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Fantasy Natural Selection (Fantasy/Open)

that's why i took Atraxia completely out inside of making him just continue to watch over but invisible, I don't wanna accidentally make someone stuck till sunday with me ;-;
 
"We will never get out of the forest!!" yells Jass as he chops down every tree in sight.


I'm sure we could probably still drag people,who haven't posted in a while, in the story without then having to do anything. Also recapping is the best we could to keep everyone on track.
 
was that supposed to be funny? "bow" to the dog of wisdom? "bow wow"? Ba dum tsss
 
Sheaon13 said:
"I have nothing to do with this!" Callous shouted.
"Yes he is not with us, more like we have a contract out on him. You've heard of us yes? We're the Dark Souls" Ryu smirked, he found his target, suddenly an arrow coming from from the trees pierced Callous's head, killing him instantly.
......what
 
@Sheaon13


I think she means that your post doesn't really make sense... Elaborate on it. It moves a bit too quickly, and it's difficult to understand.
 
@Sheaon13


Well, first off, what do you mean by "He is not with us"? Who is "he"?


Secondly, where in Christ's name did the random arrow come from? Ryu ought to know, so you could elaborate on where the fuck that came from. The other characters might not know, but be sure to give the actual RPers some insight as to what's going on.


Third, killing the knight may ignite a battle between the two groups...


You're moving too quick, dear. You have a tendency to do that. Slow down, have patience, and elaborate on your posts.
 
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@Sheaon13


Basically, re-read your posts before you post them and ask yourself, "If I post this, will my fellow RPers understand what I mean by this, what's going how, how it happened, where my character is, etc.?" You may see it in your head, but you need to put that image on here so that we can see it, too. We can't read your mind.
 

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