minismurf
The very small smurf
Fixed it, I thinkLazygout said:
Demon Wars
- Thread starter Kirara
- Start date
Kirara
Meow
Alright @minismurf you can put the scythe into powers and then start posting! You're accepted.
Lord Bradorian
Naughtius Maximus
I was scrolling through and you sound rather like Toph with the whole metal bending thing. Haha.ArtySox said:Name: Kiya Flamefoot
Description:
She has long fluffy elf ears as well as a tail with a little hair tuft at the end(similar to a lions tail). She also has sharp fingernails and a higher agility and speed to humans.
Age: 17
Race: Animalistic-Earth/Nature
Sexuality: Heterosexual
Crush/Mate: none
City of birth: Tsuri
Current City: Chaski
Faction: None
Occupation: Mechanic
Personality: Kiya may be smart when it comes to machinery but she is a complete fail when it comes to the social side of life. She is hyperactive and load but can spend days on her own working and talking to only the machines around her. Her colleagues often wonder if she is crazy as she treats inanimate objects like people and when it comes to real people she is about as socially awkward as a turtle. She is the optimistic type that never gets put down by failing however she can be very childlike and is never professional.
Animals can be found all over her work station as she makes friends with any animal she meets and feeds any animals that come into her work space to 'keep her company', she is faster and more agile than the average person however she is about as clumsy as clumsy can be so people never see her as a threat and she doesn't see herself as one.
History: Kiya was born in the treetop city of Tsuri in a large and loving family were she was the 7th of 10 unruly children. Her family is nothing special, middle-class peaceful citizens who caused no more trouble then the daily mischief of many offspring. Her father worked as a 'Repair Man' of Tsuri's common-folk while her mother worked as a tailor. Kiya followed in her fathers footsteps and soon discovered her love for fixing and building objects and inventing new and exciting products.
When Kiya turned 15 a man from Chaski who owned a machine factory saw her at work and asked for her to be part of his working team back in his home city. Kiya took the opportunity and now works as a mechanic in Chaski were she fixes machinery and designs the latest and greatest to further the upcoming future.
Likes/Dislikes:
+snow
+sweets
+animals
-rules
-formal wear
-her stuff being touched
Powers/Abilities:
Her animalstic nature makes her faster and more agile than the normal human.
She can metal bend thanks to her earth power heritage that runs in the family.
She has a bond with animals and they tend to follow her around and do as she asks.
Weaknesses:
Clumsy as all hell
Rather stupid when it comes to other people
About as gullible as gullible gets
Doesn't take note of her surroundings at all
Other: None
ArtySox
Fluffy Fluff Fluff
That was were I got the metal bending idea ^^KurtH6355 said:
Lord Bradorian
Naughtius Maximus
Haha, I figured.ArtySox said:
Morbuskid
See past the darkness, and view the light.
Here to join?KurtH6355 said:
or you still wanna try and revive that series becuase last me and you left off you were sitting in hell bleeding out from when ripped your chest open xD . Your still alive you just need stitches.
yumiyukifan1
ஐ ♛The Guardian of Duckies♛ இ
Name: Mystiss
Description:
Age: 16
Race: Shifter
Sexuality: straight
Crush/Mate: ???
City of birth: Chaski
Faction: None
Personality: Mystiss is cold and tough, her heart is unable to love anyone or anybody. She's stubborn and harsh. Form 1 is the most quietest form, where she cannot be able to talk, nor make a sound. She is more pessimistic and negative than her other forms. Form 2 can talk, but her voice sounds monotonous and her eyes never blink. Form 2 is the more optimistic side.
History: She never knew what happened to her parents for a long time. Her memories of them are just a blur so she grew up with her Uncle as her guardian. He toughened her up with high discipline and hatred. Over the years, Mystiss became cold and bitter like him. She was taught by a ruthless brute who killed many. Later on when he died, She used all the bitter things to become stronger. All the happy moments were fantasies for her. There was no such thing. When someone uses the word love, she cringes and tries to walk away from it. Her Uncle forbids words of compassion and love. So Mystiss never uses them. There is no such thing as love in her dictionary. When she grows older, she tries to stay out of people's way and they try to stay out of hers. If someone asks her about her past, she tries to get away from them as fast as possible because she doesn't know and doesn't want them to know either. Many rumors stated that they died from a gasoline fire or from being a torture toy. But her Uncle knows the truth and even if the world collapses, he would never tell the truth.
Likes/Dislikes:
~Ice
~Water
~Uncle
~Sweets
~Power
~Pity
~Mercy
~Death
Powers/Abilities: Mystiss is able to transform into her two forms, Both are deadly
Form 1: Mystiss has a two different eye colors from her original one. The red one can detect life forms and heat. The blue can sense fear and the aura around her. Her speed is really quick and can kill in an instant. Form 1 has shorter hair for faster speed, long hair puts weight on your head and gets in your face. The dark wings on her back are there only if she needs to glide, it's not too common that she will use them. Her speed helps her to outrun enemies and kill them too. She equips long claws with sharp blades. It's damage can cause a deep scar anywhere.
Form 2: Mystiss equips a large two handed blade taller than her. The weight of the sword is underestimated by many, it is very light weighted. Her headphones shape as horns is perfect for hearing things far away and blocking out other sounds. Dull eyes and expression are perfect for yielding the blade. The blade cannot be controlled if you put too much of your mind onto it.
Weaknesses: Whenever her uncle wants her to stop, he'll do something terrible to her, Such as striking her eyes. Her eyes are the most sensitive place in her body. Without it, Mystiss would become weak and blind and lost. If you strike it or hit it at all, she'll fall instantly. Another weakness is that her mind is unstable. Transforming into and back can affect her personality and sometimes her brain malfunctions. This only happens when she's used Form 1 and Form 2 too long. She blacks out for a while. If she's used too much, it'll take longer for her to get to consciousness, If it wasn't too long, She'll wake up in about 2-3 days. Her body shuts down because it needs to rest from the mass energy of her two transformations.
Other: ???
Description:
Age: 16
Race: Shifter
Sexuality: straight
Crush/Mate: ???
City of birth: Chaski
Faction: None
Personality: Mystiss is cold and tough, her heart is unable to love anyone or anybody. She's stubborn and harsh. Form 1 is the most quietest form, where she cannot be able to talk, nor make a sound. She is more pessimistic and negative than her other forms. Form 2 can talk, but her voice sounds monotonous and her eyes never blink. Form 2 is the more optimistic side.
History: She never knew what happened to her parents for a long time. Her memories of them are just a blur so she grew up with her Uncle as her guardian. He toughened her up with high discipline and hatred. Over the years, Mystiss became cold and bitter like him. She was taught by a ruthless brute who killed many. Later on when he died, She used all the bitter things to become stronger. All the happy moments were fantasies for her. There was no such thing. When someone uses the word love, she cringes and tries to walk away from it. Her Uncle forbids words of compassion and love. So Mystiss never uses them. There is no such thing as love in her dictionary. When she grows older, she tries to stay out of people's way and they try to stay out of hers. If someone asks her about her past, she tries to get away from them as fast as possible because she doesn't know and doesn't want them to know either. Many rumors stated that they died from a gasoline fire or from being a torture toy. But her Uncle knows the truth and even if the world collapses, he would never tell the truth.
Likes/Dislikes:
~Ice
~Water
~Uncle
~Sweets
~Power
~Pity
~Mercy
~Death
Powers/Abilities: Mystiss is able to transform into her two forms, Both are deadly
Form 1: Mystiss has a two different eye colors from her original one. The red one can detect life forms and heat. The blue can sense fear and the aura around her. Her speed is really quick and can kill in an instant. Form 1 has shorter hair for faster speed, long hair puts weight on your head and gets in your face. The dark wings on her back are there only if she needs to glide, it's not too common that she will use them. Her speed helps her to outrun enemies and kill them too. She equips long claws with sharp blades. It's damage can cause a deep scar anywhere.
Form 2: Mystiss equips a large two handed blade taller than her. The weight of the sword is underestimated by many, it is very light weighted. Her headphones shape as horns is perfect for hearing things far away and blocking out other sounds. Dull eyes and expression are perfect for yielding the blade. The blade cannot be controlled if you put too much of your mind onto it.
Weaknesses: Whenever her uncle wants her to stop, he'll do something terrible to her, Such as striking her eyes. Her eyes are the most sensitive place in her body. Without it, Mystiss would become weak and blind and lost. If you strike it or hit it at all, she'll fall instantly. Another weakness is that her mind is unstable. Transforming into and back can affect her personality and sometimes her brain malfunctions. This only happens when she's used Form 1 and Form 2 too long. She blacks out for a while. If she's used too much, it'll take longer for her to get to consciousness, If it wasn't too long, She'll wake up in about 2-3 days. Her body shuts down because it needs to rest from the mass energy of her two transformations.
Other: ???
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KyanoTzoker
Puts the Herp in Derp
Name: Jack Anudros (an'-oo-dros)
Description: His uniform is that shown in this here picture, worn on duty and generally by default unless otherwise specified. Casual clothes are casual; long black pants, black boots shined carefully, and a neat and presentable off-white 3/4 sleeve shirt. He will usually wear his uniform out of both formality and (, consequently,) habit.
Thin, short light brown hair, light brown eyes, stands at 6'1" with a thin build topped by broad shoulders.
Age: 19
Race: (Primarily) Fire Demon, partial Nature/Earth Demon
Sexuality: Bisexual All'a the hetero up in here
Crush/Mate: N/A
City of birth: Suna
Faction: Suna Military Command
Personality: Jack is a person with a strong foundation of self-esteem. My point is not that he is egotistical, far from it; but that he is far from being afraid of confrontation. Nor of challenges, being wrong, or admitting it when he is. In times when he is working in seriousness, he will become devoted to efficiency and logic. He is one to watch and mentally calculate, and outside of serious situations he's happy to engage in shenanigans. He is quite easily a simple and lively nineteen year-old at many times, and if there is no significant damage done in doing so, he may be charitable, generous, and forgiving. He goes between professional aspiring military strategist and silly young adult male regularly.
Outside of this ridiculously vague description, in social situations he will be down to earth, speaking his opinion if necessary though careful with his words, respectful and kind to all, and free of unwarranted judgment. He goes by actions over words, and takes communication at face-value.
History: His parents both serve in the military and so he simply follows their path, not feeling any strong calling elsewhere. As a child he liked organising things, toys, rocks, be it by size, colour, or weight. Getting older and playing with the other children, particularly sports, he loved being the strategist. Jack took to the task like a bird to the wind. Being successful at the job, he was respected amongst the children; something that carried through to the present time amongst his peers. Though he obviously has his abilities of fire and slight ability with nature, his mind and organisational skills have always been his strong point.
After the grueling grunt exercises Jack quickly turned to the strategy side of things within the military, and his talent was soon recognised. He was boosted through those ranks at a faster pace than his comrades, and he is otherwise training to further his strategic command abilities.
Likes/Dislikes:
- Good company
- Honesty
- Healthy feet
- Pasta
- Doing stupid fun stuff occasionally
- Arrogance, overt selfishness
- Seafood
- Lack of individuality
- Lack of basic respect
- Lack of spirit
Powers/Abilities: General Fire Casting - Jack is able to cause the various particles in the vicinity to vibrate furiously and thus ignite (my science game is not solid), further control where the subsequent fire goes, and with how much force and volume. With more detail:
Bouts/Columns
: A sort of 'projectile' mode of his fire control, he can direct a bout of flames in any given direction, and control them to the point of doing fancy stuff like coiling around, giving them a form (e.g.: snake [
not
its own entity]) and whatnot. Not necessarily always used as a 'bullet', such as with the snake example.
Superheated Zones
: He can create zones, varying in size and intensity, that will be incredibly heated, depending. A small area, say a meter cubed, he can maintain at a temperature of ~200C for an hour*; a moderate area of 2 tennis courts at an ambient temperature of 100C for an hour*, and a large area of a football field at a sweaty 40-45C for an hour*.
Accelerated Growth/Healing: He has the ability to very mildly increase the growth speed of say a plant, or aid a small bit in healing wounds of any sort. Obviously the more significant and/or complicated the wound, the less impact he'll have. Fully focused, a regular paper cut in his wake will completely disappear in perhaps an hour.
Mind*: Perhaps not a power, and technically more of an ability, strictly speaking; Jack has a well exercised logical and strategic mind, command of armies seems to be his way to go within Suna's military, and his mind is being trained for just that.
Weaknesses: Brawn: Though Jack has had armed personnel training upon entry to the military, he is no physical weapon of mass destruction. Hand-to-hand combat is not is forte, and so he generally stays at a distance to use his fire. Equipped with a small blade however, he will attempt to put up a (preferably short) fight if necessary.
Getting Tired: As his main defense is his fire abilities, to completely fend for himself, he will get tired quickly. The superheated zones he can create mentioned above can be very taxing. The aforementioned example of 2 tennis courts' worth at water's boiling point for an hour would leave him exhausted and barely able to produce a spittle's worth of fire. Hours can be spent with occasional good ol' bouts/columns, but obviously, the more intense, the more tiring. Once tuckered out, Jack is more or less useless.
Excessive Noise: A strategist needs room, time, and peace to think. Persistent loud noise will at first render Jack's ability to think hindered, and if continued, debilitated.
Smell: Unfortunate genes leave him with a bad sense of smell.
Other: N/A
yay
I'm a little concerned about his 'superheated zones' ability, measuring the time, volume and intensity within the use of it will have to be carefully done to avoid being OP. To combat that I'll try and avoid using it intensely for any period of time longer than 'incredibly short'.
It'll also be interesting to see how he'll go, then, being largely a brain as opposed to brawn.
BUT HERE HE FINALLY IS! god that was tedious
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Kirara
Meow
Accepted!KyanoTzoker said:Name: Jack Anudros (an'-oo-dros)
Description: His uniform is that shown in this here picture, worn on duty and generally by default unless otherwise specified. Casual clothes are casual; long black pants, black boots shined carefully, and a neat and presentable off-white 3/4 sleeve shirt. He will usually wear his uniform out of both formality and (, consequently,) habit.
Thin, short light brown hair, light brown eyes, stands at 6'1" with a thin build topped by broad shoulders.
Age: 19
Race: (Primarily) Fire Demon, partial Nature/Earth Demon
Sexuality: Bisexual All'a the hetero up in here
Crush/Mate: N/A
City of birth: Suna
Faction: Suna Military Command
Personality: Jack is a person with a strong foundation of self-esteem. My point is not that he is egotistical, far from it; but that he is far from being afraid of confrontation. Nor of challenges, being wrong, or admitting it when he is. In times when he is working in seriousness, he will become devoted to efficiency and logic. He is one to watch and mentally calculate, and outside of serious situations he's happy to engage in shenanigans. He is quite easily a simple and lively nineteen year-old at many times, and if there is no significant damage done in doing so, he may be charitable, generous, and forgiving. He goes between professional aspiring military strategist and silly young adult male regularly.
Outside of this ridiculously vague description, in social situations he will be down to earth, speaking his opinion if necessary though careful with his words, respectful and kind to all, and free of unwarranted judgment. He goes by actions over words, and takes communication at face-value.
History: His parents both serve in the military and so he simply follows their path, not feeling any strong calling elsewhere. As a child he liked organising things, toys, rocks, be it by size, colour, or weight. Getting older and playing with the other children, particularly sports, he loved being the strategist. Jack took to the task like a bird to the wind. Being successful at the job, he was respected amongst the children; something that carried through to the present time amongst his peers. Though he obviously has his abilities of fire and slight ability with nature, his mind and organisational skills have always been his strong point.
After the grueling grunt exercises Jack quickly turned to the strategy side of things within the military, and his talent was soon recognised. He was boosted through those ranks at a faster pace than his comrades, and he is otherwise training to further his strategic command abilities.
Likes/Dislikes:
- Good company
- Honesty
- Healthy feet
- Pasta
- Doing stupid fun stuff occasionally
- Arrogance, overt selfishness
- Seafood
- Lack of individuality
- Lack of basic respect
- Lack of spirit
Powers/Abilities: General Fire Casting - Jack is able to cause the various particles in the vicinity to vibrate furiously and thus ignite (my science game is not solid), further control where the subsequent fire goes, and with how much force and volume. With more detail:
Bouts/Columns
: A sort of 'projectile' mode of his fire control, he can direct a bout of flames in any given direction, and control them to the point of doing fancy stuff like coiling around, giving them a form (e.g.: snake [
not
its own entity]) and whatnot. Not necessarily always used as a 'bullet', such as with the snake example.
Superheated Zones
: He can create zones, varying in size and intensity, that will be incredibly heated, depending. A small area, say a meter cubed, he can maintain at a temperature of ~200C for an hour*; a moderate area of 2 tennis courts at an ambient temperature of 100C for an hour*, and a large area of a football field at a sweaty 40-45C for an hour*.
Accelerated Growth/Healing: He has the ability to very mildly increase the growth speed of say a plant, or aid a small bit in healing wounds of any sort. Obviously the more significant and/or complicated the wound, the less impact he'll have. Fully focused, a regular paper cut in his wake will completely disappear in perhaps an hour.
Mind*: Perhaps not a power, and technically more of an ability, strictly speaking; Jack has a well exercised logical and strategic mind, command of armies seems to be his way to go within Suna's military, and his mind is being trained for just that.
Weaknesses: Brawn: Though Jack has had armed personnel training upon entry to the military, he is no physical weapon of mass destruction. Hand-to-hand combat is not is forte, and so he generally stays at a distance to use his fire. Equipped with a small blade however, he will attempt to put up a (preferably short) fight if necessary.
Getting Tired: As his main defense is his fire abilities, to completely fend for himself, he will get tired quickly. The superheated zones he can create mentioned above can be very taxing. The aforementioned example of 2 tennis courts' worth at water's boiling point for an hour would leave him exhausted and barely able to produce a spittle's worth of fire. Hours can be spent with occasional good ol' bouts/columns, but obviously, the more intense, the more tiring. Once tuckered out, Jack is more or less useless.
Excessive Noise: A strategist needs room, time, and peace to think. Persistent loud noise will at first render Jack's ability to think hindered, and if continued, debilitated.
Smell: Unfortunate genes leave him with a bad sense of smell.
Other: N/A
yay
I'm a little concerned about his 'superheated zones' ability, measuring the time, volume and intensity within the use of it will have to be carefully done to avoid being OP. To combat that I'll try and avoid using it intensely for any period of time longer than 'incredibly short'.
It'll also be interesting to see how he'll go, then, being largely a brain as opposed to brawn.
BUT HERE HE FINALLY IS! god that was tedious
I so sorry about taking so long to respond! In all honesty, I thought I had.yumiyukifan1 said:Name: Mystiss
Description:
Age: 16
Race: Shifter
Sexuality: straight
Crush/Mate: ???
City of birth: Chaski
Faction: None
Personality: Mystiss is cold and tough, her heart is unable to love anyone or anybody. She's stubborn and harsh. Form 1 is the most quietest form, where she cannot be able to talk, nor make a sound. She is more pessimistic and negative than her other forms. Form 2 can talk, but her voice sounds monotonous and her eyes never blink. Form 2 is the more optimistic side.
History: She never knew what happened to her parents for a long time. Her memories of them are just a blur so she grew up with her Uncle as her guardian. He toughened her up with high discipline and hatred. Over the years, Mystiss became cold and bitter like him. She was taught by a ruthless brute who killed many.
Likes/Dislikes:
~Ice
~Water
~Uncle
~Sweets
~Power
~Pity
~Mercy
~Death
Powers/Abilities: Mystiss is able to transform into her two forms, Both are deadly
Form 1: Mystiss has a two different eye colors from her original one. The red one can detect life forms and heat. The blue can sense fear and the aura around her. Her speed is really quick and can kill in an instant. Form 1 has shorter hair for faster speed, long hair puts weight on your head and gets in your face. The dark wings on her back are there only if she needs to fly, it's not too common that she will use them.
Form 2: Mystiss equips a large two handed blade taller than her. The weight of the sword is underestimated by many, it is very light weighted. Her headphones shape as horns is perfect for hearing things far away and blocking out other sounds. Dull eyes and expression are perfect for yielding the blade. The blade cannot be controlled if you put too much of your mind onto it.
Weaknesses: Whenever her uncle wants her to stop, he'll do something terrible to her, Such as striking her eyes. Her eyes are the most sensitive place in her body. Without it, Mystiss would become weak and blind and lost. If you strike it or hit it at all, she'll fall instantly.
Other: ???
Anyway, there seems to be one major issue and two minor issues. The one minor is the history. If you could just add a little more, that would be great. The major thing is that Mystiss is unbalanced. I understand that her eyes are very important, but with them being a small target, it doesn't really affect people. Please add additional weaknesses. The last thing is Form 1. It's unclear how Form 1 attacks. You say she is quick but how does that help her? Does she use blades, claws, etc? If you could edit these, it should be fine.
On a side note, maybe make the wings for gliding rather than flying. Flying puts people at a huge advantage even if they don't use it much.
yumiyukifan1
ஐ ♛The Guardian of Duckies♛ இ
I Edited it, and it's okay! Thanks for the tips! I saw what I did wrong so I added some and deleted some... tell me if there's anything else incorrect and I'll try to edit again.Lazygout said:
Kirara
Meow
Maybe just lower the damage of form 1 just a little bit more. So, just deep scars rather than tearing of limbs. Other than that, good.yumiyukifan1 said:
yumiyukifan1
ஐ ♛The Guardian of Duckies♛ இ
Got itLazygout said:
Kirara
Meow
Thank you. Accepted.yumiyukifan1 said:
Lord Anubis
A coin that landed on its edge.
Name: Kain Veilstorm
Description:
long black hair along with crimson red eyes. Palish skin with a large scar running along his spin. Physically fit body and long claws on his fingers.
Age: 60 million years old
Race: precursor vampire
undead/ nature earth
Sexuality: straight
Crush/Mate: none as of yet
City of birth: New York
Faction: none was ex american millitary
Personality: kain is used to being cruel, and cold hearted. Millitary trainung had hardened his emotions leaving him a expressionless individual. He is calculative along with percetive. Smart intelligent he act on both instinct and logic. Once open enough he might begin to care for another. Will establish friendly ties if it suites him.
History: kain was born in the times of old when humanity was on the brink of extinction. Born into a poor family he was forced into the millitary at the age of 10. He participated in the final war until again forced into genetic experimentatuon for the millitary. At the time he was only 25. It was discovered kain held genetic markers from radioactive mutation. Thus was augmented by a genetic syrome called Lazerus which re-wrote the genetic structure of life. Painfully excrutiating kain suffered several experiments each killing him, then ressurecting him. Finally he had become the bio weapon the millitary Desired. Unleashed into the war he devistated the battle field. Brainwashed he sought only to follow orders till he was put into a coma. That was when the war came to a end with the destruction of the human world. Know he rest within his eternal tomb.
Likes/Dislikes: (bullet point form)
Likes
. Blood
. killing
. death
. Girls
. Nature
. Night
. Day
Dislikes
. Hostility towerds him
. Taking from him
. Hurting his mate when he has one
. Defiance against his will/Orders
. Rude individuals
Powers/Abilities: (5 maximum)
Ghoul creation: creates ghouls up to 3 from dead corpses.
Poison cloud: releases a tiny ball, that expoldes unleashing a cloud of highly leathal gas.
Primordial form: transforms into his ultimate form increasing his power 2 fold. Rarly occurs must be triggered im a highly volatile state. Can extend by drinking life essence alot of it.
Immune to sunlight.
Super human anatomy: enhanced strength, sences, healing, agillity.(not fully sure if this counts as a power.)
Weaknesses: (Let's not make them OP. Equal to amount of powers)
Can be damaged by flames, bullets, cobalt and pure silver. Also titanium can damage him.
Other:
Description:
long black hair along with crimson red eyes. Palish skin with a large scar running along his spin. Physically fit body and long claws on his fingers.
Age: 60 million years old
Race: precursor vampire
undead/ nature earth
Sexuality: straight
Crush/Mate: none as of yet
City of birth: New York
Faction: none was ex american millitary
Personality: kain is used to being cruel, and cold hearted. Millitary trainung had hardened his emotions leaving him a expressionless individual. He is calculative along with percetive. Smart intelligent he act on both instinct and logic. Once open enough he might begin to care for another. Will establish friendly ties if it suites him.
History: kain was born in the times of old when humanity was on the brink of extinction. Born into a poor family he was forced into the millitary at the age of 10. He participated in the final war until again forced into genetic experimentatuon for the millitary. At the time he was only 25. It was discovered kain held genetic markers from radioactive mutation. Thus was augmented by a genetic syrome called Lazerus which re-wrote the genetic structure of life. Painfully excrutiating kain suffered several experiments each killing him, then ressurecting him. Finally he had become the bio weapon the millitary Desired. Unleashed into the war he devistated the battle field. Brainwashed he sought only to follow orders till he was put into a coma. That was when the war came to a end with the destruction of the human world. Know he rest within his eternal tomb.
Likes/Dislikes: (bullet point form)
Likes
. Blood
. killing
. death
. Girls
. Nature
. Night
. Day
Dislikes
. Hostility towerds him
. Taking from him
. Hurting his mate when he has one
. Defiance against his will/Orders
. Rude individuals
Powers/Abilities: (5 maximum)
Ghoul creation: creates ghouls up to 3 from dead corpses.
Poison cloud: releases a tiny ball, that expoldes unleashing a cloud of highly leathal gas.
Primordial form: transforms into his ultimate form increasing his power 2 fold. Rarly occurs must be triggered im a highly volatile state. Can extend by drinking life essence alot of it.
Immune to sunlight.
Super human anatomy: enhanced strength, sences, healing, agillity.(not fully sure if this counts as a power.)
Weaknesses: (Let's not make them OP. Equal to amount of powers)
Can be damaged by flames, bullets, cobalt and pure silver. Also titanium can damage him.
Other:
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Kirara
Meow
[QUOTE="Lord Anubis]Name: Kain Veilstorm
Description:
long black hair along with crimson red eyes. Palish skin with a large scar running along his spin. Physically fit body and long claws on his fingers.
Age: about 3 million years old
Race: precursor vampire
undead/ nature earth
Sexuality: straight
Crush/Mate: none as of yet
City of birth: New York
Faction: none was ex american millitary
Personality: kain is used to being cruel, and cold hearted. Millitary trainung had hardened his emotions leaving him a expressionless individual. He is calculative along with percetive. Smart intelligent he act on both instinct and logic. Once open enough he might begin to care for another. Will establish friendly ties if it suites him.
History: kain was born in the times of old when humanity was on the brink of extinction. Born into a poor family he was forced into the millitary at the age of 10. He participated in the final war until again forced into genetic experimentatuon for the millitary. At the time he was only 25. It was discovered kain held genetic markers from radioactive mutation. Thus was augmented by a genetic syrome called Lazerus which re-wrote the genetic structure of life. Painfully excrutiating kain suffered several experiments each killing him, then ressurecting him. Finally he had become the bio weapon the millitary Desired. Unleashed into the war he devistated the battle field. Brainwashed he sought only to follow orders till he was put into a coma. That was when the war came to a end with the destruction of the human world. Know he rest within his eternal tomb.
Likes/Dislikes: (bullet point form)
Likes
. Blood
. killing
. death
. Girls
. Nature
. Night
. Day
Dislikes
. Hostility towerds him
. Taking from him
. Hurting his mate when he has one
. Defiance against his will/Orders
. Rude individuals
Powers/Abilities: (5 maximum)
Ghoul creation: creates ghouls up to 3 from dead corpses.
Poison cloud: releases a tiny ball, that expoldes unleashing a cloud of highly leathal gas.
Primordial form: transforms into his ultimate form increasing his power 2 fold. Rarly occurs must be triggered im a highly volatile state. Can extend by drinking life essence alot of it.
Immune to sunlight.
Super human anatomy: enhanced strength, sences, healing, agillity.(not fully sure if this counts as a power.)
Weaknesses: (Let's not make them OP. Equal to amount of powers)
Can be damaged by flames, bullets, cobalt and pure silver.
Other:
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Change the age to 60 million, and add a couple more weaknesses, and you're good to go.
(Also, I see what you did there. That's Alucard (o???)
Description:
long black hair along with crimson red eyes. Palish skin with a large scar running along his spin. Physically fit body and long claws on his fingers.
Age: about 3 million years old
Race: precursor vampire
undead/ nature earth
Sexuality: straight
Crush/Mate: none as of yet
City of birth: New York
Faction: none was ex american millitary
Personality: kain is used to being cruel, and cold hearted. Millitary trainung had hardened his emotions leaving him a expressionless individual. He is calculative along with percetive. Smart intelligent he act on both instinct and logic. Once open enough he might begin to care for another. Will establish friendly ties if it suites him.
History: kain was born in the times of old when humanity was on the brink of extinction. Born into a poor family he was forced into the millitary at the age of 10. He participated in the final war until again forced into genetic experimentatuon for the millitary. At the time he was only 25. It was discovered kain held genetic markers from radioactive mutation. Thus was augmented by a genetic syrome called Lazerus which re-wrote the genetic structure of life. Painfully excrutiating kain suffered several experiments each killing him, then ressurecting him. Finally he had become the bio weapon the millitary Desired. Unleashed into the war he devistated the battle field. Brainwashed he sought only to follow orders till he was put into a coma. That was when the war came to a end with the destruction of the human world. Know he rest within his eternal tomb.
Likes/Dislikes: (bullet point form)
Likes
. Blood
. killing
. death
. Girls
. Nature
. Night
. Day
Dislikes
. Hostility towerds him
. Taking from him
. Hurting his mate when he has one
. Defiance against his will/Orders
. Rude individuals
Powers/Abilities: (5 maximum)
Ghoul creation: creates ghouls up to 3 from dead corpses.
Poison cloud: releases a tiny ball, that expoldes unleashing a cloud of highly leathal gas.
Primordial form: transforms into his ultimate form increasing his power 2 fold. Rarly occurs must be triggered im a highly volatile state. Can extend by drinking life essence alot of it.
Immune to sunlight.
Super human anatomy: enhanced strength, sences, healing, agillity.(not fully sure if this counts as a power.)
Weaknesses: (Let's not make them OP. Equal to amount of powers)
Can be damaged by flames, bullets, cobalt and pure silver.
Other:
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Change the age to 60 million, and add a couple more weaknesses, and you're good to go.
(Also, I see what you did there. That's Alucard (o???)
Lord Anubis
A coin that landed on its edge.
(There we go and yes it is he is awsome lolLazygout said:
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