Waywards

Just to offer you some help here, you might want to throw a little more into the world (*U*) You know what I am saying? Perhaps create Gods and Goddesses for players to play with, and get a little more in depth with your system. For instance, begin to cover a vaster majority of what the colors are, what they're capable of, thrown in an interesting backstory here or there, and really let the entire things just blow up your notification (o'v'o)
 
ChristinaXIV said:
Just to offer you some help here, you might want to throw a little more into the world (*U*) You know what I am saying? Perhaps create Gods and Goddesses for players to play with, and get a little more in depth with your system. For instance, begin to cover a vaster majority of what the colors are, what they're capable of, thrown in an interesting backstory here or there, and really let the entire things just blow up your notification (o'v'o)
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Thanks for the tip. But I'm not sure what else to do...
 
Sorry, I guess I should be more specific.


Should I create more god/esses or more places or a map or what?
 
Get in depth with your story. Here, let me re-read and then offer some.


Okay, develop a much more in-depth plot. Who do you see as the villain in this gran tale, who are the heroes? What sort of disadvantages and advantages come with being either or.
 
Not a problem :) I am actually quite interested in this, should it gather a little more depth, I'd be more than willing to join.
 
Aha... that Overview is looking much better...
 
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