencer + bipod
• AK-47 or MP5 or Remington 870 (All fitable with modifications, including forward grip, red dot sight, under barrel attachments, etc)
• Black Market Weapons(Can acquire common firearms at a moment's notice, but heavier weapons may take some time)
• Police Shock Retractable Baton
• Combat Knife
• Smart Phone
• Grenades
• Belt mounted grappling hook

Preferred fighting style: Prefers long ranged combat, mostly gunfights at any range. Though, don’t underestimate him in close quarters. Most of his approach to fighting seems to resemble those of special weapons teams in the city.
Skills/Talents:
Sniper- Quite the deadly shot, even more so with a scope. Is capable of snapshotting as well.
Firearms Expert- A catch all phrase for all weapons with a trigger, from shotguns to smgs to assault rifles, this man knows how to maintain and operate them all.
Hand-to-Hand- Deadly in take downs and grappling, and easily disarm an opponent if he has to.
Demolitionist- Explosives is one of the thing Dakota can bring the table, whether building his own or using existing ones. The grenades he has all have unique properties, such as emp or Molotov.
Hacker/Tech whiz- Good with computers, can access most security systems through conventional or unconventional methods.
Counter-Insurgent/Covert-Ops Tactics- Dakota seems to have a deep understanding on how the authorities operate, and is even keener on how to use that information against them.
Fears:

• Senseless Murder...by his hands
• Something in where the dead are buried...

Weaknesses:
Harm not the Innocent- Not one to hurt anyone who don’t have it coming, no matter what the side, he’ll even intervene if someone does try to harm the innocent.
Just Another Human Scumbag- Not exactly trusted amongst the folks he works with, as he is only a normal human, even if his intentions are pure. This creates a problem where he may not get all details of every operation.
Mystery Man- No one knows where Dakota came from, leading to much suspicion amongst the winged people, as he is not one to revel where he came from.
Never Forget…- There’s something that eats away at Dakota, something that happened awhile ago...
Strengths:

• Commando
• Weapons Expert
• Tactics and Strategy
• Connections around the city

Likes:

• Guns
• Drinks
• Tactical Training and Strategizing
• Bar games(Darts and pool)
• Browning his phone
• Candy
• Spicy Food

Dislikes:

• Drugs
• Police Special Weapons Team
• Police Chief
• Thugs
• The media

Bio: No one knows who Dakota Tran came from, but one or two people have suggested that he seems a bit similar to an officer. A special forces police officer too, who died tragically in a gunfight between the police and winged a while ago….least that’s what the media said happened. Problem is, the man was presumed to be dead, and there are a lot of features of Dakota that look nothing like the officer's, least at first glance...
Regardless of who Dakota’s past, one day the man wandered into the Undesired base, claiming he wanted to join them. Those at the gates turned away, suspicious of how well armed he was, saying something along the lines of “unproven”. The next day Dakota returned, with him was one of the Undesired own members, caught a few days ago and supposedly being scheduled to be executed. Dakota was able to disturb the convoy and extract said member from right under the authority's noses. After that, there was no qualms about if he was qualified or not. Though, they is still suspicion laid against him.
Mannerisms: Has a tendency of checking his weapon, if ain't’ doing much he could be disassembling it to clean it. Sometimes when Dakota is idle, he’ll also play with his knife, or chew gum, or browse his phone. In his free time, he likes to perch on top of high places so he can mildly observe passing activity, or just workout.
Extra:

• Has connections around the cities, including personal connection with black market weapons dealers and information vendors above ground.
• Has specialized ammunition for all his weapons, though they are low in quantity.

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Elekta Kount said:

"My reasons are my own...

...but let's just say I want to do the right thing."

-Dakota Tran​

Name: Dakota Tran
Nickname: Dakota, Tiger, Normie
Age (16+): 28
Race (Normal or Winged): Normal
Gender: Male
How many years as a member?: Just joined last week
Appearance: Dakota stands at about 6’2, rather tall and rather muscular, with a face of that from Korean parents. His hair is blond, but if one would look closely, one may be able to determine that it has been dyed. On his chest, there’s a nasty scar running down his chest, with some stitches and a few scars that look like bullet wounds. Additionally, both of his arms are tattooed, left side with a tiger and the other with a butterfly.
Outfits:
Casual Gear: Usually wears a black hoodie with a ballistic vest and t-shirt underneath, fingerless gloves, as well as carrying around a backpack. His lower body consists of black cargo pants with various pockets and boots as well as knee-pads and a leg strap puch.

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Combat Kit: He goes a bit lighter, usually wearing a T-shirt and cargo pants, but still with a ballistic vest and this time with a utility webbing as well as his backpack, knee pads, and leg bag pouch. His mask is dark blue, usually wears it normally too, and has an earpiece for communications.

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Wings: None
Pass or Fail?: N/A
Personality: One may think Dakota is a silent, serious, cold, maybe even introverted killer, at least those who don’t get to know him. He’s actually relatively chill about most thinks, and like to converse with people on a wide number of topics. Though, in combat he’s much more serious, always calling out things he sees and having the backs of those he fights with. He does not tolerate needless killing, and will step in if something of the sort happens, though regular violence is something Dakota can accept. Dakota doesn't much talk about his past, though if one may gain his trust he may yet revel it.
Preferred Weapon/ any current weapons:

• 9mm Pistol + Silencer
• .357 Magnum Revolver
• Rechargeable Taser Pistol
• Remington CRS + Scope + Silencer + bipod
• AK-47 or MP5 or Remington 870 (All fitable with modifications, including forward grip, red dot sight, under barrel attachments, etc)
• Black Market Weapons(Can acquire common firearms at a moment's notice, but heavier weapons may take some time)
• Police Shock Retractable Baton
• Combat Knife
• Smart Phone
• Grenades
• Belt mounted grappling hook

Preferred fighting style: Prefers long ranged combat, mostly gunfights at any range. Though, don’t underestimate him in close quarters. Most of his approach to fighting seems to resemble those of special weapons teams in the city.
Skills/Talents:
Sniper- Quite the deadly shot, even more so with a scope. Is capable of snapshotting as well.
Firearms Expert- A catch all phrase for all weapons with a trigger, from shotguns to smgs to assault rifles, this man knows how to maintain and operate them all.
Hand-to-Hand- Deadly in take downs and grappling, and easily disarm an opponent if he has to.
Demolitionist- Explosives is one of the thing Dakota can bring the table, whether building his own or using existing ones. The grenades he has all have unique properties, such as emp or Molotov.
Hacker/Tech whiz- Good with computers, can access most security systems through conventional or unconventional methods.
Counter-Insurgent/Covert-Ops Tactics- Dakota seems to have a deep understanding on how the authorities operate, and is even keener on how to use that information against them.
Fears:

• Senseless Murder...by his hands
• Something in where the dead are buried...

Weaknesses:
Harm not the Innocent- Not one to hurt anyone who don’t have it coming, no matter what the side, he’ll even intervene if someone does try to harm the innocent.
Just Another Human Scumbag- Not exactly trusted amongst the folks he works with, as he is only a normal human, even if his intentions are pure. This creates a problem where he may not get all details of every operation.
Mystery Man- No one knows where Dakota came from, leading to much suspicion amongst the winged people, as he is not one to revel where he came from.
Never Forget…- There’s something that eats away at Dakota, something that happened awhile ago...
Strengths:

• Commando
• Weapons Expert
• Tactics and Strategy
• Connections around the city

Likes:

• Guns
• Drinks
• Tactical Training and Strategizing
• Bar games(Darts and pool)
• Browning his phone
• Candy
• Spicy Food

Dislikes:

• Drugs
• Police Special Weapons Team
• Police Chief
• Thugs
• The media

Bio: No one knows who Dakota Tran came from, but one or two people have suggested that he seems a bit similar to an officer. A special forces police officer too, who died tragically in a gunfight between the police and winged a while ago….least that’s what the media said happened. Problem is, the man was presumed to be dead, and there are a lot of features of Dakota that look nothing like the officer's, least at first glance...
Regardless of who Dakota’s past, one day the man wandered into the Undesired base, claiming he wanted to join them. Those at the gates turned away, suspicious of how well armed he was, saying something along the lines of “unproven”. The next day Dakota returned, with him was one of the Undesired own members, caught a few days ago and supposedly being scheduled to be executed. Dakota was able to disturb the convoy and extract said member from right under the authority's noses. After that, there was no qualms about if he was qualified or not. Though, they is still suspicion laid against him.
Mannerisms: Has a tendency of checking his weapon, if ain't’ doing much he could be disassembling it to clean it. Sometimes when Dakota is idle, he’ll also play with his knife, or chew gum, or browse his phone. In his free time, he likes to perch on top of high places so he can mildly observe passing activity, or just workout.
Extra:

• Has connections around the cities, including personal connection with black market weapons dealers and information vendors above ground.
• Has specialized ammunition for all his weapons, though they are low in quantity.

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Your picture isn't working, otherwise, great.

FireMaiden said:

Your picture isn't working, otherwise, great.

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Which picture? Cause I can see all three.

Elekta Kount said:

Which picture? Cause I can see all three.

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The one you're using for your appearance. While its there, on my screen it's very tiny in the top right corner. It might just be because in on my phone though.

Yeah, it's becaue ya on a phone.

Elekta Kount said:

Yeah, it's becaue ya on a phone.

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Hmm, well, I'm guessing your character also looks like the man in the picture for his combat clothes?

Alright, Safety Hammer Kirby3178 and lassassin I need you guys to finish up your characters because in going to start the to within the next few hours.

Name: Sven McKullen


Nickname: None


Age (16+): 17 (turning 18 soon)


Race (Normal or Winged): Winged


Gender: Male


How many years as a member?(The Undesired Wings have been around for about 9 years): Just starting out, a couple months in.


Appearance (no pictures here. A description of hair, height, weight,things like that):


Outfit (optional. If you choose to include one, remeber this is a dystopian future, and to include a mask. This protects your identity when in the heavier patrolled districts)

Shirt

Pants and shoes

Mask

Wings (picture is allowed here):
Just plain brown with some spots. Much like an owls.


Pass or Fail? (Did you pass or fail the trials? You can leave this blank until I post the lore): Has yet to take it. Entered the Wings of Eden to try and pass the test.


Personality: Sven is a technical genius, and is more than capable of quickly learning how to operate advanced technology or programs. He is also an intensely private person, often needing some measure of personal space and has a hard time bonding with others. He has often some anxiety towards the trials that are upcoming and chooses to focus on other aspects of his life. Very perceptive of others though.


Preferred Weapon/ any current weapons: Collapsible Wu shu staff



Preferred fighting style: Jujitsu and Taekwondo


Skills/Talents (at least three): Tech savvy, self taught gymnast and easy to disguise himself. He can also mimic voices to bypass some security for info.


Fears: Wings being ripped off, being caught. Trusting others and thunderstorm.

Weaknesses: Unable to fully trust others, anything technological. His wings and family.


Strengths: Hacking and making gadgets, great hearing and agility.


Likes (at least three): Technology, eating, stars, attaining new information.


Dislikes(at least three): Normies, hiding, any bad weather.


Bio(optional): TBA


Mannerisms (habbits, things they do like nail bitting): Staring off or intently on someone. Fidgeting when someone invades his space. Mumbles when he is tinkering.


Extra: Wears a backpack with things both near and dear to him and tools, gadgets of the likes.



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The main thread is up by the way

Name: Steve Freeling


Nickname: Steven (by his wife; technically it's his real name, but only she calls him Steven), Stevie (by a few friends)


Age: 35


Race: Normal


Gender: Male


How many years as a member?: 7


Appearance:
Steve is 6' 3½", meaning he is quite tall. He weighs 186 lbs., which is a healthy weight for someone of his height. His short hair is dark brown and his eyes are blue. He is considerably hairy.


Personality:
Steve is friendly and believes in treating others fairly. Due to having come from a family of sympathizers, it's unsurprising that Steve himself is one. He can be very persuasive and/or intimidating, which he has used a number of times to get information for the Winged and help them hide, as well as to throw authorities off the scent. He is mostly calm, even when angry or scared and he's always brave, maybe even heroic.


Preferred Weapon/ any current weapons:



Preferred fighting style: Whatever keeps himself alive and the other person from killing him. He prefers to be armed unless the other person isn't, seeing the latter scenario as unfair.


Skills/Talents (at least three):
Persuasion and Intimidation
Swimming
Sharpshooting
Fist-fighting

Fears:
Snakes


Weaknesses:
He lets his emotions bottle up and never tells even his wife until she makes him tell her.


Strengths:
Calm in Stressful Situations
Ambidextrous (Except for writing. He's only good at that in his right.)
Physically Strong
Brave


Likes (at least three):
Wife
Kids
Honesty
Fairness


Dislikes(at least three):
Cowards
Dishonesty
Unfairness
The current treatment of the Winged


Bio:
Steve grew up in a family of sympathizers living in the residential district, the most important lessons he learned from his parents being "Love your neighbor as yourself," and "Treat others the way you wish to be treated." Steve lives by these words that helped make him who he is today. He decided that when he grew up, he would help change the situation in whatever way he could. At 28 years old, after 6½ years of marriage and three kids, he heard about the Undesired and seeing his chance, he joined.


Mannerisms:
He chews his tongue when he's bored.


Extra:
Don't lie to him. There will be consequences.


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FireMaiden

Eternal_Cookie said:

Name: Jaiden
Nickname: War-Child
Age: 17
Race: Formerly Winged
Gender: Female
How many years as a member?: None
Appearance: Jaiden stands at roughly 5'5" feet tall standing a little bit below average height, she weighs in at 105 lbs making her a true lightweight, despite her lack of weight her body is covered in muscles fitting her fighting style. Jaiden has a high muscle density despite her lack of height this suits her well. Jaiden's hair is a cold black night sky while her eye color is the opposite being as golden as the sun in the sky, she has light freckles running across her face.
Outfit:
-Outfit with Mask-

Wings:

Pass or Fail?: Jaiden Failed the trails hard and had her wings ripped off barely escaping with her life.
Personality: Jaiden is Closed off from others, she prefers life on her own its easier despite her young age and lack of innocence she acts like an adult and can usually fool most people. Jaiden is silent not talking to anyone for a couple of years she has lost her ability to be normal in social settings and because of this she barely has any friends.
Preferred Weapon/ any current weapons: Brass Knuckles
Preferred fighting style: Kickboxing
Skills/Talents:​

Hand to Hand Combat
Light of her Feet
Agile
Fears:
Silence
Betrayal
Death
Weaknesses:
Her Back Covered in Scar's that never healed.
Lack of Confidence
Her Frame
Strengths:
Small
Determined
Mean Right Hook
Likes:
Fighting
Blood
Rebels
Dislikes:
Weaknesses
Peace
Kindness
Bio: TBD
Mannerisms: Punching the wall
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One thing is the fact that she would have to be a year older in order to take part in the trials. And they wouldn't rip her wings because she failed, they give you an x scar somewhere on your body.

So close lol one minute lemme polish it up FireMaiden

Mkay FireMaiden made the necessary changes

There ya go. Shes good.

Eternal_Cookie said:

Mkay FireMaiden made the necessary changes

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